finally i have read the whole 22 parts... 😃it was just amazing... 👏no no... not amazing.. they were heart wrenching parts... it tore my heart apart… 😭you know what I have a problem when I cried then I caught the cold and started sneezing, and after reading these parts, I was sneezing like anything and my eyes became watery…. 😭
you know what you have chose the really very good concept... i mean it's really happening in our society that people use someone's pics and use them as a fake photography and in videos and then blackmail them... prove them characterless... and the people who are living in our society believes on it with their blind eyes... they accuse the person with their harsh words... tortured her by physically and moreover mentally... and the person tolerate it without any fault... such i really hate those peoples who believes like anything without knowing the truth...such peoples are disgusting… has a very low class mentality… some are rich but still having the low class mentality, and the low class thinking & mentality makes them low but still they thinks about theirself like they has not commit any sin… didn't lie to anyone…. and here in the story there were so many ways to find out the truth but no one tried once... in 21st century medical has been improved a lot.. there are so many tests in medical field, we can find out if a girl had sex or not? is she virgin or not? had abort any child or not? Medical field has been improved a lot…. everything is possible but everyone is blind doesn't want to see the truth... you know what when i read the title i thought the story will be about some playing games by maan or geet but when i read the prologue... oh god i found it totally different... i was in shock when i read maan is a rapist... 😲 then i saved whole 22 parts in my lappy and read them in a go... you won't believe but i was sitting in front of my lappy having tissue box in my hand and reading the story...i was like reading some lines, wipe my tears and then threw the tissue away and then i again take a new tissue from the box... but i was in relief that i was alone at home when i was reading otherwise all will think why i am crying so much... my eyes were red due to crying... after completing it i used the eye drops... 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭
now come to the story... you have portrayed the characters very well.. i mean in a right manner.. what they felt at that moment, their every emotions... you were really mind blowing dear in expressing their pain, love, hatred everything... the starting was like a normal college, 2 different groups, spiders & eagles... i was such in a shock finding the gang HANDA's and KHURANA's members in the gang... both loved their rival's sisters... but felt happy when arjun accepted everything... and the confession was just WOW... but the saddy part was when she was begging like anything but she was getting slap and humiliation in back... it pricked my heart... and the wedding night... oh god... he raped her on their wedding night... he didn't gave her food... not allowed her to sleep on bed.. daily ripped her clothes and giving her punishment daily... it was really heart wrenching... when the shimla wala part came and the old couple showering their love on geet... i was feeling happy for her... finally she will get some love from the strangers... yeah i know everyone were repenting but maan... i know he had crossed his limits in his anger but now he truly paying for his deeds... the best part was when dadi was blowing everyone... slapping annie like anything...iss annie ki to mai.. isko sharam nahi aayi itna sab kuch karne ke baad bhi press conference and she doesn't feel any pain when her family accusing her... but she is a jerk... chi chi kiska naam le liya maine.. abhi mujhe khud ko shudh karna padega... everyone was at fault for not believing geet but maan.. how could he do this to her...annie se jayada gussa maan par aa raha hai... how could he do this with his love?? he never love her deeply...if he did then he trust her, trust on his love... and never did to this her... he tore her soul, gave so many wounds and it will take time to heal... but vicky... i know you have portrayed him as a very good person but if he was there when annie told that crap then i am sure he also trust her and accuse geet but he was in US so he came to know the whole truth and now i am feeling really bad for maan that he has listened so many things from vicky and sometimes he also crossed his limits.. i know he was right on his place but this accusing session is going really far... now me hoping that geet will come back in her sense and give the punishment to maan but divorce won't happen i know... hey dear, i want a scene in this ff... i'll pm you about that... if you can manage to add that scene then i'll be very happy...
i know i have took so much time of yours but last but not the least i am really in love with your writing... i am truly loving this one and dangerous love... really i know both are heart wrenching but from a long time i wanted to read any story which has so much pain and here i got this one... jitna time maine read karne me lagaya hai usse half time me to mai royi hu...
hugs to you dear for this one story... i know i missed this from the starting but uske badle me this long comment... I know I know you will think mai kitna bolti hu but inspired by geet… ab jaldi se geet theek ho jaye to mai bhi apni chattering start kar saku…..
and again do update it soon...
me abhi se waiting... you know everyone is greedy and craving for the updates
and please add my likes in 22 parts bec i have read them after saving it... so like nahi kar payi... ok... arey ok na? tell me and reply me hows my reply?
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wow what a mindblowing teaser... i never imagined it but you what i wanted maan punished by geet ...
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