KARZ-UPDATED PT 18 PG 76 - Page 14

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Posted: 13 years ago
kya sorry bolne ka tarika hai...its gr8...hw dey fight with each other...

beautiful update...


loved it...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

n also thank u fr d lovely update n also fr d pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 7
nice part...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
atlast maneet r friends...bt me still curious dat why geet goes to jail...continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice parts
U dnt PM kya
I didnt read frm Part 2😭😭
Loved Geet's charater
Sherni she is
Bechara Maan hamesha he has to face her heheheh
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Posted: 13 years ago



PART 08


When Maan took her hand it was soft & feather like between his rough hands.He felt a contentment when he felt her closer to him.He didn't understand this new found sensation which was filling his heart.When she kept her face near his left chest where heart lies then his heart unknowingly started throbbing rapidly.He felt he's being in heaven when he felt her head on his left chest.


But Maan's head was fighting with heart & his ego was always showed in front of every body but why this heart felt complete as if someone has filled the hollow of his heart.Geet has filled his hollow heart which was unaware of him or Geet.Geet on the other hand was feeling that y didn't he crush herself inside his embrace.She wanted to go inside his embrace & hug him possessively.Geet shrugged off this thoughts by cursing under breath to babaji.


Then Maan said smiling at Geet sweetly,"Geet,abhi mujhe chalna chaahiye mujhe class ke liye der ho rahi hai...!!!!!!!"Geet nodded & Maan went from there.But he felt like he has become hollow once again when he was going away from Geet.Maan kept his hand on his left chest where heart lies & thought,"Kyun mein yeh bechainee mehsoos kar raha hoon...!!!!!!!"And he saw towards Geet but she wasn't there.


Fear flooded inside him & saw around him & said,"What happened to her...abhi toh woh yahi thi...!!!!!!!"And he saw towards downwards feeling that she fell once again & he didn't save her.But she wasn't there then he ran to library & entered immediately & searched for her everywhere.She wasn't seen then he was abt to collapse to the ground not seeing her then she was in front of him taking a book from the rack & cribbing...cursing under breath for someone.


She pouted cutely for which Maan's lips turned to smile.She was looking adorable in that when she was pouting cutely.He had urge to eat her alive.Maan saw her and sighed immediately seeing her & felt that his heart has throbbed rapidly when he felt that Geet was away but now he's feeling perfectly contented.Then Sonali came behind him & turned him & snaked her arm around his neck.


Maan was so angry seeing this behaviour of Sonali & said harshly but firmly,"Tumhaara haath mujhe par se uthaavo Sonali kyunki mein tujh jaise B***h ke saath ek pal ke liye bhi nahin rehna chaahtha...!!!!!!!!"Which made Sonali angry & whispered softly,"Toh phir uss b***h ke saath dosti karna tumhe achcha lagtha hai...haina Maan...!!!!!!!!"On that time he lifted his hand to smack her angrily for which Sonali was shocked.


She saw him angrily & shockingly but Maan resisted his anger & said with firm voice which made Sonali shiver down her spine with fear,"Ab agar tumne Geet ko aisa word use kiya toh mujhese bura koi nahin hoga...pehli baar toh bolkar gutter mein apne aapko dakhela tha...agar dobara kaha toh mein khud tumhe gutter mein dakhel doonga samjhi tum...!!!!!!!"Maan went from there with attitude.


Sonali stood there with shock who had froze to death.She knew abt Maan's anger but his anger was in its peak when she said to Geet the rude word.Sonali came to present world & saw that he had gone from there & turned with anger & saw Geet there immersed in some book still pouting cutely.Sonali vowed in her mind,"Pata nahin kya jaadu kiya toone Geet jo meri maujoodgi aaj tak bardaasht karne waala Maan bhi chalaa gaya hai...mein tumhe Maan ke saamne nahin neeche giraaya toh mera naam bhi Sonali Sen nahin...!!!!!!!"


Sonali went from there while Geet was reading the book but she was sitting on the chair with full concentration.First day of the class ended & Geet & her friends came outside from the college.Meera who was standing in the bus stop nodded dismissively seeing Geet coming towards her.Meera said seeing Geet,"Geet...pata nahin tumhe kya pilaakar Rano aunty ne paala hai...arrey yaar kam se kam car par toh jao office keliye!!!!!!"


Geet said immediately,"Meera...agar mein car mein gayi toh mein wahan unhe pata chal jaayegi ki mein ek business woman ki beti hoon.Nahin yaar mujhe aise exposure nahin chaahiye...kyunki mein khuli hava mein saas lena chaahthi hoon naaki kisiki pamapered hava nahin...aur waise bhi Amarnath sir bhi toh yahi chaahthe hai ki mein wahan ek aam employee ki tarah kaam karoon...am so happy pehli baar koi toh mila hai jo meri tarah sochtha hai nahin toh mein queen elizabeth bangayi hoti...


Meera nodded dismissively while bus came & both climbed up the stairs of the bus.Maan entered the office with full attitude.


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Maan entered the office fullest attitude wearing his office attire & entered his cabin.His office staff saw him with fear while girls drooled over him while boys saw him with fear.But he stopped near the door & said to a white short woman who had wore mini skirt of horrible pink who also stood with attitude and when she said gud evening to him then Maan only answered her with attitude.Her name was Sasha.


Maan said to Sasha,"Sasha..meri nayi secretary aayi hai kya...kya naam hai uska...haan Geet??????"Sasha was a bit taken aback when MK was asking abt a girl with a bright twinkly in his eyes.Sasha nodded & answered,"Ji MK & she's in her cabin...!!!!!!!"Maan said with attitude,"Call her now...i want to meet her now only in my cabin...usse mere cabin mein bhejo...!!!!!!!!"Sasha said immediately,"Lekin MK woh toh aapke nahin bade saab ke secretary hai aur aapki secretary yeh hai..!!!!!!!!"


Sasha showed a girl who wore mini skirt just like her who gave Maan cheeky smile.Maan felt a surge of anger seeing that girl as she was drooling over him when he entered the office.On that time Maan's father & Geet came there.Geet held a notepad while Amarnath was telling something for which Geet was noting intently.Maan said angrily,"Dad..yeh kis namoone ko meri secretary banaadiya jo kaam karne se zyaada mujhe ghoorti hai...!!!!!!!!!"


For which Geet started laughing heartily & loudly.Maan glared at her while Amarnath chuckled & said,"Bete..ab agar tum itne handsome ho toh koi bhi ladki tumhe ghoorti hai...!!!!!!!"Geet stopped laughing & said immediately with shock,"Baap re baap...sir yeh handsome...mujhe toh aag se ghire huve ek mutton piece dikhthe hai jo apni badi badi aankhen dikhaate rehthe hai...!!!!!!!"


Maan glared at her comment while Amaranth laughed heartily.First time everyone admired his cute laugh & started talking between them.Some said,"Yaar yeh kya yeh Amarnath sir ko bhi hasaa diya...!!!!!!!!"Maan said angrily,"Aur tum toh aasmaan se utari huyi pari ho kya...dikhne mein toh tum daayan lagthi ho...!!!!!!!!"Geet said immediately & angrily,"Haan pata hai lekin aapke toh das dimaag hain doosron par hukum chalaane ka toh behtar hai aapka naam Man nahin das sir waala raavan rakhna chaahiye...!!!!!!!!!"


Maan glared at her & said,"Shakal dekhi hai tumhaari aayne mein tu toh bhoot jaise dikhti ho...tumhe toh chudail naam rakhna chaahiye tha...lekin unfortunately Geet rakh diya...!!!!!!!!!!"Geet was abt retort him back but Amar shouted,"Chup...!!!!!!!!"For which the place froze to death even Maan also became silent hearing his father's dangerous voice.


Amaranath said finally,"Maan...Geet ko maine hi apna secretary banaa diya hai kyunki she's equipped of writing the notes perfectly so she will be with me aur aapke saath toh Nisha haina who's the perfect secretary...!!!!!!!"Maan argued immediately,"Yeh kam karne se zyaada mujhe ghoorti rehthi hai mujhe jo aadmi chaahiye jo mujhe aisi nazron se na dekhe aur Geet hi hai jo woh kaam kar sakthi hai...!!!!!!!!!!"


Geet couldn't swallow the truth that she have to become Maan's secretary & she prayed to babaji which was audible to Amarnath & Maan,"Hai babaji mujhe is aag baboole ke saath kaam nahin karna jo har waqt apni man maani kartha hai...!!!!!!!!"Maan asked angrily,"Kya kaha tumne mein aag baboola hoon...!!!!!!!!"Geet said immediately,"Amarnath sir...dekha kaise ghoor rahe hai mujhe ab agar mein inki secreatary banjavoon toh yeh mera jeena haraama kardenge...aur kaam se zyaada sirf jagda hogi is office mein...!!!!!!!!!"


Amarnath thought for a second & said,"Geet...tum Maan ka bhi aur mujhe dono ki secretary ban jao...aur jab tak mein ek nayi secretary dhoond nahin leta apne kaam ke liye tab tak tum mere saath kaam karo aur Maan ke files ko bhi maintain karo...!!!!!!!!"Geet tried to argue but amarnath said his final word & went from there.Maan smirked at her mischievously while Geet saw upwards,"Babaji bachaa lena...!!!!!!!!"




Precap-Encounter with Sasha 😡& Maaneet's freshers party😉


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Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
maan threaTNING sonali geet amarnatrh secretary maneet arguments



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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update i love maan's dad he is too cool love it ab aayega maza lovely
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved their cute fights..hate sonali..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow. Maan ne geet ke liye, sonali ko data. Din chika din chika.
Mere pyare maanu ladkiya apko ghurti hai. Haye ki kra , u look so hot.

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