MY LIFE-MY INSPIRATION-MG(PART5-PG20) - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
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waiting eagerly for ur update
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hey buddies,
i am really sry to keep u all waiting..but was really held with something..
so please forgive me..giving u update in 30 min...
thanks to all who waited for me..and who liked my work..
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Hey buddies,I knw u all wanted to know when maan ish entering in geet's life'don't worry..i think I 5-6 part u will see maan and teaser also'all for now'here is the update ..hope u all will in enjoy it'thanks to all the people who liked my work..who liked and commented my work..i am really thank full to u all'

Part -4

I remembered my another struggle with this world..with this nature'I hate rain..not because I hate that wonderful smell of mud after rain'not that I don't love that rain drop..as a child I always love to play rain..but was never allowed..because I was weak and easily get cold'and after that medicines and all'that will waste money..i was never able to enjoy rain..so I started hating it'this was season when most of difficulty comes my way'I live I slum area of HP'and people know the condition of slum areas..no proper management of water,drainge and all..and that collection of water in broken pit..then diseases made me feel sick'but slowly and slowly I started adjusting In that envornment..

It was yet another rainy season..same problem..same story..i saw some of my village mates..playing In the rain..how lucky!!..i thought..after that I saw..'chachi' scolding them to inside..i laughed'here I standing inside my small cottage trying to fix the leak..there was a hole on the roof'that's why I hated rain..it bring so many problem for me..i was searching for the solution to the problem..when the rain finally slow down..i moved outside to get something..which may fix it temporarily'.i saw a polthine bag dupmed near the waste..may be someone dumped it..i quickly ran and picked two'I thought..two would be enough for now'I reached rome..brought the broken chair near the place..so that I can fix it..i stand on the chair..there was fear of falling down..but I have to be carefull'as I don't want to break my any bone'I asked Vicky to hold the chair'he hold'I quickly put the polthine bag there..finally It was fixed'i quickly came down..i saw naughtyness in vicky's eye..i know he is upto something..i came near him..signalled him what..he cutely made a baby face and his cute dimple came..i asked him what..he showed me..and said "dee galti se tuutt gaya'voh mein apni car nikal raha tha..aur galti se apki fav doll tutt gayi..maafi..plzz.."'I was not angry at him..but after hearing him..i had a small smile in my smile..how innocent he is..he was my rays of happiness'I said fakingly " tu rukk Vicky ke bache..tujhe tho mein batati huin.."'he said naughtly " mera bache kahan hain??...mera bache jain..aur mujhe he nahi pata"..i said "badmash..tu ruk.."..i ran behind him..in the small cottage'I finally caught him..we both just laughed and laughed..he started tickling me..and same with me..he was the only person who can make me laugh..he was my ray of happiness'I always wanted best for him..i saw 'maa' and 'paa' adorable seeing towards us'

May be we don't have manything'but our toghterness is enough to make it special..i heard Vicky said " moti dee"' now was really angry..ya I knw it was not truth I cant be angry for him long'I moved my head backward as if saying that I am angry..i saw from the corner of eye Vicky approaching'he said "dee gussa ho?"..i pretened as if I didn't hear him..but that was not truth'he came near my cheeks and gave me a kiss and said "sorry"..that was enough to melt me'I hugged him'

That day was started bad but ended good'I came to know togtherness is most important'.i again wondered how life changes..as I was upset in the morning..but now I am more than happy..life is unpredictable'I was thinking what next is stored for me..tomorrow..another day..another beginning'

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I hope I am writing well'sometime it becomes really difficult to relate..hope u liking the stry and geet's character..😊

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Edited by ishanidhi08 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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mai first ... yeee ... peee... 🥳
Edited by maansee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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comments key liye😃. and yes second too


really loved their bounding...

come back soon with another update...

loving it...

Edited by maansee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i m loving your ff... hi mai third bhi ho gayi.,...☺️😍
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now it is open for rest of the friends😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow!writing skill s improving a lot...
Beautiful update..Once again u showed the real "Life"
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Awsm thought seriously loved it

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