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LOVE ALWAYS WINS





CHAPTER-22



Mayur completed all the formalities at police station and reached home just to find a very lovely sight….they saw maan feeding soup to geet very lovingly..both are very much lost in each other and didn't notice them…mayur smiled at each other and left the room not disturbing them…


Nupur:by god mayank..i cant believe this….i think whatever u said was right..maan bhai and geet are in love….



Mayank:ha nupur…first I had a doubt whether I was wrong in understanding them but iam sure now..the way maan reacted at shopping mall,and now he is taking care of her…hmmm my friend is in love and that too with my di and I don't know that…



Nupur:ha mayank…kehne ke liye hum dono in dono ke friends hai but see….wait wait I think they both didn't confess till now…


Mayank:ha..u r right….


"y don't we"said both in unison and winked at each other…they again entered the room and maaneet are still lost in each other…


"ahem ahem"mayur signalled that they are there in the room…


Maan:arey nupur…tum dono agaye…..humein pata bhi nahi chala…

[nupur u both are back and we didn't even realised it]


Nupur:pata chaltha bhi kese..tum dono ek dusre mein koh gaye the..nupur mumbled for which mayank waked her arm with his elbow….

[how can u…u both were lost in each other]


"ab tumhara haath kesa hai geet"asked nupur while moving towards her bed…

[is ur hand ok now??]

Geet:ha nupur iam fine…

Nupur smiled and so mayank…nupur then raised her eyebrows as if asking mayank what he is waiting for…


Mayank:maan..chalo na..i have to say something…

Maan:hmmm…

He got up to move but looked at geet again who also was looking at him.."geet if u feel it's paining then call me…I'll take u to hospital"said maan…


Nupur:bhai don't worry…I think u didn't forget that iam also a doctor…maan gave a weak smile to her for which she gave the same…he then half heartedly left the place making faces which made nupur giggle…she then settled her self beside geet and chatted with her for sometime…she then thought to execute their plan…


Nupur:geet…ek baat poochu??

[geet..can I ask u something?]

Geet:ha..poocho na…

[ha ask na]

Nupur:why u took only maan bhai's name when they were misbehaving with u…you would have called mayank na…waise bhi maan bhai is ur enemy then how…


Geet who already turned her otherside making a face as if she got caught by a teacher when she failed to do homework…

Nupur:ha geet..bolo na…

geet:(st)hey babaji ab kya bolu...muje bhi nahi pata mein ne maan ka naam kyun liya..

[oh god!!what should i answer her now..even i dont know why i took maan's name]

Geet:woo….mein…..wooo….ha…wo I saw maan there so I took his name instantly…

Nupur:oh!!ok then tell me since when u started liking soup???u even hate it's smell na….

Geet eyes widened in shock now…"wo…wo.."she fumbles…

Geet(st)hey babaji..ye nupur ko kya hogaya aaj..mere peeche pad gayi hai…ab mein kya bolu…maan itne pyar se soup pilarahe the o bhi apne haato se banakar….mein mana kese kar sakthi hoon….kya kahu isse…muje khud pata nahi hai mein ne kese peeliya…kya kahu…kya kahu….ha

[oh god!what happened to this nupur today…she is shooting her questions continuosly on me..what shouild I answer her now…how can I deny when maan prepared it for me and fed me with utmost love…what should I answer her now…even I don't know how I drank it…what should I say…ha..]



Geet:wo..nupur…u said many times na that soup is very healthy…so I tried it today…it was not that bad…said geet giving her a weak smile…nupur nodded while smirking at her….


Here in living room maan and mayank had some usual talk and mayank also thought to execute his plan….


Mayank:maan…ek baat batao….tumhe itna gussa kyun agaya waha shopping mall par…I think uwould have killed him if i would not have stopped u…


Maan:ha I would have killed that bas***ds…how dare they are to touch my geet….said maan in anger remembering that incident…

Mayank giggled as maan slipped his tongue…he just said MY GEET…maan also realised what he just said and bit his tongue…I mean our geet…maan tried to justify….


Mayank:maan mein tumhara dost hoon…sab samajtha hoon…ab chalo sach bata tum di se pyar karthe ho na…

[maan iam ur friend and I understand u very well..u love my sis na..]

Mayank is maan's best friend with whom he shares every thing..he knows maan very well and so maan..so how can maan hide something from his best friend espcly when he caught him…maan smiled and nodded positively…


Maan:ha mayank..i love geet…mein geet se bahuth pyar kartha hoon…

"arey wah" nupur almost shouted who stood there listening their convo…she came running to maan and hugged him.."bhai…iam soo sooo happy"she said in excitement and hugged him again.."aapne toh maan liye par geet toh maanthi hi nahi…I tried in many ways but no…madam have answer for even my stupid questions…but she wont accept that she loves u"

Maan:nupur geet bhi mujse pyar karthi hai and I can see that in her eyes but I don't want to force her to accept it…so now stop troubling her…


Nupur:oye hoye..abhi se uski side….


"nupur"maan glared at her.."kyun did I say anything wrong"nupur tried to tease him…but maan excused himself to save himself from her leg pulling session saying"mein geet ko dekkar aatha hoon"



"ha ha jayiye jayiye"nupur said and giggled….maan glared at her and left the place…nupur hugged mayank as she felt very happy for maan n geet…mayank also felt very happy as his sis got the one who loves her the most..meanwhile,nupur's mobile rang…she ended the call after few minutes…


Nupur:wow mayank..my cousin is coming day after 2morrow..u know i didn't meet her since one year…but ek problem hai o na chipku types hai…aathe hai maan bhai se chipak jaathi hai…o kya hai na maan bhai ka best friend hai…so she wont leave him for a second…she went on n on and suddenly an idea clicked in her mind…

Nupur:milgaya!!!

"kya??"mayank asked looking at her perplexed…


"weapon to bring geet's feelings out"nupur said in excitement…

She then looked at confused mayank and smirked…

Mayank nodded his head in disbelief not able to understand his would be wifey's mind…he went to call s.d to inform her geet is ok now and maan n nupur will stay there to night…


Maan entered geet's room just to find her sleeping…a beautiful smile crept on her lips even in her sleep…maan slowly moved towards her bed and settled beside her…he caressed her hair lovingly and then cupped her face...when he is lost in sleeping beauty geet frowned as she felt maan's touch…before maan could remove his hand geet grabbed it and kept under her soft cheek…maan smiled and tried to take his hand back but geet held it very tightly…he don't want to disturb her sleep so he leaned towards the wall of the bed and drifted to sleep….



Next morning geet opened her eyes and saw maan beside her sleeping in sitting position leaning towards the wall of bed…she smiled as she thought it to be her illusion but soon realised that maan is really there…she quickly got up and called him.."maan.."

No reply.."maan"she called little louder…maan jerked suddenly and saw geet there...


"kya huwa geet…are u ok??is it paining??chalo we'll go to hospital"maan said without any full stop but full of question marks…


"maan aapko hospital ke alwa kuch yaad bhi rehtha hai"geet asked innocently…

"iam fine maan…I don't feel any pain now.."said geet…

maan smiled at her for which she smiled back...



"good morning"nupur entered the room…"how are u geet??are u ok now"nupur asked while checking her hand…geet nodded with smile.."bhai n geet chalo jaldi fresh ho jayiye..we have to go to home..maa said to come fast"nupur informed and left the room..


Geet went to washroom while maan just got up to move out with his coffee mug…"aaa"geet screamed when he was about to step out…maan turned to see what happened while geet came out running.."maan cockroach… cockroach"said geet making almost cry face…maan went inside the washroom to find nothing there…"geet there is no cockroach here"said maan…geet also went to see the same…"yahi toh thi…pata nahi kaha gayi" and she started to look here and there roaming around the wash room..in this process she accidentally stepped on soap and is about to fall but her saviour as always was very quick in holding her hand by wrist…he pulled her towards him with force and geet landed on his hard chest..in this process her soft lips touched his nape..her mouth widened in shock but maan is lost in her and his heart danced in joy as her soft lips touched his nape…geet felt embarrased and moved back…she again stepped on soap and about to fall…but maan held her waist and pulled her closer…"careful geet…gir jaogi"maan said in husky voice for which geet lost in his eyes…both were lost in each other and maan smiled seeing his effect on her…and asusual our disturbance queen nupur entered geet's room saying"kya huwa geet??"


Maan n geet came out of their trance…"kuch nahi"geet answered quickly…

"then why u were screaming as if u saw a ghost"nupur asked…


"wo…wo…ha…mein ghana gaa rahi thi…"said geet not knowing what to say…maan looked at her amused n smiling inwardly looking at her facial expressions…


"ghana???"nupur questioned herself confusingly making weird face...but shrugged it…"maan bhai kaha hai..we have to go to KM soon"asked nupur…


Maan is about to answer her but geet closed his mouth with her palm…"maan…maan yaha kyun honge…muje nahi pata"said geet..."yahi toh the"nupur asked…


"kaha na muje nahi pata"said geet irritatingly…nupur confusingly left the room…

then geet almost pushed maan out to escape from embarassment..maan left the room smiling at her antics…


after sometime four of them reached KM…mayur soon became busy in some thing…maan left to his room to freshen up…s.d who already was busy with some work called"maan..maan"…

geet:aunty maan went to his room…fresh hone keliye…

s.d:oh…beta I want ur help..infact u and maan should help me…

geet:ha aunty batayiye na…


s.d:bete u know na iam very busy here..sid is busy in some other work..mayur cannot go anywhere as they are dulha n dulhan…so I want u people to go to shimla to invite some people for the wedding..they are very important for ur uncle..so personally jana padega invite karne ke liye..filhal u n maan only can go there and u have to start now itself..plz bete can u go with maan…


geet:ha aunty kyun nahi..i'll surely help u..

s.d:thanku beta...chalo go n inform maan that u people have to start now..u have shimla flight in 3 hours…she said n ran from there as she have to attend some person…


geet reluctantly entered maan's room as she is still feeling shy remembering washroom's incident…she felt more embarassed as maan was standing without shirt near his wadrobe searching for his shirt…geet immediately turned to go but maan called her"geet"…she stopped for a while..she thought to inform him the matter n leave immediately…"Wo…we both have to go to shimla"…maan is taking steps towards her while she took back steps till she reached the door…maan stood little far from her and his back is facing the wall near him…"wo…aunty said that we have to start now as there is flight in 3 hours"geet said with difficulty lost in him..suddenly some one opened the door and geet landed on maan's hard chest with force…where as maan's back hit the wall..geet gulped her saliva as she is very close to him n she can feel his bare chest.."geet…"nupur looked inside to find no one as maaneet are at back of the door…not finding anyone there;she left the place..geet realised their position n moved back.."wo…aap jaldi ready hojayiye"geet said n ran from there..maan shook his head smiling…


maaneet reached shimla n completed the work assigned to them by savitri devi..they have to catch the flight the next morning..so they roamed around shimla for sometime…when they were passing a road geet saw shopping mall n shouted excitedly.."maan shopping chale"

"shopping aur tumhare saath no way..we have to catch 2morrow's flight not after 3days"said maan…

"maan plz plz..i'll finish my shopping soon..plz plz"she pleaded him..

How can maan deny her plead..so he went with her…she grabbed maan with her whenever he made baby face not able to wait n run around the mall..she finally completed her shopping n they made their way out…"thank god geet…u did it finally" said maan taking relaxing sigh..

Geet suddenly remembered something.."maan..i'll be back in a second"she said n ran back in to the mall without waiting for his answer…

"arey geet..wait…they'll close the mall in 5 minutes..jaldi aana"he said n received mayank's call…

Geet entered men's section as she found a white shirt and she loved it a lot…she thought to surprise maan by gifting that shirt to him..so she came back..as it is closing time all the staff left the place and no body noticed geet entering the place…geet is looking here n there to find someone…





Meanwhile,all the staff came out to the entrance..they thought everyone left the place..so they switched off the lights n closed the mall…geet got scared as soon as they switched off the lights.."koi hai"she tried to call..when she found no one she thought they might be closing the mall n started running towards the entrance but they already closed it…tears started rolling down her cheeks..she is hell scared of darkness firstof all n now she is all alone in the mall…she took out her mobile to call maan but alas it is switched of as battery is low…she got more scared now..she went n sat on a couch n sat there crying.."ab mein kya karu…maan already said me not to go..par mein sunthi kaha...babaji muje dar lag raha hai…maan muje doond raha hoga…he must be worried…babaji plz help me na"she started crying again…



"geeet"she heard a familiar voice..she looked up to find her saviour who always comes to her rescue.."maan"she mumbled in tears while smiling..she rushed to him n hugged him..



precap:

maaneet stays in shopping mall whole night😳

geet's jagda with a girl for maan…😆

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