OS-MY LOVE WILL NEVER DIE(MG)(NOTE-PG4)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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HEY BUDDIES ITS ME...ISHA..HOPE U ALL KNOW ME..WITH ANOTHER PIECE OF MY IMAGINATION...
SO NOW LETS START...



~MY LOVE WILL NEVER DIE~

today i came to a house..a house of a girl whom i really loved...but she played with my feeling...i thought she loves me..but no like many other girl she too is the same..i hate her..i hate her...no thats not true i love her...though she ditch me..but i still love her..my this feeling...i hate it to the core...no i cant think of her..now my life has no place for her...i am married and have 2 children...my wife love me alot...i like her...i cant love anybody else expect her..why so??..why??...she was one my best friend..she used to say she understand me..than where had that gone...today i came because i got a call from her parents..i cant disobey them..i always respected them...i moved with my family inside..i saw people crying..ladies in white sari and men in white kurta...i understood...but what happend ??...to whom..dad or mom??...
i quickly ran..what i saw made me shattered..it was her photo...with that mala...her..my love,my life, my geet..

all were crying...i cant understand from where to get me answer..i waited...i saw in front of me...people are taking her away...the cremony finished...my geet had gone for ever..the cried...tears made their way..i felt a hand on my shoulder of my wife...she was trying to calm me...but how can i??..though she played with my feeling but...i still love her...my heart shouted her name...i was broken...i saw uncle and aunty coming forward to me...they say"beta hum jaante hain apke sawaalo ke jawaab chaiya apko..ye letter geet apke chodh kar gayi hain..i think apko apke sawal ke jawaab milgange..." ..i kept on looking the lette...i quickly ran towards my study...i cant wait to read the letter..i sat on the sofa ..and open the letter..the same beautiful writing..but the thing written is not beautiful...i started reading..

dear maan,


main janti huin jab tum ye letter padho gaye tho mein tum sabh se dur ga chuki hongi...mujhe pata tha tum mummy papa ki baat nahi talo gaye aur aao ga...akhir tum mujhse enta pyaar jo karte tha...aur mujhe ya bhi pata hain..tum esi samay broken hoga...dont be...

chalo tumhare sawalo ke jawaab mein tumhe deti huin...yaad hain jab tumne mujhe college mein propose kiya tha..mein cloud nine pe thi...mein tho tumse pata nahi kitna pyaar karti thi...may be appni jaan se jaada...uss sin jab mein ghar ayi..tho achnak mein faint ho gayi..papa mummy mujhe hospital la gaye..doctor ne kuch test kaha...i hardly mind...mein tho tumhare saath messaging kar rahi thi...reports 7 days baad ana vali thi...7 day tumhare saath kaise beet gaye...pata nahi chala..tumhare payaar ne mujhe apne saare problem bhulana ko kaha ...aur mein bhul gayi..

7 day jab mein ghar pahuchi..tab meina mummy papa ko rota huin dekha...docter uncle bhi tha...mein samjhe gayi koi tho problem hain...doctor ne mujhe bataya ki mujhe CANCER hain..last stage par..mein samjhe gayi..but mujhe ek baat tho pata thi ki...agar tumhe ye baat pata chali tho tum broke ho gao ga..aur mein voh nahi dekh sakti thi...mein chahati thi ki tum muskarate huin jio...tumhe sari khushiyan mila...tum mera liya jio...mein tumhe jeeta huin dekh kar jee luingi...mein tumhe khudse durr karna ke plan banaya...jaruri tha...mein vcky ko ye baat batayi..tho usne kahan ki maan bahut lucky hain jo mein usse mili...par usse ye kaun samjhe tum mila tho mein jada lucky huin...tum arahe tha...mein aur vicky ne apna drama start kiya...jab tum door pe agaye tab mein vicky ko hug kiya...aur kahan ki mein tumhare saath game khel rahi huin...fir tho tum gaante ho na maan...jab tum chale gaye,,mujhe hospital mein admit kiya gaya...
par mein tho tumhari yaado ke saath bandhi thi na...haar pal , haar samay sirf tumahre baare mein sochti thi...jaana chahati thi tum kaise ho...tumhari yaado mein jee rahi thi..aur jeena chahati thi..ye geet..ek din mujhe pata chala ki tumhari shaadi hogayi..i celebrated in hospital...i wanted to see the girl..meina chori se uski photo mangavayi...aur dekhi...bahut achi thi...dheera dheera meri tabiyat aur bigar gayi...
mera jaane ke din paas araha tha..mein tho tumhe bas ye batane cahati thi...ki mein apni puri life mein sirf aur sirf tumse pyaar kiya hain...aur shayad maarne ke baad bhi karti rahuingi..."MY LOVE WILL NEVER DIE"...for u maan,,,

ye letter mein esi liya likha kyunki..,mein tumhe ye batana chahati thi ki agar esi duniya main...kabhi ye situation ayi ki tum akela ko...tho tum eye close karna...tum mujhe paao ge apne pass maan...i love u maan...aur hain tumhare bache bhi bahut cute hain...apni life asa he jeena...mein tumhe khush dekhna chahati huin...


tumhari aur sirf tumhari,
geet
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i was totally broken..voh mujhse etna pyaar karti thi..mein uski ankhoon mein uska sacha pyaar nahi dekh paya...aj Maan singh khurana ne..apne anmol hissa kho dia...i love u geet...and always love u..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Too much 😭 ...But lovely story line...Yaar Emotional Atyachaar mat kiya karo.My Dairy main Geet bechari abhi tak nahi mili...But u r too good in this .Geet chali gayi Maan ko chod kar.But she was wrong.She should hav spent that much time with him.Now after her Maan always liv in guilt why he suspected her n doubted her lov.


Same kind of OS I read by Jyoti..not story but in which Geet dies.I cursed her so many times lik u ...I m cursing u 😲.Maan k sath dhokha 😭


Keep writing with high spirits 😳 😭 😆
Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jass.KN

Too much 😭 ...But lovely story line...Yaar Emotional Atyachaar mat kiya karo.My Dairy main Geet bechari abhi tak nahi mili...But u r too good in this .Geet chali gayi Maan ko chod kar.But she was wrong.She should hav spent that much time with him.Now after her Maan always liv in guilt why he suspected her n doubted her lov.



Same kind of OS I read by Jyoti..not story but in which Geet dies.I cursed her so many times lik u ...I m cursing u 😲.Maan k sath dhokha 😭


Keep writing with high spirits 😳 😭 😆



sry sry...no emtional etyachaar from now...pakka...
i hope it is not same like jyoti stry???
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice n emotional os
thnx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ishanidhi08



sry sry...no emtional etyachaar from now...pakka...
i hope it is not same like jyoti stry???



not lik her.Jst Geet died yeh similar hai. Otherwise Maan was married to Geet n hav kids.I jst can't bear two things 😡.Geet not in Maan's life n Maan a poor guy.😳.Even after having one thing from two things I don like.Jyoti narrated in beautiful way in her style n u in ur own style u r really good at to narrate things from character's point of view.

In ur three works I read
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jass.KN



not lik her.Jst Geet died yeh similar hai. Otherwise Maan was married to Geet n hav kids.I jst can't bear two things 😡.Geet not in Maan's life n Maan a poor guy.😳.Even after having one thing from two things I don like.Jyoti narrated in beautiful way in her style n u in ur own style u r really good at to narrate things from character's point of view.

In ur three works I read



okkk...kya karun karna parta hain...
i think u missed my one work..ongoing are four..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ishanidhi08



okkk...kya karun karna parta hain...
i think u missed my one work..ongoing are four..


I jst checked now. I read it I think lil is left to read. Actually when U send two links of different works Some where I missed.But I ll read remaining.Ths work of urs was first I read
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Posted: 13 years ago
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truly emotional atyaachaar.. 😭
Loved it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great sad painful but awesome well done
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Posted: 13 years ago
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now a days nearly all writers in Geet Forum are hell bend on making us cry...😭

haan I know because we readers won't let u do this type of separation in FFs...and in OS...it finish in one update...no body can force u ...hmmm...😡

😭 🥺 😡 😭 🥺 😡 😭 🥺 😡 😭 🥺 😡 😭 🥺 😡

very sad and painful OS...

Geet died...Maan is married now and have 2 children..

thanx for pm...

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