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Thank you all for liking the previous part and motivating me guys. Sorry guys I am giving u my updates very late, but I am also helpless with my study, but I try writing the update whenever I get free time from study, so plz don't be mad for giving u late updates.

Anyway here is the next update.

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-DHDAJS Part 20-

Part 20

"What the..." Maan said as his eyes went on the clock and seeing the time his eyes popped out and in a jerk he sat up throwing his comforter off of him "How could I sleep till this late, and Mama didn't even came to wake me up" Maan said as he stood up. He wore his slipper and straight walked out of his room to look for Dhara.

"Mom Dad" Maan called said walking down the stair. "ye sab kahan chale gaye leaving me all alone here" He walked from one place to another till her heard a screamed which sounded like Annie, and he instantly run back up to her room and he stood still seeing her running out of her room screaming and behind her stood Arjun laughing holding his stomach. "Annie" Maan said to make her look ahead but before she could turn her head toward him she bumped into him and with a thud she fell on the floor, and seeing her face all messed up with her hair, Maan also couldn't help and joined Arjun and started laughing. "Aghhh, I hate u bahi" Annie shouted as she stood up. then she turned to Arjun and gave him a glare who in return gave her wink making her go red, and she just left from there, thinking about what just happened between them in that room.

As always Annie was humming in her room after coming out of washroom, and she was just in towel warped around her body applying lotion, and when she looked in the mirror she found Arjun standing at the door staring at her, but she just ignored it thinking it might be her illusion just like other times and again got busy with her work, while Arjun closed the door and came near her.

Arjun was just in the next room, he had came very late at night from one of his meeting and so he failed to notice that they were also here, and the only way he came to know someone else was present in this outhouse was of Annie humming, as her and Arjun room door were open so her voice went to his room and now he was standing in her room, staring at her in that just towel, first he thought it was his imagination but it wasn't, and he went toward her and before she could continue doing what she was doing Arjun holds her hand in a jerk pulls her toward himself, making Annie at first shock and when the realization struck her that he was in real, and before she could do something Arjun kissed her breathless, and when they broke the kiss to breath, Annie just screams and pushes him back and run to washroom, shutting the door on his face breaking his trance. Once she was fully dressed up she peeped out of the door to see if he was still there or not, seeing him not there she slowly came out and just as she stepped out of the washroom Arjun came from back and held her by waist and in swift turned her facing him and took her lips into his again, and after a while he left her making her scream loud this time and once again pushing him again and ran out of her room to be bumped into Maan.

As Annie left from their fuming, Arjun came to Maan still laughing and gave him a hug and said "when did u guys came here"

Maan- umm yesterday around 7 in the evening, and I thought u had a meeting to attend na then how come ur here.

Arjun- well Mr. MSK my meeting are schedule in Goa, didn't Meera told u

Maan- no

Arjun- really, she had asked me to join u guys but I told her I have meeting to attend in Goa, sooo...waittt

Maan- wahttt, oh wait she just didn't do this deliberated to make Annie

Arjun- Oh God I love her man, Meera is the best one to understand the unsaid word when it comes to feeling

Maan- teri tu nikal pari, waise why did Annie screamed

Arjun- oye saale sahab, wo hum pati patni ke beech ki baat hai" Maan raised his brows on his talk and gave him a confused look and said "where did this pati pani came in from"

Arjun- bhol gaya, Meera Vicky Marriage, "auspicious day of when boy and girl just have to exchange garlands and with the exchange of garlands they are husband and wife, tu room main i was romancing with my wife" saying that he winks at him and then says "waise I am sure Geet must be here too, tu why don't u go and romance with her, aur waise bhi she is ur legally wife na, tune uski Uncle aur pandit ji ke samne mang bhari thi, aur phir mere dare pe u exchanged the garlands with her, sooo u can go and romance with her, no one will stop u" saying that he also ran to his room before Maan could get hold of him and shows him stars in the day.

Maan stood their smiling to himself thinking about Arjun talk, and then after a while Dhara came to wake him up, but she found him like that and said "kya baat hai, uth te hi smile, hmmm lagta hai kisi bauth jo dil ke kareeb hai uske sapne deakha hai, hmm kyun" Maan gave a glare to his Mom and said "mom don't start and that too early in this morning"

Dhara- for ur kind of information Mr, MSK its not early in the morning its afternoon.

Maan- I know that

Dhara- tu who was it that u were dreaming about till this late

Maan- Mom plz stop it" saying that he left to his room, While Dhara went to her room for some work and after like 40 mins she came down only to see Arjun there and everyone was sitting around him staring at poor Arjun, who in return was giving glares to Meera for not telling him or them that they are coming to Goa, and Meera looked at Yash for help who in a time like this was supporting the family, trapping the poor soul Meera.

"So, I, no...no we thought u were going on some business meeting, is this what ur meeting is all about" Yash asked trying to be as stern and angry as he could, while Meera gave him a look of Dad ur so dead.

Arjun- but Uncle I told Mee" before he could continue Meera interrupted him saying "Bahi u...u could have told us na that u changed ur mind at the last min, then we could have come all together na" saying that she made a puppy face trying to melt his anger, but it went in vein and Arjun gestured her to come close to him, at first she denied but then gave up as she knew either way she is dead and her plan will end before it started and went to him and whispered to him saying "bahi plzzz don't say I knew it, nahi tu sari planning ka kachra ho jaye ga" saying that she made a puppy face and then quickly added "nd u will also lose the chance to get close to Annie and make her admit she also love u"

Arjun- aisa kya" Meera nods making a baby face.

Arjun- but

Meera- but wat kuch nahi just don't say my name

Arjun- MSK knows

Meera- wattt

Arjun- haan,

Meera- argg, but why did u tell veer ji

Arjun- sorry I..." before he could say something further his eyes met Annie who was fuming in anger and could kill him any min, he gulped down the lump and then looked around and all he got was the eyes staring at him like they are seeing and alien, he cleared his throat and said "aap sab aise kyun deakh rahe ho"

Dhara- what are u two whispering back and forth

Meera- Ma...wo...hum I mean main...kuch bhi tu nahi" saying that she went and stood behind Yash.

Dhara- haan tu Arjun beta are u on ur business meeting or on vacation.

Arjun- Aunty wo...wo...haan client changed their mind at the last min and told me to come to Goa, so that's why I am here for u know business meeting" saying that he looks up at Meera asking with his eyes was it convincible to make them believe, to which Meera just showed her thumbs up. Maan stood at the back watching the two gestures and laughed to himself and thought "ye Meera agar Arjun ki help kar rahi tu phir meri Kyun nahi" but still stood at the back watching the whole drama till Geet came out and seeing her his eyes popped out who was wearing a a black see through shirt and a black short.



Everyone just sat staring at her, especially the Handa family who never seen her in a dress like this, Seeing their face Geet just rolled her eyes and said "Mama Papa stop staring at me, I know I look hot, but that doesn't mean u all will look at me with ur mouth open" Everyone just closed their mouth and looked at each other and then back at Geet and all said at once "Are we dreaming, Geet" Geet comes and sit next to Annie and pinches her and she just screams saying "idiot mere ko kyun pinch kiya"

"I guess ur all awake and not dreaming" Geet said, and looked at Maan, who was just staring at her and seeing him see like that she just lowers her head and starts to talk making everyone shocked as they were seeing their old Geet, before Dev death, and their talk went on for a while, while Maan still stood near the stairway staring at Geet, drinking her beauty whit his eyes, while Geet every now and then looked up to him only to find him still staring at her. As they were talking Dhara eyes fell on Maan who was drooling on Geet and Geet looking at him now and then and little blushing and finding the right moment, not making Geet doubt on her intention she asks "Geet tum ne ye tu bata diya u like all of us, but u still didn't told us ke tumhe Maan kaisa lagta hai" Geet just smiles at her and says "Ache lagte hai" as she looked at him, just as those word left Meera jumped like a 5 year old baby and came to Yash and shook his hand saying "Mubarak ho" while Yash glared at her to keep her excitement in control, she bit her tongue and murmured "Sorry" and sat back making an innocent face like she doesn't know what just happened seeing their confused face and mentally cursing herself.

"Dad Mama I think we came here to enjoy na and not sit in house" Meera said breaking the silence

Yash- yes but the elders have already made plans what we want to do, u youngster make ur own plans, as I am sure u won't like it if we make ur plans since u all are grown up now

Annie- well in that case I have made my own plans, I am going for shopping and then disco with few of my friends.

Meera- well in that case me and Vicky have made our plans too, aur aab bache Geet, Maan Veer Ji and Arjun bahi, to decided what they want to do

Annie- Well Mrs. Meera Khurana I would like to remind u that Mr. Arjun is here for his meeting not on vacation, so that only leave two people to choose what they want to do and they are Bro and Geet" saying that she turned to Geet, but not before looking at Arjun who just gave her a smile making her fume, but for now she ignored it and said "so Geet what u want to do"

Geet- ummm mujhe beach pe jana hai

Annie- ok, but alone

Meera- nahi nahi wo akele kyun hogi I am sure Maan Veer ji must be going on beach too, like always.

Annie- true, so Bahi are u going with her" Annie said turning toward him.

Maan- when did I agree to that

Annie- but u always go na, and see she is all alone and new here, tu it would be nice na if u give her a company and show her around.

Maan- she is not a baby Annie.

Annie- trust me bahi u will find her more childish then she looks like.

"Annie I am still here" Geet says angrily.

Annie- oh sorry i forgot, so bro and Geet are going on beach me to shopping then disco, and Meera and Vicky bahi, pata nahi and elders have their own plans" saying that she turned toward Yash and winked at him mouthing "did ur half job" and winked at him. with that she went to her room took her handbag and left. while Meera took Arjun from their and told him to just follow her where she is going and keep his meetings in the same disco she is going to, Arjun just nodded and left on his love mission, but not before giving a kiss on Meera forehead and thanking her. And after that elders and along with them Meera and Vicky also left leaving Maan and Geet to decided what they really want to do.

I know there wasn't lots of Maaneet moments, but it will surly be on the next update, Plz leave ur view on this update.

Also here is the teaser for my new SS Rishtey

Teaser



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Edited by Mariam94 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hw much time still have to wait
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: suhaaana

Hw much time still have to wait



just few mins, just editing it
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Posted: 12 years ago
first thing this ff has a charm
so this is not matter for me if their is maneet moment add or not
this is a family ff and i like all family
second please jaldi jaldi update diya karo

now update
awesome awesome awesome
the way annie arjun scene and maan laughing on annie
then geet dress and her dialogue
all r awesome
i m so exited foe next
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
thanx for the pm
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
love it deargeet back to her old self again cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
arjun-annie thought that marriage wholeheartedly...bt nt maaneet...hope that during beach seeing they will b more open up n close to each other...
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was a very nice chp. Oh ho! Arjun and Annie romancing away😳😆 Anyway I wonder if Geet and Maan will spend some time together🤔 Looking forward to reading the next chp. Thanks for the PM and update soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
So meera planned everything, couplewise...
And annie is taking her ravange on arjun by not going with him...
So maan also wanted to be with geet, missing her...
OMg geet is turned so bold all of sudden...
Waiting fro maaneet on beach
Please next update me maaneet ek saath ho

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