New Maaneet OS FOREVER YOURS (first and last part)

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-Gemini-

@-Gemini-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

loved it Piya ,its was emotional ,thanks for the pm.

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mandymore

@mandymore

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Awsomos...beautiful story .
was not able to guess abt maan till d end...

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IheartUSoMuch

@IheartUSoMuch

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Lovely OS but❤️ ...

😭 u know why also ... I so wish he was alive with Geet 🥺

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swetha10

@swetha10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Awww beautiful OS..

such a sweet emotional one..

luved it...

thanx a lot..

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

oh my my piya you made me cry😭

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Infinity.

@Infinity.

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Awesome...emotional OS..!!

loved it...

thankx for pm 😊

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Abgina

@crazydevil87

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

OMG sweetu ye kya kiya tune apni pari ko rula diya...😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
mere maan ko cancer karwa diya😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
but beautiful n heart wrenching yaar...kya likh diya tune...
d way u started with d one sided romance of sun lol...stupid sun always remember geet sirf aur sirf maan ki h...SAMJHE!!!!!!! hehe...
mr. sun 😛 geet ne parda gira diya...lol
awww d way she misses him...felt his presence around her...everything was truly divine...n den she started reading the letter...every word divinely beautifully depicted the immense luv maan's heart holds for geet...n den meher's entry awww d cute princess of our beloved maaneet...her cute talks awww...
every bit is sooo captivating n d kiss part filled my eyes wid geet...
n den d letter was completed which leaves a lump in reader's heart...😭😭😭
but den geet caught him n they married wow n their i felt maan is safe n sound but no he died 😭😭
but d end was just out of d world...m truly falling short of words to describe how beautiful n impact full d end was...luved it sooo much...
muuuaaahhh sweetu...luvya loadzzz...

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sridevi

@sridevi_n

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Piya, Once again i couldn't find any words to describe about ur writing skills and thoughts. It touched my heart dear. Excellent and lovely OS with lot of emotions. Thank you very much for sending me the PM.

Keep writing.

After reading these i felt very emotional and especially the words meher says to her mother geet about her dadda punishing her mom. The way meher did taking the photo of maan and punishing her mom.