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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 21

Dadima who had come to see geet for the last time was shocked to see Maan sitting near Geet and talking. She once was angry as he did not come for the whole day but listening to his words made her to stop in her track. Unknowingly there were tears in her eyes seeing Maan breaking down like tat. Though she knew tat he had done sins but she knew tat Geet always loved him.

" Nahi Maan aap yu thoot nahi sakthe. Abhi tho yeh sirf shuruvaat hui hain Maan aur abhi bahut kuch dekhna baaki hain. hum janthe hain ki aap ne hume wada kiya hain par hum yeh bhi janthe hain ki aap Geet se ab aur dur nahi reh payenge aur aapko humari har kausauti pe khara utarana hoga Maan. hume Yakeen ho juka hain ki jo faisla humne liya hain woh galat nahi hain ab aapko apne aap ko sambhit karna hoga. Sambhit karna hoga jo galati aapse huyi hain aap uski sazza pane ke liye tayar hain. aur aapki sazza yeh hain ki aap khud geet ko tadapte dekhe aur ushe ishe bahar nikale."

( no maan u cant break like this maan. this is just the start maan and there is lots to see and bear. I know tat u promised me but I also know tat u will not be able to stay away from her and u will cross all obstacles for her. I now have full faith maan tat my decision was not wrong and u will prove urself now. U will prove tat u r ready fro taking the punishment for ur sins from geet and u will bring geet out of this darkness Maan)

The next day all were having the breakfast at Khuranna Mansion when Maan came.

Maan: Dadima aap ne hume yaha kyu bhulaya, I mean in the Mansion.

( dadima you called me here)

Dadima: Maan, jaise ki doctor ne kaha hain ki aapka Geet ke saath hona jaruri hain tho hum chah the hain ki aap shyam ke samay apne do ghanthe Geet ke saath beetao. Par yeh yaad rakhna ki aap apni hadh kabhi paar na kare warna humse bura koi nahi hoga. Samjhe aap.

( Maan, as doctor said tat u need to spend time with geet, so everyday u will spend two hours with geet. But remember tat u don't cross ur limits)

Maan: Haan dadima, hum yeh yaad rakhenge. Waise bhi pata nahi humare paas kitna waqt hain.

( yes dadima, I remember, and I know tat I have very less time with geet)

Dadima: aur ek baat, hum chah the hain ki jab aap Geet ke saath ho tab Vicky aap dono ke saath rahi, hume aap par ab koi barosa nahi hain, hum nahi chah the hain ki hume aisa lage ki humara faisla galat sambhit ho.

( and one more thing I want Vicky to stay with u when u r with geeet as I still don't believe u, I don't want my decision to be wrong)

Vicky: nahi dadima, hum aapki yeh baat nahi maanthe. Jaha yeh MSK ho hum waha saas bhi nahi lena pasand karenge. Unke saath rehna tho dur ki baath hai. Aap inke gunaah bhool sakthi hain par hum nahi. jab bhi hum bhabi ko dekthe hain, aisa lagtha hain ki yeh woh ladki hain hi nahi jinhe hum mile the. Bhabhi ko dekhar hume apne aap pe sharam aati hain ki hum inh jaisa logo se ristha rakthe hain. bachpan mein hume ristho ke maanyane batane wale ne khud hi apne sabse khoobsurat rishte ko maar dala. Hum bhi inhe ke bhai hain dadima agr yeh gusse mein aakar apne pyar aur patni ko zillat bhari zindagi de sakthe hain tho main bhi inhse nafrat kar saktha hoon aakhir inhone hi tho seekhaya hain ki hume hamesha sachayi ka saath dena hain. Kyu bro theek kaha na hume.

( no dadima I will not listen to this. I don't even feel to breadth when he is around and stayin g with him is out of question. U can forget his sins but not me. Whenever I see bhabi I feel tat I don't know her.seeing her I feel ashame of myself tat I belong to this family. He used to tell us the importance of relation but wat did he do, he killed his own relations which was the m ost beautiful. I m his own brother dadima if he can destroy his own wife nad baby with his anger than why cant I hate him for tat as he is the one who taught us to stay with truth. Did I say right bro)

Maan: haan Vicky theek kaha hain aapne. Par Vicky hum aapko aur kuch nahi kehna chah the kyun ki hum iske kambhil nahi hain. Par jitni yeh baat sach hain ki hume yeh sab gunaah kiye utni hi yeh baat bhi sach hain ki hum Geet se pyar karthe hain. humare gunaab ki maafi nahi hain phir bhi hum aap sab se maafi mangthe hain. hum nahi jaanthe ki hume geet ko apna kehne ka ya ushe pyar karne ka koi haq hain par haan yeh baat hain hain ki hum ab geet ke kambhil nahi hain. hum sirf yahi chah the hain ki Geet jaldi se theek hokar hum ushe apni ish nafrat bhari zindagi se azaad karde.

( yes Vicky u are right. But I will not saything else as I m not capable of tat. The way it is true tat I have done this sins its also true tat I love geet. My sins are not forgivable but still I will say sorry. I don't know tat do I have any rights on geet to love her or to say tat she is mine but I do believe tat m not capable of her and I only want tat she gets well soon and I can free her from this hatred filled life)

Vicky: wahi theek hoga aapke liye. Shayad bhagwan bhi nahi chah the hain ki aap jaise insane ka saaya bhi bhabi par pade. Jo insane apne hi bache ko maar saktha hain woh kisi dusre ko zindagi kabhi nahi de saktha.

( tat will be good only for you. Even god does not want tat ur shadow should fall on her. the man who can kill his own baby can never give life to another)

Yash: please Vicky, its enough. How much will u accuse Maan for all this. cant u see the pain in his eyes. The pain which he has been getting from one year. Why don't u and maa understand tat we are losing him day by day. Why don't u both understand tat he is been dying every second. Kyu nahi samjhthe ho ki Maan humare zindagi se dur jaa raha hain. kyu uski sazza aur bada rahe ho.

Vicky: kyu dad, aapko bro ki bahut chintha hain par tab kaha the aap jab aapki bahu zindagi se ladh rahi thi. Tab kaha the aap jab aapke ishe bte ne unhe maarne ke liye chod diya tha.

( why dad, y do u care for bro so much. Where was this care when ur daughter in law was dying)

Naina: bas Vicky, bahut hua. Hum maanthe hain ki Maan ne galati nahi balki gunaah kiya hain. par unhe ush gunaah ki sazza bhi mil juki hain aur shayad aage bhi milti rahegi. Waise bhi maa ne tho faisla kar liya hain na ki Geet ke theek hone ke baad, Maan ushe divorce dega phir hum kyu ushe baar bar yeh dard de rahe hain. please Vicky main tumhe request karthi hoon Maan ko yeh kuch din geet ke saath bina kisi dard ke jeene dijiye. Jeene dijiye ushe uske pyar ke saath, jeene dijiye ushe uski geet ke saath taki who inh palo ko khaid kar sake aur apni baki zindagi unke sahare jee sake. Hum aapse nahi kethe ki aap unhe maaf kare, hum bhi nahi klar sakthe par humne dekha hain unhe pal pal maarthe, dekha hian humne ki woh hum sabke hote huye bhi ek begano ki zindagi jee rahe hain. Hum Geet aur Maan ko kho juke hain Vicky aur shayad unhe kabhi wapsa nahi paa sakthe par please hum aapse bheek maangthe hain, aisa kuch mat kijiye jishe humari aakhri asha bhi thoot jaye. Please Vicky humari baat maan lijiye. Aapki maa aapse zindagi main aur kuch nahi maagegi.

( enough Vicky, its enough. I know wat Maan has done are sins and not just mistakes but he did get his punishment and still will be getting. And Maa has already decided tat after geet gets well, maan will divorce her than why are u giving him the same pain again and again. Please Vicky I request u let maan live these few days with geet without any pain. Let him live with his love, let him live with his geet so tat he can keep these moment in his memory for the rest of the life. I don't say tat u forgive him as we ourself cant but I have seen him dying every second, living a life of darkness awhne he had all of us. Vicky we have lost them and will never get them back the way they were but please I beg u tat don't do anything tat my last hope shatters. Please Vicky listen to me and I wil never ask anything to u in ur life)

Yash: bas karo Naina. Humare zindagi mein bacho ka shukh nahi hain. humari apni aulad ne humare ghar ko ish andhre mein dala hain aur uski sazza tho hume milni hain na. please tum aisa karke apni tabiyat kharab kar logi. Ab chup ho jao.

( enough naina. We are not so lucky so see our childrens happy. Our own child has given us this pain and will be getting it for life long. Please by doing this u will affect u health)

Maan had tears I n his eyes seeing his mom begging for him. in this all months his mother never ever said anything to him, but today he knew tat some where or the other he had someone for him. he could not stand there anymore and silently went away.

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As per the decision, Maan came in the evening to meet Geet.he was sacred, yes Maan ws scared for the first time to meet Geet. He was sacred as to how will he face her even though see was not at all aware about wats going on around her. He slowly went to her room and opened the door of her roo, and wasa shocked to see the sight in front of him.

Geet was all standing near the window all lost in her dark world, unknown tat her state was making her love all the more guilty. Maan slowly went near her and called out her name. when finding no response from her he once again called her but still no response. He slowly touched her an turned her around only to see her beautiful yes all blank which once used to have love for him. one look in her eyes made him to shatter into million pieces. He just wanted to hug her and shield her away from this world but he did not dare have tat right. He slowly took Geet to the bed and made her sit on it.

Maan: Geet, main nahi jantha ki humare kismet mein kya hain aur nahi main tumse kahuga main tumse bahut pyar kartha hoon kyun ki yeh haq main kho juka hoon. Zindagi mein itne gunaah kar juka hoon ki ginthi bhi nahi jaantha hoon. Jaanthi ho Geet ki tumhe mujhe pyar ka ehsaas dilaya tha aur maine ushi pyar ko beizzat kar diya. Maine tumhe har taraf se barbaad kar diya par tumne mujhe kabhi galat nahi samjha. Tumne humare bache ko ish duniya mein lane ke liya apni jaan tak khatre mein daali jab ki main khud ushe apna nahi maan saka. Geet main yeh dava nahi karunga ki main tumse pyar karth hoon aur main tumhe zindagi main wapas chah tha hoon par agar tum sun rahi hoo tho meri ek baat sun lo geet ki meri gunaah ki sazza apne aap ko mat do. Mat do apne aap ko itni takleef ki tumara yeh Maan mar jaye. Mat do apne aap ko meri gunaah ki sazza taki jab main kabhi tumare baaremein sochu tho mujhe sirf tume diye hue dard yaad aaye. Na Geey aisa mat samjhna ki main tumhe apna dard kam karne ke liye yeh sab keh raha hoon par please tum jadli theek ho jao taaki main apni baki sazza pa saku, woh sazza jo maine apne haatho se leekhi hain, woh sazza jo main maarte dam tak paaunga par yeh khushi hogi ke tum kahi khush ho.

( geet , I don't know wats there in our destiny and nor I will say tat I love u as I don't have tat right. I have done so many sins tat I cant even count them. Do u know geet tat u made me belive in love and I myself destroyed tat. I destroyed u from all sides but u never blamed me. U put ur life at stake for our child when myself did not believe tat its mine. I will not say tat I love u or I want u back in my life but please don't give urself this pain for my sins. Don't give this pain to urself tat ur maan dies. Don't give this pain to urself tat whenever I think about u I rememeber about it. Don't think tat m telling this so tat my pain decreases but please get well soon so tat I can get my remaining punishment)

I'm sorry for not being good as you. I'm sorry for only being me. I'm sorry for not being good enough, its true. I'm sorry for letting you down. I'm sorry for not making you smile. I'm sorry for every reason to smile, I give three to frown. I'm sorry for not making it worthwhile. I'm sorry for not making this work out. I'm sorry for having this end. I'm sorry for doubting you.. I'm sorry for not being a good enough man. I'm sorry for being myself. But believe me geet Without you, my happiness is forbidden, My heart without you, is not at all replete, My life without you, is so incomplete...I can't imagine existing in a world where someone doesn't love me the way you do. You're the only one who ever understood me and accepted me for who I am. Your love always has been and always will be life's greatest gift to me.

But now m here all alone thinking it through, trying to convince myself that I'm not losing you, Why can't you just forget the things I've said? I was angry at the time but now I've cleared my head and now praying for a life-line, cause I'm, losing you, but u don't care enough to try and giving up this fight, I know I have done many sins but losing you is just to much for me to take and I wont stand, wont stand loosing you. I really want you to hold me, I want you to see how much I care, how much I love you and I want you to know I m really sorry. Please Geet come and hold your Maan, your Love before he destroys himself more. I know geet you will try as your love is more stronger than me. I really love you geet.

He looked ta Geet to find any emotions in her eyes but no her eyes were all blank telling the darkness in their life. Maan got up now determined to make her to come out of her shell.

Maan: chalo geet, hum bahar jathe hain. tumhe parks bahut pasan hain na, jaha tu bacho ko khelthe hue dekhkar hamesha khush hoti thi, tho aaj hum park jayenge geet.

( let go out geet. U love parks na, where u love seeing children palying)

Maan took Geet to the park, the park where they used to spend hours sitting and chatting while Geet used to enjoy the view there. Maan made Geet to sit on the bench while he sat next to her.

Maan: geet tumhe yaad hain. hum ish park mein gantho baithe. Ek din tho hume ish park mein jagda bhi kiya tha. Tum hamesha yaha aana chah thi aur main tumhe har baar mana kartha tha par aakhir mein tum mujhe mana leti thi. Mujhe aaj bhi samjh nahi aata hain Geet ki aakhir ish park mein aisa kya hain jo tum yaha aane ke liye itna mujhe tangh karthi thi. Couples tho akele mein time beetha the par hum dono yaha ish bheed mein. Tum bhi ajeeb ajeeb si cheese karthi thi mujhe tangh karne ke liye.

(geet do u remember tat we used to spend hours in this park. One day we even fought in this park. U always wanted to come inthis park and I used to not agree but atlast I used to come with u. I still don't get geet tat wat is there in this park tat u used to trouble me so much to come here. Couples liked to spend time alone and we used to come here full of people. U always did weird things to trouble me)

He once again looks at geet for any change but was left all shattered with no response. But he could not fail, he had to bring geet back..

Maan: geet tumhe ajeeb nahi lagtha ki main itna bhol raha hoon. Hamesha tumhe yahi shikayat rehthi thi na ki main bahut kam baatein kartha hoon par aaj dekho maine tumhe hara diya. Geet tum haar jaoungi so jaldi se baat karlo warna baad mein mat kehna ki maine tumhe warn nahi kiya. Waise tum tumhe yaad hain na ki jab bhi main jeeta hoon tumhe mujhe gift dena padta hain aur woh gift tumhe aaj bhi dena hoga, tho agar harna anhi chah thi ho tho baat karo mujhse. Dekho geet main aakhir baar keh raha hoon, baat karo warna main jaantha hoon ki tumara muh kaise khul saktha hain. dekho geet main ab tumara Maan nahi hoon bakli business tycoon MSK, aur tum jaanthi ho ki main jo kehta hoon woh kar ke deektha hoon. So open ur mouth and say something. Woh dekho geet waha ice cream hain tumhe bahut pasand hain nay aha ki, tum yahi wait karo main leke aata hoon.

( geet don't u feel strange tat m talking so much. U always used to complain na tat I talked less but see now I made u to loose. Geet u will loose so come fast start talkingand don't say tat I did not warn u . and u remember na tat whenever I win u used to give me gift and today also u have to give me. Geet m warning you for the last time start talking otherwise I know how to do it. Geet now m not ur Maan but business tycoon MSK and I do wat I say. So open ur mouth and say something. Geet u love icecream na see there I will get u one)

He went to bring the ice cream and was standing in the queue.He turned to see Geet but was shocked not to find her. the moment he realized tat geet was not there next to him he felt his whole world crashed once again. He got up and called out to her, ran from here and there to see if Geet was nearby but no she was not there. He asked the people around to see if there had seen her but there were no answers. He ran, searched and screamed for her but she was not there. He was searching her like a mad in the whole park but there was no sign of her. he reached the parking area to see if she had come here but no she was not there . He searched the entire place but geet was no where.

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Here geet saw a baby who was being carried by her mother. The baby was all the time looking at Geet and Geet was looking at the baby. When they started moving Geet got up and walked behind them. She was so lost in the baby's smile tat she reached out of the park and missed them but she kept walking and walking and was far away from the park.

She was aimlessly roaming on the road and at one point stuck in between the busy traffic and they whole traffic came to halt making people to shout at her. People started to come out of their vehicles and verbally abuse her with their words. Geet could not take the all this and she fainted all of a sudden. The people there panicked to see her in tat condition but were smart enough to call the ambulance and soon geet was shifted to the hospital.

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Here after searching Geet everywhere Maan was sacred now for her. He did not waste time and called the commissioner for help asking him to search for Geet without letting anyone to know about her. the commissioner was shocked to hear tat Geet was all alive and asked Maan about it but Maan just told tat she is alive and was with him but now missing. He also told him tat she was not in her senses. After informing him, Maan searched for Geet once again and finally decided to go home. He reached the Mansion only to see everyone waiting for them. As soon as he reached inside he was asked questions.

Dadima: Maan, aap akele, geet kaha hain.

( maan where is geet)

Maan: dadima woh geet, I mean geet.

Naina: Maan humne aapse kuch poocha Geet kaha hain. aapne tho humse kaha than a ki aap geet ko park mein le jaa rahe hain phir geet kaha hain.

( maan we asked u something, where is geet, u said tat u are taking her to park than where is she now)

Maan: Mom Geet ko kuch pata nahi chal raha hain.

( mom I cant find geeet)

Dadima: pata nahi chal raha hain matlab. Woh aapke saath hi thin a phir.

( wat do u mean tta u cant find her, she was with u na tha)

Maan: haan dadima par jab mein uske liye ice cream lane gaya tha tab woh kahi chali gayi. Maine ushe sab jagah dekh liya par nahi mili woh.

( ya dadima but when I went to bring ice cream for her she was not there, I searched her everywhere but she was not there.)

Vicky who was coming down from the stairs heard everything and was shocked but soon his anger over took him and he said.

Vicky: bas Mr. MSK, apna yeh natak bandh kijiye. Yeh kyu nahi kethe hain ki aap apni zimmedaari theek se nahi neebha sakthe. Hume kaha tha aapse Dadima ki inh par barosa mat kareye, mat kijiye inh par phir se vishwas. ( Vicky holds Maan's collar in anger) bholiye MSK kaha chod aaye aap bhabi ko. Humne aapse kaha tha ki agar ish baar aapne agar koi galati kit ho hum bhool jayenge ki aap humare bade bhai hain.

( enough Mr. MSK, just stop this drama. Y don't u say tat u could not handle ur responsibility. I had told u dadima don't trust him, don't ever trust him with geet. ( Vicky holds maans collar) tell MSK where did u leave geet and come. I had told u tat if u do mistake again tat u will have to face meand I will forget tat u r my elder brother)

Dadima: chodo Vicky. Chod do Maan ko. Kyu Maan aapne aisa kyu kiya. Hume kaha than a ki aap ish baar humara vishwas mat thodeye phir bhi aap.

( leave him Vicky. Why maan, why did u do this. I had told u tat don't break my trust this time.)

Maan: nahi dadima hum sach keh rahe hain. Geet humari jaan hain dadima, hum tho bas ushe park leke gaye the. Pata nahi woh kab aur kaise waha se chali gayi.

( no dadima, belive me. Geet is my life, I just took her to the park but I did not know where she went)

Vicky: enough Mr. Khuranna. Bahut sun lya humne aapka ab aur nahi. kyu har baar aap aisi galati karte ho jiski safai bhi nahi de sakthe hain aap. har baar wada karke aap thod dete ho aur phir sazza maangthe hoon. Agar bhabhi ka khayal nahi rakh sakthe tho bas aaj ke baad aap unshe nahi milogi. Hum nahi chah the ki unhe aur takleef ho.

(enough Mr. Khuranna. We heard enough from u and not more. Why do u do mistakes when u cant even explain them. Everytime u do promises and break them and than ask for punishment. If u cant take her care than from today don't even come close to her. I don't want her to get more pain)

Maan( angrily): enough Vicky, I had enough from you. I agree tat I have done many sins but I have been paying for tat. Iska yeh matlab nahi ki har baar tum mujhe yeh ehsaas dilaoge ki main geet se pyar nahi kartha. Iska yeh matlab nahi ki tum har baar mujhse yeh ehsaas dilaoge ki main geet ka khayal nahi rakh sakta. Tum kya jaanoge Vicky, ki main kaise jee raha hoon. Apni aankho ke samne apne pyar ko ish halat mein dekhar. Do u really think Vicky tat I don't care for her. she is the one who made me feel wat love is, she is one who told me tat life is meant to enjoy with love but it was me who never understood her pure love and sacrifice and when I came to know about it it was too late. Tumhe ehsaas bhi nahi hoga Vicky ki jis din dadima ne hume bataya ki Geet mar juki hain ush din yeh Maan Singh Khuranna bhi mar gaya tha. Jee raha tha main andhero mein jaha na koi ujala tha na koi zindagi. Apne aap se ladh tha raha hoon main ki aakhir main apne hi pyar par barosa kyu nahi kar paya, kyu nahi dekh paya apni Geet ki aankho mein sachayi, kyu nahi apni dil ki baat mani jo hamesha se yeh keh thi ki meri geet kabhi galat nahi ho sakthi. Apne inhi haatho se Vicky maine apne bache aur apni geet ko maar dala aur uski sazza main shayad zindagi bar pata rahunga but please Vicky never say tat I don't love her Vicky, never say tat I don't love geet. Zindagi ki har saas ushe pyar karthi rahi Vicky par kabhi jatha nahi paya. Zindagi ki har khushi deni chahyi ushe par nahi de paya but please Vicky never say tat I don't love her. please Vicky ek baar mujhpar yakeen karo Vicky yakeen karo apne ish bhai par. Please Vicky I really love her'.. I really love. Jaanthe ho Vicky aapke bro ish duniya mein kisise nahi dartha par haan ab darne laga hain. Darr lagtha hain ki jab Geet ko puri tarah hosha aayega tab main ushe nazare kaise milaunga. Kya kahunga ushe jab main woh mujhse poochegi ki Maan aapne humare bache ko kyu maarne diya. Kya kahuga jab uski aankhein mujhse jawab maagegi. Apne hi pyar ko apne saamne dard paathe dehk raha hoon main Vicky aur shayad yahi sazza hain meri ki main ushe ush dard se nikal bhi nahi saktha. Geet ko ish haal main dekhar hazaar maute mar raha hoon par phir bhi mere liye yeh sazza kam hain, aur haan dadima ne sahi faisala liya ki mujhe geet ko divorce dena chahiye. Kyu bandhe rakhu main ushe ish nafrat bare rishte mein jisne uski puri zindagi barbaad kar di but please don't say tat I don't love her. I love her Vicky and I always did but my anger did not let me to realize it. Koi bhi sazza do Vicky mujhe par ais amat kaho ki main geet se pyar nahi karta. Kartha hoon Vicky bahut pyar kartha hoon, she is my reason to breadth Vicky, I love her Vicky, please don't say tat I don't.

( enough Vicky, I had enough from u. I agree tat I have done many sins but I have been paying for tat. But this does not mean tat everytime y make me feel tat I don't love geet. It does not mean tta everytime u will say tat I don't care for her. wat u know Vicky tat how m I alive by seeing by love like this in front of my eyes. Do u really thing Vicky tat I don't care for her. she is the one who made me feel wat love is, she is one who told me tat life is meant to enjoy with love but it was me who never understood her pure love and sacrifice and when I came to know about it it was too late. You don't even know Vicky tat when dadima told tat geet is dead the very same day this MSK also died with her. living a life of darkness where there is no light and hope. I have been fighting with myself that why could not I believe my geet, why could not I see the truth in her eyers, why could not I believe my heart which always said tat my geet can never be wrong. I killed my own child nad geet with my bare hands Vicky but please don't say tat I don't love her. my each breadth loved her Vicky but could never say tat, wanted to give her all the happiness but could not. But please Vicky don't say tat I don't love her. just once believe me, for once truts ur brother me, I really love her I really do love her. u know na Vicky tat ur brother does not fear anything but now I do Vicky. I fear tat whenb she will be alrighjt how will I meet her eyes. Wat will I answer when she will ask me why did I let our baby to die. Wat will I answer to the questions tat will be in her eyes. She is in pain in front of me and she my punishnment Vicky tat I cant take her out of this pain. Looking at her m dying thousands of death Vicky but still this punishement is less for. Yes dadima took the right decision tat is hould divorce her, wat right I have to keep her in this hatred feeled relation which only destroyed her but plz Vicky don't say tat I love her. I love her Vicky and I always did but my anger did not let me to realize it. Punish me the way u want Vicky but don't say tat I don't love her. I love her Vicky I love her very much, she is my reason to breadth Vicky, I love her Vicky, please don't say tat I don't. )

Before Vicky could say anything else seeing his brother breaking down Maan's phone rang. He picked the phone up as it was the commissioners phone informing him about Geet's whereabouts'. They all rushed to the hospital where geet was hospitalized. The Khuranna's were shocked to see Geet once again all unconscious on the hospital bed but the doctor assured them tat there was no problem as it was just weakness tat he fainted. The doctor told them how geet was brought to the hospital.

Later once geet opened her eyes she was taken back to the mansion. The whole family had a relief tat nothing major happened. Vicky keenly observed Maan ever since he broke down in front of him and somewhere he felt guilty for his behavior. He knew tat he was over protective for Geet but could not he give his brother a chance. He could see the pain in his eyes and the loneliness in his life.

Precap: Geet reacting to Maan.

Hi sweethearts.. ok now don't be angry on me. Do understand yaar after continuous one year of working I get only this 45 days for me to relax, so was bit lazy this days.. so did not update.. but see I did give you all a long update na.. and I really love you all yaar. I get pm's asking me why I did not update and if I did not reply anyone please don't get angry on me as u know m bit lazy.. but I really love you alll for this'

Ok now coming to main point.. I will speed up now the story so tat I can get back MAAN and GEET together as I also don't want u to torture much now. I have made u cry a lot but now will compensate for all this' but ya don't forget about the divorce yaar, so wait eagerly to see wat happens. How will geet respond and then there are many mysteries to be revealed yaar. Abhi tho sabse bada dushman bhi aane wala hain..

Hope u all love this and like it and comment' ok now I want long comments haan'. With more likes..

Love u alll

Edited by sdlife19 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update


maan geetiing tortured by listening to his bro
vicky

bt vicky is also rite


lets geet decide wht she want
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it
sabse bad dushman is it prem
continue soon dear hope we ge next update soon means in 1-2 days
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem update geet not reacting maan trying talking maan taking geet to park geet behind baby and fainted vicky outburst on maan ,maan breaking down geet back in km i think bada wala dushman is prem
Edited by tamanna1391 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
ossum dear
so emotinal
cant control tears when maan said those words dear
waiting eagerly for the next update dear
pls update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved The Update !!

Maan Breaking Down Is Soo Heart Breaking :(

Feel Sad For MY Maaneet :(

Uh-oh Whos This Big Enemy Now ? :O

Hope To See Maaneet Togetha Again !!:)

Awesome !!:-D


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i have tears in my eyes...😭
i lov u maan.
pls ab aur mat rulado...pls...
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg wt an emotionl updt
me 😭😭😭😭
fllng rlly vry sad 4 maan
bt haapy ki vicky thoda toh trust krna shuru krega maan pe..
precp- egrlyy wtnggg
cont soonn

Edited by tiakashyap - 13 years ago
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finally Maan broke down.. good.. now he can concentrate on Geet..

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