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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful part...
maan reacting to her even when he is unconscious...😳
please update next part soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
SHE WAS VERY BRAVE TO GET MAAN TO THE HOSPITAL
SHE IS THE ONE WHO SAVED HIS LIFE
HE BELONGS TO HER NOW
BUT WILL ANYONE ELSE COME TO KNOW ABOUT HER LOVE FOR HIM
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it 👏
continue soon...thanks for d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
maan is out of danger

thank god
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update...finally maneet together in one update face to face...although maans unconscious bt still together...
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago



Heart Of Heart
Part 28


She was sitting on the couch, her family has gone to hoshiyarpur so she dint informed anyone for her disappearance from hone since morning and staying in hospital, maa has called twice on her cell and she said she is fine but never told where she is, she dint liked lying to her maa papa so she dint either mentioned about it, she was looking keenly at the handsome man sleeping right in front of her the only man she knows her heart have the ability to beat for drowned in her own thoughts she was looking at his each feature craved with perfection, what life was and what life has became now, she was lost in her own thoughts, in the revere of her dreamland when she felt a tap on her shoulder

she jerked out of her thoughts and looked over her shoulder to see an elegant lady clad in a cream sari with magnificent single stringed pearl set looking classy yet decent, she looked at the lady top to bottom her personality was significant, she never saw her before, who was she, she looked at her face and knotted her brows asking who's she, the lady smiles at the little cutie and said...am his dadi maa...
Geet's eyes widen in shock her breath stuck in her throat and hiccups made their way out...omg was she dreaming, she is right in front of maan's dadimaa who nourished her maan since childhood...she looked at the decent lady in front of her in aow, and then it stricked her she is sitting in front of Maan's dadi maa...her eyes widened in shock as if her head will burst after spinning and the eyeballs might pop out of her sockets and she in a sudden jerk stood up

wo...main...aap...yeh...she stuttered not finding any proper word to say while dadi maa just smiled at her

I don't think am that horrible looking that you can't even speak a single line without fearing me...dadi maa said making a baby face...while geet looked at her in aow and both burst out in laughter, the room filled with the melody of laughter geet was hiding since long, while dadi maa looked at her is adoration the little angel on earth she thought and patted her cheeks...thanks beta...she looked with love at the little fairy...

Yes she was told by the doctor that geet has brought him here, how she messed up with hospital staff to admit him, how worried she was, how she was asking about him, how she took care of him till now...being out of city and dev and aniee to their maternal uncles home she wasn't able to come soon but she hurried to reach here, but as soon as she was informed about this girl her heart filled with affection for that little doll...she caressed her cheeks and asked...do you know him

hmm yaa we in same school...
she answered nervously

And where your family

wo...
geet looked here and there

They don't know...dadi maa said sternly while geet shock her head in denial like a small kidd...

They gone to nani house, nani maa isn't well na and I was alone at home, I have my classes na so I dint go with them, but today when I was returning from classes i saw him there, and I brought him here, he was badly hurt and bleeding, wo to eyes bhi ni khol re the, or waha koi help bhi ni kar ra tha, you know main kitna darr gayi thi...she sobbed cutely washing those tears away from her eyes while dadi maa hugged her tight in her embrace...

Aoww bacha see am here na, no need to worry now...she said patting geet's back and made her sit on the sofa for once she forgot about her own grandson seeing the little doll crying she made her sit still hugging her dearly and made her keep her head in her lap and kneaded her hairs and asked...than how you managed to bring him here

I carried him...she said cutely keeping while dadi maa got a shock, she again looked at Maan and then back to her

you carried him...she asked in amusement

and that brought the bubbly geet back to herself...yaa dadi you know how heavy he is, and see me...she stood up and twisted turning showing herself

see am soo...no, not his much...she stretched her arms in air fully and faith pouting cutely...see am sooo small,
he crushed me dadi my shoulders are still aching...
she made a baby face while dadi maa was drowned in the cuteness she possesses and kept her elbow on the armrest of couch and face on her rounded fist and asked her to continue

than I took her one hand on my shoulder with other i helped his waist...dadi no one came for my help, you know I so wanna punch their noses now, kamine matlabi log...then placed him in the autosikshaw and came here...

Dadi maa felt amassed looking at the little girl, her innocence was her charm still her intelligence and rationality had a different glory in it

She stood up and patted geet1s head saying...your maa papa will be really happy when they come to know about this

she bit her tongue and said cutely...dadi can I ask you for something please!!

Yess beta why not...
dadi said with a sweet smile

actually can I ask two things please!!
Geet grinned slyly looking at dadi in hope while dadi maa almost laughed at her antics...ask me whatever and as many things you want...dadi maa chuckled

Please maa papa ji shouldn't come to know about this, I never lied to them, I did this time and if they'll come to know i know they'll be sad and I can't take it if my maa papa ji become sad and that to because of me, please dadi maa...she pleaded with a guilty face dipping her head

but they will be happy if they come to know, they will be proud of you...dadi maa tried to tell her some logical explanations while she just nodded

after whole lot of manofying, cutie faces, crocodile tears in short full on emotional attyachar dadi maa agreed to it and now come the turn for her second wish

now what is your second demand...dadi maa asked faking anger crossing her arms over her chest while geet twisted her lips

neither Maan should came to know...she twisted her nose childishly while dadi maa looked at her in disbelieve...and agreed to it knowing there is no better option than agree anyways she'll make her do whatever she want to by hook or by crock she'll make her bow down to her silly yet cute little demands

dadi maa was falling this little angel all over again and her demands were not helping save from loving this fairy, she smiled delightedly looking at her and stood up looking at Geet's innocent heart which was clearly reflected in those shinny hazels, she did everything still she dint demanded any reward for it, she just know to give in lovingly whole heartedly without expecting anything in return and that was the biggest treasure she have...

Dadi came forward and took her hand in hers, and asked in a stern yet affectionate voice filled with love...ok no one will come to know but only if you promise you'll have to promise me one thing you'll stay in touch with me throughout life...dadi maa asked smiling while Geet had her hazels clouded with emotions she looked at her and hugged her tight and sobbed...promise I will be with you always, pakka wala promise...she said hiding her face in her chest like a kid cringed to her mother

dadi maa patted her back and said...pagal why you crying now...

I am missing maa...Geet answered between her hiccups

aow sweetheart am here na with you so why you missing her am your dadi na...she said parting and whipping Geet's tears with her thumb and smiled...chalo let me go and have his medicines you should also go from here driver will drop you...Geet nodded and Dadi maa left the room for doctor and after a while Geet to left for home...

Sitting in the car she was thinking about the letter she left for him on the table near her pillow

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Dear Maan,

hei howz you,

take your medicines on time, have regular check up and also don't irritate dadi maa with you tantrums, I know you don't know me but I know you that's enough for us, I know something bothering you, I know you hurt over something, but Maan have you ever thought about the you giving everyone with your aloofness, with your weird behavior, that's not right Maan, the one who love us, the for whom we are something why do we neglect them for the one who dsnt ever worry about us,

have you ever seen the defeat in dadi maa's eyes the time she see you like this, have you seen the pain in your siblings heart the time they crave for you, no Maan you don't, have you ever loves them.
If yes, than please break this nut shell of yours and breathe the fresh air, not for yourself, but for everyone for whom you mean world.
If you don't wanna live for yourself, then Maan I can say start living for them, because they need you, they need to be with you, your love, your siblings need your strictness, your care, just YOU!! Can't you even do this for the one who are ready to give their lives for a single smile of yours and if not then tell them straight you don't love them
Maan remember always there is always someone special for everyone, if someone leave you don't morn for them your whole life, let it go because someone really special is somewhere waiting for you!!
I know I have no right to say it but I wanted to, so am saying if you can, please read and think once

yours...

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she came out of her thought with the halt of car and see she has reached back home...she stepped out the car thanking the driver and stepped back inside her house...alone...


Precap : Maan getting conscious 😊



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Edited by dazzlingdivz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful part...
especially geet's antics describing hw she carried maan..
daadi already fell for her charm and innocence..
letter was quite touching...
i din't like geet's second demand...
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Posted: 13 years ago
aww shoo cute the part was and geet is so cute...she cutely told that maan was heavy...🤣awesome divzi...😉loved it...cont soon...😊👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome Update loved it ,Geet is soo cuteee but phir geet and Maan nhi mileya
Geet note is too good
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg..geet carried maan all way..
the way she said to dadi..so cute..
n her letter will really do magic..

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