OS: Unsaid Feeling - Page 2

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Wow...amazing os dear...I loved it very much...specially your peoms between lines...it gives immense meaning to their emotions...

Just one question is that child really maan's son and waht about avantika..is he married to her...?

Keep writing dear...actually anything on Maaneet attracts me.

Thnx for pm

Waiting for another on maaneet

Originally posted by: AbbyluvsMaan

aaahhh.. another beautiful OS by u Ritzz...
n honestly... best one soo far...
srsly... kisi ne sahi kaha hai... practice makes one perfect...
so keep writing... 😉

I loved how Maan teased Geet in the beginning... hehehhe...
one of my frnd is also like dat...
bt Maan and Geet jaise love ka scene nhi hai.. hehehe..
neways mai topic se bhatak gai.. 😆
bt fir wanna say this..
frndship wali jo flirting hoti hai na.. trust me Ritzz... its one of the most fun thing in the world.. 😆 u shud experience it... i xperience it almost evryday... 😉

neways... lemme cum back to d OS...
aahhh.. I have always believed that one shud voice out his/her feelings and rightly portrayed by u dat's where she went wrong..
but alas! wateva happens, happens for the best... their love just strengthened... 😳

I loved the Maan's answer in the interview...
made me smile wide...
"I was waiting for someone to return from London"
omg... i loved this line... I loveee dis Maan... 😆 😳

finally Geet voiced out her feelings too n dekho result kya hua...
interview shinterview side me... Maan ne to sbke samne propose maar dia... ye hui na sher puttar wali baat... 😉 😆

I loved the entire scene you created...
brilliant essayed... 😃

n poems... m dying on them,,
aaa... m screaming...
they are amazing...!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

love u Ritzz... 🤗 ❤️