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sdlife19

@sdlife19

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

loved it..

the poetry was too goood to describe in words

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Wow...amazing os dear...I loved it very much...specially your peoms between lines...it gives immense meaning to their emotions...

Just one question is that child really maan's son and waht about avantika..is he married to her...?

Keep writing dear...actually anything on Maaneet attracts me.

Thnx for pm

Waiting for another on maaneet

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Rituja

@mishtiritu

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Madhuri53
Wow...amazing os dear...I loved it very much...specially your peoms between lines...it gives immense meaning to their emotions...
Just one question is that child really maan's son and waht about avantika..is he married to her...?

Keep writing dear...actually anything on Maaneet attracts me.

Thnx for pm

Waiting for another on maaneet

No it was maan's Friends child... And He didnt marry avantika... She only helped maan to realize his feelings towards geet.. She was just a sweet friend of maan...

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kkiddoo

@kkiddoo

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

@piya-

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Superb os Ritu darling😊

Pata hai late ho gayi comment karne mein but wo kehthe hai na der aaye durust aaye hehe

Just loved the entire feel of the story in a very sweet way u have written the entire journey of friendship getting converted into love 👏👏👏

sabse best part mujhe wo laga jab maan ne interview k waqt saaf saaf keh diya k i was waiting for someone to come back from london 😳 and good finally geet also voiced her feelings

poem toh humesha ki tarah lajawab tha

continue writing sweet heart

urs Shona (Piya)

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Abreshmina

@Abby-GC-Crazy

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

aaahhh.. another beautiful OS by u Ritzz...
n honestly... best one soo far...
srsly... kisi ne sahi kaha hai... practice makes one perfect...
so keep writing... 😉

I loved how Maan teased Geet in the beginning... hehehhe...
one of my frnd is also like dat...
bt Maan and Geet jaise love ka scene nhi hai.. hehehe..
neways mai topic se bhatak gai.. 😆
bt fir wanna say this..
frndship wali jo flirting hoti hai na.. trust me Ritzz... its one of the most fun thing in the world.. 😆 u shud experience it... i xperience it almost evryday... 😉

neways... lemme cum back to d OS...
aahhh.. I have always believed that one shud voice out his/her feelings and rightly portrayed by u dat's where she went wrong..
but alas! wateva happens, happens for the best... their love just strengthened... 😳

I loved the Maan's answer in the interview...
made me smile wide...
"I was waiting for someone to return from London"
omg... i loved this line... I loveee dis Maan... 😆 😳

finally Geet voiced out her feelings too n dekho result kya hua...
interview shinterview side me... Maan ne to sbke samne propose maar dia... ye hui na sher puttar wali baat... 😉 😆

I loved the entire scene you created...
brilliant essayed... 😃

n poems... m dying on them,,
aaa... m screaming...
they are amazing...!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

love u Ritzz... 🤗 ❤️

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Rituja

@mishtiritu

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: AbbyluvsMaan
aaahhh.. another beautiful OS by u Ritzz...
n honestly... best one soo far...
srsly... kisi ne sahi kaha hai... practice makes one perfect...
so keep writing... 😉

I loved how Maan teased Geet in the beginning... hehehhe...
one of my frnd is also like dat...
bt Maan and Geet jaise love ka scene nhi hai.. hehehe..
neways mai topic se bhatak gai.. 😆
bt fir wanna say this..
frndship wali jo flirting hoti hai na.. trust me Ritzz... its one of the most fun thing in the world.. 😆 u shud experience it... i xperience it almost evryday... 😉

neways... lemme cum back to d OS...
aahhh.. I have always believed that one shud voice out his/her feelings and rightly portrayed by u dat's where she went wrong..
but alas! wateva happens, happens for the best... their love just strengthened... 😳

I loved the Maan's answer in the interview...
made me smile wide...
"I was waiting for someone to return from London"
omg... i loved this line... I loveee dis Maan... 😆 😳

finally Geet voiced out her feelings too n dekho result kya hua...
interview shinterview side me... Maan ne to sbke samne propose maar dia... ye hui na sher puttar wali baat... 😉 😆

I loved the entire scene you created...
brilliant essayed... 😃

n poems... m dying on them,,
aaa... m screaming...
they are amazing...!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

love u Ritzz... 🤗 ❤️