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Remya

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Posted: 13 years ago

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congrats for the new thread..

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CONGRATES MEL muahhh 🤗 🥳 🥳

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Melvina Preece

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Part 10
M:Please geet I promise I will make it up to you. I will do everything you say.
G:You now Maan I don get what your doing here. Nishu hates you she can't stand you face. remember how you said you would make my daughters hate me looks like they hate you now. And Ruchi when she will come to now the truth she will be disgusted to call you father.
M:geet please don't tell her give me one change
G:Looks like the table are turned Maan. One wrong move and I promise I will show the world your real face and everyone including your Ruchi will hate you and no one will be able to stop me from punishing you now even Brij. So you better make sure there never comes a tear in Ruchi eyes or else I promise maan I will take my dirty revenge.
M:I promise geet I promise.

Geet torn the sorry letter into pieces and threw it on maan's face. She left from the room.When Geet left Maan fell on the floor he never felt so broken, tears felt from his eyes.THE GREAT MSK was completly broken. Maan stood up and drove to his hotel. He started swimming loops like a made man. He stood up and went to his room. When he saw his face in the mirror he felt digusted. He broke the mirror. He broke everything in his room. He stopped breaking everything when his phone rang. It was Ruchi. Maan closed his eyes and took a deep breath. He picked up.

M:Hi Ruchi. You okay
R:Dad where are you
M:Princess I just went to the hotel to get my stuff. I will be back home in half a hour.
R:Okay daddy I will be waiting
M:Alright bye princess
R:Bye dad

Maan went to the counter he asked the women at the counter to make a bill for stuff he broke. He would pay everything. maan bandaged his hand and went to his new home.

Nishu was sitting in the balcony she called up Sara.

S:Hey what's up girlfriend
N:Maan is back. he is entering the gate with his stuff.
S:Hmm so the dirty old fellow is back. I promise you Nishu he will regret that he came back.
N:Hmm he surly will
S:Did you talk to aunty
N:Yes I told her I know everything
S:WHAT. What was her reaction

Nishu told her everything.

S:hmmm
N:Any plan
S:Not freally lets just have fun on Nishu, Sara style what say

Nishu smirked

N:You know I am already feeling bad for him.

Sara laughed.

S: By the way call me when your so called Brij unclu comes
N:Why
S:To give him a special treatment come on yaar he is are guest

Nishu Laughed.

N:And we really take good care of are guests. But no yaar I don't think he will ever come but if he comes I will defo call you.
S:Acha yaar I send you something mom ke haath. Mom is coming to meet that dirty oh so dirty fellow. It's a package take it. If you open it you will now what to do with ok.
N:Alright and thx
S:Are you mad or what thanking me
N:Fine fine your right why should I thank you

Both the girls laughed and hung up. Maan walked towards his and geet room. he put his bags on the ground. Geet turned around.

G:maan there is the sofa. You can sleep on that.
M:Alright.
G:And you stuff well you can put them in that closet
M:Hmm

Geet sat on the bed and started reading a book. Maan tried to put his stuff in the closet put his hand was paining badly. He accidently hit his hand on the table and it started bleeding. Geet heard him scream in pain. She looked at him coldy. She looked at his hand but couldn't care less. Cause she only fellt pure hate for him. The love she ones used to feel died way back. Blood started too ooze out of maan's hand. But somewhere it was irritating her to see the sight in front of her eyes. Yes it didn't pain just irritated her.

G:Maan your making everything dirty go clean you wound up. I will tell the maid to put your stuff in the closet.
M:Thx geet

Maan walked to the washroom with a smile thinking geet cared. Geet called a maid an asked her to do everything.Geet left the room and sat in the garden. Maan walked into room but didn't see geet. He went to the study but she wasn't there either. Maan started panicking it was like he would lose her again. He took a deep breath closed his eyes for a while and started searching her again. He finally saw her sitting in the garden reading a book. He walked towards her and sat next to her. Geet knew he was sitting nect to him but she ignored him and kept reading.

M:You now geet when you and we all that you.

He left the sentence infunished and continued.

M:I thought I lost everything. Just a day before Arjun told me that how much you meant to him and Annie.
G:Annie kasie hai woh ab
M;See is fine but when she couldn't find you she got upset. I hurt all the people I love thx to my stupidity. I hate myself for that. I fell digusted to see my own face in the mirror.

Geet ignored whatever maan said.

G:Can I have anie's number.
M:Of course

Maan gave her Anie's number.

M:Geet you know

Geet stood up dialing Annie's number and left from there. Maan closed is eyes in pain. Come on maan don't give up keep trying. A idea stricked me. Yes this may work.Geet called Annie but she didn't pick up. Maan came from behind her.

M:Geet Annie went on vacation to ***** country. It's 2 in the morning she must be sleeping.

Geet hung up. That's when the maid came.

M:Madame Rani is here
G;Send here in
R:Hi geet kaisi hai
G:Hi Rani. I am fine. Meet my husband Maan
R:Oh geet I am so happy for you

Rani stayed for a while. before leaving she handed Geet a package for Nishu. Geet gave the packet to Nishu. Nishu smirked like a true devil. After that geet went to her room.Maan came and lay on the sofa. Both closed there eyes but they couldn't sleep. That was normal for Maan he hadn't slept in 16 years. The only way he could sleep was the excersice till he fainted or to take sleeping pills. He stood up and took a sleeping pill. Geet on the other hand had no such a big problem to sleep ever since her two angels where born, but today she couldn't close her eyes. It was finally morning.

Nishu stood up, got ready and called Sara.

S:Hi meri kamini dost kaisi hai
N:I am fine meri besharam dost. I got your packet. But you now what to do na.
S:Haan haan don't worry I am all perpaired. I was just about to call aunty
N:Acha then I will hang up. Bye and good luck
S:Sweets good luch mutjehe nahi pher dirty fellow ko uski zaroorat hogi and you make sure you don't mess anything up
N:Oh hello Nishu Singhania khabi kuch mess up nahi karti jo bhi karti hai perfection ke saath karthi hai.
S:Acha acha mer ma ap phone rak.

Nishu smiled and hung up. There plan to torture maan oops dirty fellow was all set. Maan woke up he knew what to do today to cheer geet a bit up his plan was all set.

Precap: give atleast 30 ideas to maan how to make it up to his geet chalo chalo socho

next: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2943244/dirty-revenge-2-page-1-link-to-thread-3?pn=21

Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago

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tamannA

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Posted: 13 years ago

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awsem nishu planning against maan maan wounded his hand geet have no feelings toward him geet took annie number so idea for making geet believe his love true first he has to show unconditional love on daughters and win nishu heart and then he can think of geet do next soon

Edited by tamanna1391 - 13 years ago

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Melvina Preece

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: tamanna1391
awsem nishu planning against maan maan wounded his hand geet have no feelings toward him geet took annie number so idea for making geet believe his love true first he has to show unconditional love on daughters and win nishu heart and then he can think of geet do next soon

oh that's a really good one thank you tamanna

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tamannA

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: mel420

oh that's a really good one thank you tamanna

no need of thanx its my pleasure you like it

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zaara2212

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

not sure dear what will make geet happy
i know maan tortured her, but it was true that he did not touch any of the girls he bought with him, which he confessed too...but will geet and nish ever believe him
hmmm feel sad for maan😭

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sadavirk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

some big sacrifice from maan in 16 years which come infront of nishu and then sha helps maan to win geet's heart

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mandeep

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

awesum update dear:)

ohnestly speaking...no idea is comming into ma mind...because wat maan did nothing can compensate that...:(

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Sara Khanna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Ladies and Ladkiyo,
Here is, me *flying kisses*

Ab tak sab jaan gaye hoge ki Sara akhir cheez kya hai.
My girlfriend and me are all set to put my plan into action.
Well, that oh-so-dirty-fellow UNCLE need few dose.
Don't worry about brij, uska bhi intezaam kar lenge hum.
And not to mention, at the end of the day UNCLE Maan humari sharan mey aake aunty se milne ke ideas jaanege.
But not so soon, maza toh lene do.
As usual, humari Ruchs bilkul extra sweet ban rahi hai. *Sara questioning to herself, kya yeh sach mey meri girlfriend ki real sis hai*.
Aunty filhaal cold shield ban kar baithi hai but... Jaan ne ke liye aage padho.
Trust me, yeh story typical rona-dhona, melo drama ya sorry song wali nahi hai.
You will get confuse ki yeh comedy hai ya horror ya romantic and so on. You will cherish it like a ever changing season.

Mel, hum kya idea de sakte hai? I mean, Ruchs already thinks that Maneet are very much together aur me and Nishu *evil smirk*.

Do cont soon and do PM me.