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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sukklover

ur update...😳
keep ing dear...😃
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NOTE: SORRY FOR THIS TOO SHORT COMMENT AS MY NET IS IT"S CRTICAL CONDITIONAM




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Posted: 12 years ago

Thank you all for liking the previous part and motivating me guys.

Anyway here is the next update.

ENJOY!!!

-DHDAJS Part 18-

Ending all the Rona Dhona Geet finally sat with the whole family laughing enjoying herself after what its seemed like ages to see her smiling and enjoying herself, Rano just sat their admiring her daughter seeing her animate after that incident and without her permission tears filled her eyes threatening to come out...but she held it back and wiped her moist eyes not wanting Geet to see it and get sad over it. Mohindar looked at her raising his brows asking what happened to which she just nodded no smiling and then looked back at Geet who sat next to Dadi resting her head on her shoulder and talking with Annie and arguing with Yash who also became like a teenager with them arguing back and forth.

Varun- Ma sachi I am telling u your son is gud for nothing

"Oye chup kar tu" Yash said throwing the cushion at him and then he himself started hitting him saying "main gud for nothing hoon hun, aur tu kya hai ek 1 ka ullu hai"

"Yes dad come on...u can do it...beat the black & blue out of Varun Uncle" Annie shouted as she stood on the couch jumping telling Yash to hit Varun more and to help him Mohindar also joined him. Geet pulled her in a jerk making her fall on the couch with a thud and said "oye, ye tu kya kar rahi..."

Annie- kya Geet itna bhi nahi jaanti Dad ko cheer kar rahi thi, COME ON DAD

Geet- oye i know that, but how could u support him to hit my Dad, hun

"Thank u bacha" Varun said popping his head out. Geet stood and went and removed Yash and Mohindar and said "leave my Dad" Mohindar and Yash went and sat back breathing heavily and looked at Varun and then they both broke into laugh seeing him in a mess. Geet shot both of them a glare and then sat next to Varun and fixed his hair and then his clothes and said "Dad how could u let Papa and uncle beat u like this..."

Varun made a baby face and said "u were not there to help me na isiliye they were easily beating me"

Geet- thats not true, I helped u...

Varun- acha" and Geet nodded in yes innocently. then got up and went to Yash and Mohindar with a threatening look and said "how dare u beat my Dad"

Mohindar- Dad ki chamchi

Geet- PAPA

Mohindar- what" just as those word left from his lip Geet started chasing him around and finally catches him and started waking him. "Geet I am ur Papa aur tu mujhe hi mar rahi hai" Mohindar said trying to get out of her grip, Geet made a baby face and quickly lets him go and hugs him saying "sorry" while everyone just broke into another laugh...

"Where do u think you're Going" Yash said as he got up seeing Maan all dress in office attire ready to live as he talked on the phone.

"Adi I will call u back till then u get everything ready" Maan said and cuts the call as he heard Yash. "Dad wo Coliseum wali project main kuch problem ho rahi hai usi ki meeting hai that is needed to be attend today and or else the work will be delayed for whole week and the clients are having some issue with it" Maan said.

" but I thought we all will make plans for family holiday" Dhara said complaining like a baby.

"Mom I haven't stopped u from making any plan...do whatever u all want...but I have to go now" Maan said. Dhara gets angry and gestures Yash to says something but Maan caught her and says "Mama it won't work every time...you can't always tell Dad to do what u want...so now be my Gud Mama and let me go" saying that he hugged her and then left from there.

Dhara sat back with a pout and again poor Yash was in trouble. "Ma" Yash said as he stared at Dhara.

DM-hmm

Yash- Ma don't u think we should start planning where should we all go for the family holiday...

DM- mujhe nhai pata...why don't u ask the kids...waise bhi they will be the one enjoying more than us tu it should be a place of their like na.

"see Ma bhi yahi kah rahi and u just send Him to office for work instead of telling him to stay at home and be with us" Dhara snapped at Yash and then walked out of there.

DM- use kya huwa

Yash- nothing Ma she just wanted Maan to stay at home but wo tu office chala gaya aab sara gussa mujh pe hi nikalne wala hai...

DM- waise Annie Geet hai na ask them where they would like to go and then make plans according to their like.

Yash- hmmm

Varun- Ma are u three really serious about Maan Geet relation

DM- Varun beta is there anything wrong with that or u don't this relation

Varun - no Ma there is nothing like that...I just want my Geet to be happy now and that is all i want...

DM- Varun then be with us...

"Ma I am always with u know that na" Varun said hugging Dadi side way and said "bole what is the plan"

"Yash" Dadima said and gestures him to tell about their plan, Nodding in yes he tells them all what he plans to do...

"Dad plz plz plz can we go to UK this time, plzzz" Annie pleaded to Yash who just again gave her a big NO.

Annie- why are u hell bent on saying NO Dad

Yash- coz my princess I am planning to go to Goa

"Goa...but why Goa Dad" Annie asked confused, Yash shook his head seeing her face and was about to say something when he heard Meera crying voice and then Vicky shouting at her.

"VICKY" Yash said sternly interrupting his argue with Meera. "Shadi ke ek bhi din guzre nahi ur making her cry, why is Meera crying"

"Dad dekho na Vicky is not taking me on Family - Honeymoon" Meera said as she went to Yash. "Family-Honeymoon" Yash asked confused and gesture Vicky what is she talking about.

Meera- Haan mujhe bhi aap logo ke saath Family holiday pe jana hai but VIcky is saying no to me

Vicky- tu what else do u want me to say, hamari kal hi shadi huwi hai and shadi ke baad couple Honeymoon pe jate hai na ke Family-honeymoon pe.

Meera- Vicky I don't want to go on honeymoon mujhe bas Family holiday pe jana hai, waise I did gave u the idea na to make this also as our Honeymoon agar if u don't want that then u go on your honeymoon by yourself.

Vicky- Honeymoon pe log wife ke saath jate hai akele nahi

Meera- then u come with me

Vicky- why don't u do vise versa" and their argument continue with each other while others just looked at them as if they are watching tom & jerry cartoon.

"BASSS" Yash said finally putting an end to their arguments and eyes both of them to sit quietly with others. Then Yash without anyone noticing him gestures Meera to come and sit next to him and once she was seated next to him he whispers to her saying "why don't u want to go on ur honeymoon"

Meera- Dad agar main honeymoon pe chali gai tu hamare plan ka kya hoga

Yash- kaisa plan

Meera- Dad itni jaldi bhol gaye aap...Arjun Bahiye, Annie Maan Veer ji Geet

Yash- oh that...but tumhe wahan ane ki kya zarorat hai

Meera- Dad Goa jane ka idea kis ka tha

Yash- tumhara

Meera- tu phir

"tu phir kya" Yash asked confused

Meera- Dad I want to be there to make sure everything goes according to our plan na...plz na let me come with u all too...mujhe nahi jana stupid honeymoon pe...plz na Dad" and makes a baby face.

"Hmm" He whispers to her and then looks at Vicky and says "Vicky for now go pack ur bags for family holiday u both can go on ur honeymoon later"

Vicky- I hate u both, mujhe nahi jana" saying that he left to his room angrily, while Yash gave Meera a glare and said "aab wo naraz ho gaya"

Meera- use main mana lungi, thank u Dad" saying that she hugged him.

"Hi Uncle" they all heard Arjun voice and all looked at the entrance to see Arjun with few servant bringing in few gifts and fruits basket. "Arjun Bahiya" Meera said and went to him nd hugged him.

Arjun- kaise hai tu

Meera- bauth khush" Arjun kissed her forehead keeping his hand on her head and said "hamesha aise hi khus rah" though Meera and Arjun were not brother nd sister but Arjun always consider Meera as his sister, and here today he came to KM to fulfill his brother duty of taking her to her house for pag-phere rasam.

"Uncle, Wo I came to take Meera for Pag-phere rasam" Arjun said after taking their blessing.

Dhara- Arjun u sit here, hum pag-phere ki rasam ki tayariyan deakh ke ate hai

Arjun- ji aunty

As Dhara went to kitchen, Arjun sat with the other. As they were talking Meera singled Yash to ask about coming to Goa with them, at first he didn't understood her gesture but then finally understood when She pointed toward Annie who came out of Kitchen with a cup of tea for Arjun, as Dhara had asked her to do.

"Arjun beta we are going for family holiday, so I was thinking if u could join us" Yash said looking straight at Annie, who in return gave him a deadly glare.

"Wo Uncle" Arjun said but then heard Annie saying annoyingly "Dad ne ek bar poocha nahi ke ye Mr. ready ho gaye jane ke liye" Arjun was hurt with her words but decided to let it go as he himself was going to refuse them, and said "Wo Uncle I have few Meeting to attend out of Delhi, and Mom Dad are leaving for UK tomorrow morning, so I can't join u guys"

Meera- but Bahiya its just for few days, plz come with us na plzz" Arjun smiled seeing her puppy pleading face. and said "Sorry Meera I can't come, I have to attend these meeting, agar important nahi hoti tu would have love to join u guys" Meera made a sad face but then remembering something she smiled at him and said "it's ok bahiya, works comes first, hai na Dad" saying that without anyone noticing she winks at him, while Annie sighed in relief thinking he won't be coming with them. After a while Meera went with Arjun while the others got busy packing their bag, as they had to live for Goa the very next day.

Precap: The Love Game Begins.

It my request to all the silent reader who read my FF to at least press the like button if u don't want to comment, I understand I am not a very gud writer, but this is all I could do, and if u don't like writing plz do let me know, I will discontinue my writing, coz i have over 250 friends who want me to sent them update PM and I hardly get more then 105 or 106 likes in my each so plz do press the like button, as for now ur pressing the like button is the only motivation for me to write the update. so plz do press like button. And the next update will be only given when I get up to 115+ likes, guys its not lots I am asking, just 10 more likes...so HOPEFULLY the silent readers will step up and press the like button, or else I will not update till I get it. Sorry if I sound rude or mean but guys ur likes and comment are the only motivation i have to continue my FF...

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Edited by Mariam94 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fabulous families are going to start the love game between them
wow waiting for it
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the family masti waiting for game begins
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
i hated the last line of aniee 😡
i think arjun shoudl start ignoring aniee's presence
how can she say like that bechara he was hurt

continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
so everybody planning to bring d couples together...bechara vicky...family hm mein jaana pad raha hai...

awesome n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was a very nice chp.Phew! Atlast Geet is back to her cheerful and bubbly self.I wonder what plan Meera has in mind which will make Arjun join them for their holiday to Goa.Looking forward to the next chp and thanks for the PM😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update..
So goa!!wow!
felt bad for arjun...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
thanks for the pm

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