Hello all... am back with my first part...am sooo happy with the reponse...Really thankyou everyone...
no maneet in this... but all have to be patience for Maneet's entry and their meeting... this is going to be a long FF... am trying...but am sure i will not dissappoint you guys...for grip in story i am writing like this...
Part 1
On a bright sunny morning'. Everyone in the khurana mansion, are busy as it is a very special day for them' their son is coming from California after a successful deal'..
The day was very bright as the sun is smiling and fresh breeze is ready to welcome everything with happiness for them'.
Janki is preparing all the favorite dishes for her son'. She is very happy that she is meeting her son after 6 months' this is the very long business trip he has ever made and went away from his family for a long time'
Amarjeet is having some meeting in the house with his close friend Mr Singh and discussing about his son's arrival and the successful deal'
Mr Singh:Congrats Mr Amarjeet' your son is excellent in every work' every business deal he makes' it will be successful'
Amar was so happy to hear appreciation of his son'.and had a small smile on his face when Mr Singh was talking'..
Amar:Yes Mr Singh' He is always dedicated so I am taking rest leaving everything on my son's shoulders' he is there to take care of everything''
Mr Singh: Yeah sure'. Your very lucky to have a son like him'
Amar:Thank you soo much'.
Amar was avery successful business man' he is the founder of this Khurana industries and made it very successful' his son Maan took over the industries after completing his studies'. He asked his father to rest because of his health issues' and Amar trusts his son'. Maan made this industry successful even in abroad'
Mr Singh: So Mr Amar'. When is your son going to get married?... any idea of looking for a girl'
Amar: Oh Mr Singh'I am not going to force my son in any issue' same as in this matter also' if he finds a suitable girl for him'I will be happy'. It is his life he can take right decisions'
Just then Janki entered'
Mr Singh: Sasriykal' Mrs Amarjeet'..
Janki: Sasriyakal'Mr Singh' long time how are you?...
Mr Singh: I am doing great'. Seems the house is filled with happiness'as your son is coming today'
Janki: ha'. Indeed it is'.
Then Janki called the servant to bring coffee to everyone'. And she joined the conversation of them'.
Janki: So Mr Singh' how are everyone in your house?...
Mr Singh: Yes everyone are doing well'
Janki: Oh I heard that your daughter finished her studies?... when are you thinking of her marriage'
Mr Singh: I am looking for a good person for her' but she is not in mind set to get married'.
Janki: Oh'so then'.
When she was about to complete her sentence' Amar made a sound like clearing his throat' and stared at her'.by seeing her husband she kept her mouth shut'.Just then coffee came and everyone had their coffee' and Mr Singh was ready to leave'
Mr Singh:Ok Mr Amarjeet' I will go now' I have to attend a meeting'
They all stood up and greeted Mr Singh Bye'.He left'
Amar and Janki sat down'and Amar was lost in his thoughts..
Janki: Whats the matter Amar?...Lost in your thoughts..and why did you stop me I was going to ask his daughter's hands for our son'.
Amar: Nothing' but why did you want to ask him' I already said that it would be our son's choice' if he is interested then we can see'
Janki: But Amar he is already 27' we need to talk about this' even Rajveer was talking about this two days back'
Amar: Rajveer'. Why did you talk with him' I told you to stop contacts with him right'
Janki: but amar'he is my only brother'.
Amar: let it be' but I don't like him or his wrong attitude'
Amar was fuming in anger and he warned janki and walked away'. Janki left along and was feeling sad about her husband and her brother's fight'..but she realized herself that whatever her brother did was wrong and she also maintained distance from him'. But two days back.. he came to janki and asked her forgiveness about whatever happened' As he is her only brother' she accepted his apologies' and asked him to not to create any problem further as amar will not leave him this time'.
Rajveer is also a business man' but not successful as Amar' he takes help from his only best friend Mahavir'.they both will go to any extent to gain money and fame' just for the property of Amar.. he gave his sister to him' he asked Amar's help to expand his business' as being the brother of his wife' he accepted it'but one fine day' police came and accused Rajveer for the murder of a person' whose Land was taken by Rajveer'just because that person is not accepting to give his land he killed him'
Amar was furious at him and asked the police to throw him in jail' he was in jail for about 5 years' as janki and wife of rajveer requested Amar' he removed the case from rajveer.. and he came out' he was a very cruel in nature he developed hatred on amar' but he was helpless as he is not having much money to take revenge on Amar..when he was totally lost..he saved Mahavir when he was attacked my goons'so as Rajveer saved his life'Mahavir decided to help him and join hands with him..Rajveer told everything to Mahavir about Amar.. and Mahavir asked him to stay quiet for some time as they can attack Amar one day'
Precap:Maan's entry'.
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