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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 13 years ago

#701

Hi dear, thanks 4 da pm n fantabulous update! Superbly written! u always write well! thanks 4 da update! appreciate ur tym n effort! Geet thinkibg abt Maan n is restless! She sees th bike! N thinks its Dev bt its Maan's lol! Geet fixes the bike! she goes every nite ! Maan 's shirt button out n Geet stitches it! Maan affected bt nt Geet! Maan downstairs n cribs tht Geet ddi nt notice him! Maan inner feelins well portrayed! Update soon! Will wait 4 updates!

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Nivedithachand

@Nivedithachand

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Posted: 13 years ago

#702

Hayyeee !!!! Beautiful and interesting update !!! I Loved Geet's nightouts and very eager to know Maan's reaction on this !!! Maaneet's private moment was lovely !!!!

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@Oblivion007

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#703

as usual awesome part!
who says it's dull?i fr one thoroughly enjoyed it.loved the button sewing scene!
waiting eagerly for more.don't u worry,take ur time and then give a superb update.

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Angel

@amita5

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#704

Awesome update

geet sneaking out in the middle of the night

maan calling for geet when button broken

precap sounds good

please update soon and thanks for the pm

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its_me

@its_me

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#705

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Abreshmina

@Abby-GC-Crazy

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#706

Ritzy di... sabse pehle... me holding my ears... m sooo sry for being gayab for this long... but nw m back ok...
kisses to you... sorry kisses... muuuaahhh muuuaahhh...

acha nw.. gosh... maine to 19-25 parts padhe.. ek saath ... hhehehe...

1st... m loving the pace of this story...
gradual and progressive... this story totally requires the gradual progression n ur putting it perfectly... 😃

Geet... umm.. what do I say.. I love this strong-headed girl... mature... childish... chirpy... innocent... gosh I so see myself in her... 😉 seriously.. I mean I love how bold she is yet so shy sometimes... its an amazing mix of a character ur portraying Ritzy di... 👏

Maan... gosh I love him... I so fell tears in my eyes wen he was helplessly talkin to Poonam's photo pouring out his confusion and his turmoil... I love his character... though he did avoid Geet for sumtym... but wen he realised his mistake.. he did make an effort to rectify his mistake.. a beautiful rectification... i love the promising husband he is... a promising human being and a truthful human...

I loved how u showed the entire Handa family celebrating Geet's birthday... it was sooo joyous to watch them... 😃

okay... i loved the flower idea... though m nt a nature person... but I just loved the essence u created... it was rlly beautiful... 😊

aaahhh... pasta... i had water in my mouth reading that... a few days back ... appi made sum amazingly delicious pasta.. while reading this i could only crave for that pasta... yummmyy... u knw how much I love pasta... 😉

aaahhh... Maan.. finally loosing himself to his beautiful wife... sahi kaha tha Geet ne... kab tak bachoge uske jaadoo se... 😉

aaahhh... I loved how u showed Geet working on the bike.. I really think that Maan's bike.. is it..??? i loved she worked in repairing it n then rode it also..
funniest ws bribing the watchman... 😆 😆

aaahhh... the stitching... I swear its the most romantic thing to do if ur husband is wearing the shirt... 😆 I swear .. i loved the whole scene where Maan jolted with Geet's touch...
n i especially loved the idea of Geet's lipstick mark on Maan's abdomen n Maan touching it as if relishing the touch... it was a beautiful scene...

The Desires I harbour
Are All Oozing Out
The Beats of My Heart
Are All Shouting Out..

I Love You
But I Don't Want to Believe
I Feel For You
But I Don't Want You to See..

Wish I Could Pour Out
What All My Heart Feels
But Still Time Seems to Stop
When With You My Heart Deals..!!