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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 7
She slowly opened her eyes filled with tears...their body mingled in a their scent & sweat.. he was still panting burying his head in her arms.. she clenched her teeth..while her hand slowly reached the candle that was close to the bed & pushed it on the bed.. the silk sheet caught the fire instantly.. & her arms immediately came back to his back. She smirked rubbing her hand across his back holding him tight..letting the fire spread!!!!

Within no time the fire engulfed the huge king size bed around the corners where the silk materials where hanging lose & long for decoration. Even the high falling curtains around the bed began to flame up. She closed her eyes tight, holding him closer & tighter.. it took him a while panting..catching up with the moment, lost in her. The heat was too much to bear..he felt suffocated, felt little odd to confess he was suffocated in her embrace, or was it the heat around... by the time he realized the fire it was already spread all around them. He tried to pull out, she only held him closer...laughing hysterically. Geet...geet!!! he frantically tried to fight out of her hold. She laughed oblivious to the pain & the trauma he feared in that brief moment. She was virtually in catatonic state, Maan rocked & screamed struggling them out of the fire that seemed consuming them every passing sec. He managed to pull out as she sat their blankly staring at him.

She laughed at her plight.. like always he left her to die!!! she knew he never cared.. Maan pushed his hair screaming in horror asking her step out.. fighting to reach her..while she just watched dispassionately, almost like she was used to as part of her hand turned red..brown.. with the heat drawing closer & closer, probably even inhaled smoke making it difficult to breath. With the sharp pain came utter relief.. the much needed pain..pain she deserved .. deserved because she still loves him!!!
To her utter disbelieve he jumped back in to the fire not caring abt himself.. wrapping the blanket on her naked body protecting her.. she looked at him in shock.. not sure if this was part of her dream!!! he cocooned her like his life was slipping out of his hand...his eyes screaming out in pain, seeing her wound, not caring of the fire that began to burns his arms now.. strangely pricking her heart.. she flinched in pain.. how can it hurt her more than ever. Instantly her fingers reached to protect him..

He rushed both of them to the wash room & turned the shower on. He hugged her tightly, nervously, anxiously..kissing her madly as she clung to him lifelessly still unsure if she was alive.. or is it all part of her dream!! did he just save her from the fire!! was he holding her so close... why??? !!! she just looked into his eyes as he cupped her cheeks into his shaking fingers.. making sure she was fine.
I am sorry .. I don't know how it happened !!
r u alright?
Dam this candles
he roared in frustration. His fingers softly tucked the hair behind, eyes oozing out concern for his wife.
She still couldn't believe wat she was seeing...her eyes closed feeling fogged with emotions & the dazing effect of the smoke she inhaled.
The whole of KM was set on alarm... the servants rushed in to putt off the fire. Maan got them selves dressed. The drs rushed, Maan tried to keep Daadi out of the whole panic. Dr checked Geet.. while she insisted Maan got checked first.

one hell of a night it was!!!!
Early morning..newly wed slept cuddled up in the guest room.. his eyes gazing at his beautiful wife's face, not able to understand why did he feel so attached to her ..close to her..may be just this physical thing, but then why did he feel so intense hurt seeing her in pain, in that fire.. all this was new to him.. getting this new feeling towards a girl.. emotion he doesn't believe in!!! he doesn't want to feel such emotions.. weakening him, making him helpless.. part of him still believes it could just be an attraction.. of their magical moment.. he sighed finding himself lost in her yet again.. with this never ending yearning to kiss her, protect her, never let anything harm her again. Strangely loving this feel of her arms around him, the way she perfectly fit against his body. He leaned closer brushing his lips gently, he stopped unsure, looking at her, searching her face..her droopy eyes for a reason to stop, she couldn't ' he was sweet, sensitive, cared for her ..at least it felt more than words could say.
She gave him no signs to stop & cuddled closer as he caressed the back of her neck, softly brushing her lips with his. Her hands wandered pressing firmly on his chest, feeling the strength of the man she always only dreamt about.

His fingers wandered at the outline of her top but still his heart crying out to her hurt hand... r u ok, he asked painfully looking at the burns in her arm
she nodded closing her eyes
He hugged her & held her tight for a moment, savoring the feeling of her body next to his.. assuring himself she is safe now. His heart seemed so restless the whole night seeing those burns.

He kissed her ear & nibbled at her neck, she enjoyed his touch pulling him closer. He slowly moved his hand under her top feeling her warm smooth skin. She leaned closer like longing to feel his skin against hers. He stopped for a moment & looked at her again wondering how he was getting so tempted to this epitome of beauty. He just couldn't stop himself admiring her. She can't believe she was feeling so flushed under his gaze.. nothing seemed lusting?? question played in her torn heart!!!

his lips slowly played with her curves, making her squirm under his touch. He moved on top of her slowly falling in pool of desires. She moaned responding to his every gentle touch.. as they moved slowly..
thoughts clouded her .. why would he save her from fire.. make love to her again.. why his eyes filled with emotions she didn't want to believe... his touch was distracting the hell out of her painful heart. Every time he ran his finger near her cheek, or kissed her, it just blurred her thoughts. Every grasp he took whimpering her name passionately sent a blush from her neck to the roots of her hair.. & he seemed so truly into it!! her brain was turning to jelly & the sensation that it was becoming disconnected from her body.. it was like their souls were one..in harmony.. making love..again.. how can that even be possible.. their body sealed together moving as one. She gripped his back as he cupped hers pulling her up as he pushed down in a rhythm of their love making.. faster losing control wanting deeper & deeper. Like he knew wat she wants..just meeting to her desire that seemed mirroring his!! thrust deeper, staying there longer each time until their breath was loud as they both collapsed breathing heavily. He laid their still nestled, feeling her, the moment.. the something new binding his heart.

precap
Geets unexplainable behavior.
-PREV PART 6 NEXT PART 8 -
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muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
congrats for ew thread

me first on comenting yeee
now i m going to read it
Edited by gshruti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: gshruti

congrats for ew thread


me first on comenting yeee
now i m going to read it

waiting



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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
Loved the part..
So for the first tym maan s feeling towards a girl..
Loved the way he protected her..
he was the one who pushed her into death bed and nw he s the one who saved her...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: jasraj123

congrats for new thread


the banner is sooo going with the name of ff

waiting but how long will take😕

how r u feeling dear
hope its better now😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shrutheAjay

Congrats on the new Thread!!!


And the Banner is just Fabulous... Perfectly fits the story and the title...

thanks.. thats nandu's magic😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
awesome update DI
loved it
omg me so confused ye ho kya rha hai aab tu geet ke vision bhi blur ho rahe hai
kya ye real hi maan tu ya phir uska duplicate, that Misbehaved with her...
am so glad that they both are safe
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
Me wondering is it d same Maan...has he changed in this one yr...though Geet's emotional turmoil is understandable.
lt was amazing...loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39

thx for d beautiful update...

its very emotional part of her side...
she is so emotional so fergile...
now precap is more interesting...
pl cont soon...
Edited by 286pearl - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome Update ,.Loved it ..So both are safe .. Precap looks fishy type

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