Maneet SS- Kaafilaa. PART 10/ Pg 88/ JUN 13 PM L8R

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#331

loved geet as a hitler

amazing update

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Sara Khanna

@$ara_$hachi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#332

Ruchs, *me making baby face* that was not long enough. Waise, Sara back to 'like' job. I have done many hits till now and many more to go.

Haye, his sherni can be hell dangerous than than him. Kya baat hai nakul kaka. The scene before munda's entry was so touching but after that, me can't decide. Should i laugh while watching him or feel pitty after knowing that his punishment is still on. What an idea kudiye. Overall, splendid. Me loved it. Spa, huh.

Do cont soon and do PM me.

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Ruchi

@ruchs

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#333

Originally posted by: ritzy09
loved the update dear...just awesome...

Geet is her sherni mode...and how can she stay still...dizzy but has to come down...and Maan...hmmm..ab baari hai wifey ko pamper karne ki aur har sazaa ko naaz se uthane ki...how can he hurt himself...doesn't he knoe he is Mishty's property...ab bhugto

btw milk instead of alcohol...reminded me of Madhubala..aahaaa...well ignore if you don't watch but Madhu did something quite similar to RK...

Really di??? haven't watched madhubala yet!! please can you tell me on which date it was aired??? Will love to watch how they filmed it!!😳

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Ruchi

@ruchs

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#334

Hi Friends!!😳

Okies me knows that its been very long since I last updated this one and am really sorry dears!! Actually me was still thinking how to shape up the story now…😕

But since me is on an updating spree today!! Me though why not give at least a Teaser for Kaafilaa too!!! So here it is dears!!😳

TEASER

Nakul saw Maan and requested him with his eyes to save them all from Geet's hitler Avatar but Maan just gave a lopsided smile as if mocking them…"Mera mazaak uda rahey thhey na abb bhugto…" But after a few minutes Maan finally had a pity on the poor servants who were just about to cry!!!

He wordlessly crept behind Geet and slipped his arms on her waist!!! Geet gasped and before she could respond, Maan scooped her in his arms and took her to their bedroom!!

"MAAAN!! Yeh aaap kya kar rahey hain… Utariye mujhe… ABHIII!!" Geet shouted while struggling to get out of Maan's hold… Kicking her legs in the air… but Maan paid no heed to her and carried her all the way to their bedroom!!!

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Hoping you liked the Teaser dears!! Will try to update this one soon but cant tell when!! My poor fingers are aching as since yesterday me is typing continuously!! Me has updated Twisty Deewangi and Aaiynaa dears!! So you can check it out dears!!😳

Thanks for bearing with me dears!!

Love you…😳

Ruchi

Edited by ruchs - 13 years ago

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Dona

@Donnaa

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#335

waiting eagerly for the update

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shri12

@shri12

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#336

lovely teaser waiting for it

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#337

Hi thanks 4 da pm n rocking teaser! update soon

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Ruchi

@ruchs

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#338

Originally posted by: sdlife19
superb
ab update kab

Soon dear!! But can't tell when!! Hell busy with college and job!!! Abhi just utilized the holidays to update the other FFs!! But will pakka do it as soon as I get time!! Promise!!!😳