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Posted: 13 years ago

yep so if you guys get now answers for a while means Mel is typing the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 17
Dear Geet,

A smile of yours,
Had me dreaming,
A life full of promises,
That would be fulfilled..

Your one touch
That would always send chills
Down my spine
And make my heart twitter..

Long forgotten are those memories
You and me-Happily together!
Now all I see in front of me
Is a mirage that would disappear any moment..

If i had to wish ever,
I would ask for only one thing,
To be back in your arms and
Never let you leave me..! (written by sally thx sweets)

But sadly enough that is not possible thanks to my one mistake,
Mine dirty revenge.
My dirty revenge,
which take you away from me ,
forever and ever.

Now all I can say is,
I am sorry.
I will never hurt or pester you again,
with my presence.
I am leaving forever,
wishing you a happy live,
forever.

May you get all the happiness in live,
which you deserve and much, much more.

I love you and that will never change.
You hate me is a fact I made.
I gave a sweet innocent angel so much pain,
how could you ever love,
if even I can't see my own face in the mirror.

Bye forever,
Your Maan ( I was and will only always be yours, even when I took my dirty revenge, I promise to that)

Geet fell something wet falling on her hand. She brought her hand to her eyes. She was crying, for the first time in 16 years she was crying. The one whom made her heart of stone, made her heart melt again. She looked at the letter. Maan was gone forever. She fell on her knees.

Rabba hai' rabba
Rabba hai' rabba

Kisi da tu kya laage
Lo tute kache dhaage
Phire dil mara mara
Yaar da tuta sahara
Kyun hai bhala yeh dooriyan
Kyun hai khala ab darmiyan

She started crying more and more. He never touched any other girl. Sameera's words rang in her ears. He never touched me geet I swear on Pari death.

Rabba' tu itna baata de
Haan baata de baata de raaba
Ki kara main hoon ki kara ve
Haan baata de baata de rabba

Geet looked at the letter. I was and will only always be yours, even when I took my dirty revenge, I promise to that. She cried more and remeberd maan' s broken state when she left him at the beach.

Maan arrived home. He walked into his room and looked at Geet's pictures. He grabbed a picture of hers in his hand.

Bhaga bhaaga phirta hai yeh dil
Hai jaane aisi kya hain mushkil
Tere bina jeena nahi hai
Tu toh meri saason mein shaamil
Ho teri duaaiya tere sadke soniya
De de rehaiyaa mainu dil se soniya
Dil ka kahi hai kya sahara
Kyu hai bhala ye dooriyaan

He thought back at what geet told him at the beach. But do you think I can love you again, when all you have done is degraded my soul again and again.Once you made me feel. I am the most important person of your life and the next moment you made me looth myself, to make the mistake to ever love you. it's easy to forget maan but hard to forgive. These scars you gave me, are there to stay forever till my last breath. My love was limitless and that's the reason but the pain you gave me is 10000 times worse and never healing..

She was right how could she ever love a monster like him. She must feel better once would arrive at home. He was gone, she would never have to see the monster who ruined her again. Tears made there way out of Maan's eyes.


Geet stood up. No geet why are you crying. It's good na that he left. Yes it's great that he left everything will be much better now. You will go back to your own life you don't need him why, would you need him all he does is hurt you. He awakes hope in your heart and then he leaves you all alone. Yes geet you don't need him and neither to your girls. But how will Ruchi react when she now he gone. Eh I hate you maan you always but me in such problems but don't worry I will handle it. I won't break down and I will neither let my girls break down.

Rabba' tu itna baata de
Haan baata de baata de raaba
Ki kara main hoon ki kara ve
Haan baata de baata de rabba

Dadi saw Maan arrving at home, But where was Geet. Well she would ask him in the afternoon. He must rest now. She called Nakul.

N:Yes dadi

D:Go to maan's room with food.

N:Saab is back

D:Yes now go

Nakul knocked at the door. maan wiped his tears away.

M:In

N:saab food

M:But the tray on the table,

When nakul left Maan looked at the food. He didn't feel like eaten. Why should he even life when his jaan didn't care. he remeberd her cold look when he was bleeding and her hard words how could he forget them. I hate you maan get out of my life leave me alone. He gave a srcastic smile, while thinking about her harsh words.

Roota roota rehta hain yeh maan
Hai jaane aisi kya hain uljhan
Tere bin hasta nahi hai
Haiii'jaane mere kyun hai dushman
Ho meri tanhaiyan dase mujhko soniya
Hogi ruswaiya tere dil ki soniya
Mere nahi hai ab guzara
Kyun hai bhala yeh dooriyan

Maan put Geet's picture down and left to the gym. He started excersing like there was now tomorrow. The wounds on his body started bleeding badly. But maan didn't care He kept excersing.

maan come on there nurses won't you be happy that they are here to take care of you.

They way geet gave him a disgusting look while saying that flashed in his mind. He excersised more harsher if that was even possible, Blood oozed from his arms and head. Maan started feeling dizzy but he didn't stop, till he heard Nakul's voice.

N:Saab aab yaha dadi was asking what you where doing at the gym at this time.

Dadi saw the light on off the gym and got worried. She ahd found maan a couple of times unconsious in the gym. So she sended Nakul to check. She hoped he was okay. geet was alive so why would he hurt himself now, unless something really bad happend between the two of them. Dadi was to scared to go and asked maan. She didn't knew or she was able to take the bad news. Dadi was walking in her room from one side to the other, all nervous praying everything was okay.

M:Wo nothing I was just not sleepy so anyway where is dadi

N:In her room

M:Okay you go tell dadi I am okay I am just coming to her

Maan went to dadi after he cleaned his wounds and hided it. He wore shirt with long sleeves and a excersice bandage on his head.

D:Maan what's this on your head

M:Oh dadi I love wearing it Nishu gave it to me.

D:Nishu acha but why didn't the grils come with you and geet where is she.

M:Wo dadi I came here to finish a project and Geet works in HP she helps girls you now na so she couldn't come with me and the girls need to go to school.

D:Hmmm but how long are you going to stay here and is it not better if geet comes here and leaves her work. And we find a school for the grils in deli

M:No dadi don't worry I will find a solution for that

D:Theek hai but what where you doing at the gym. You just come back.

M:Wo was missing geet and the girls a lot so i decided to excersive a bit so iw ould get tired and could sleep

D:Hmmm I hope you haven't hurt yourself you now na geet and the girls wouldn't like that.

maan's mind went to all the harsh words geet said and Nishu at the very beginning when he came back.They don't care if I am alive or dead Maan thought.

M:I know dadi so I didn't hurt ,myself. I wouldn't dare.

Dadi was convinced. She smiled.

D:No go and try to rest.

Maan left to his room.


Precap:nishu's reaction. And will nishu tell geet the truth

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Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
😭😭😭me first😭😭
yaaro yeh khushi ke aasu hai
main first😭😭😭

yeh kaise ho gaya
its all bcose i love you tooo much dear

tu waha first
main yaha first

as i say
ik dusre se karte hai pyaar hum...

waise darling somg kafi aacha tha
and stop doing this with my daddy
its enough darling
yaar kyu mere papa ka saara khoon bahane par tuli hai

Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update..
Song was so touching...
Really feeling bad for maaneet...
I hope nishu will bring back her dad..
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Posted: 13 years ago
really very sad part
poor maan him self torturing
maan lie for daadi..
geet breaking down but she dont want to care him
what nishu will do
i have feeling nishu will join KC
loved it
Edited by kahkashansakina - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem update waiting for nishu to tell geet the truth
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Posted: 13 years ago
well written. feel bad for maan
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Posted: 13 years ago
@ sara kaha ho tum
@anu class kitni lambi hai dear
saturday off nahi dete kya
@ruchs mam aap update to deti nahi hai
kam se kam comment hi dedo


sweet ,innocent and sabse pyaari nishu waiting for you all
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update..
the song was good...
wat will the reaction of nishu now
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow…😊

The feeling of pain and separation came out very strongly in this update…😭

Glad that Dadima still cared about him though from far…😭

After all she is like his Mother!!!😃

Poor Maan still lying…

Hmmm Me really wondering will Nishu tell the truth…

Hope she does…😳

Had logged in just now and Got the surprise Update…😃

Thank you for making my day dear…😳

Love you!!!😳

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