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Chapter 17

3 weeks Later'..

MAAN has neither got chance to see GEET nor to talk with her'..since that horriable day..When He almost lost his Guddi'..he was really frustrated and pissed of the way his family treating him''and Today MAAN decided that he will meet GEET at any cost ...his eyes got moistened while remembering how his GEET tried to end her life, All coz of him'.he is not worth for her. He wanted to see her for once before going back to War Field. He wants to apolyz her for everything he has done and said to her. MAAN's whole family is upto something which is unknown to maan'.MAAN trail of thoughts was put to fullstop when he heard his mom Bhumi called him.

Bhumi "MAAN!!! Main kabbse bhoolarhi hun'.Kaha hain tumhara dhyan'"'"MAAN jaldi karo!!! Humhey anvesha ke sasuraal jaana hian 'usski Godh! Barahi hain'..."'Handling him a sherwaani before question her futhure Bhumi left the room baffeled maan behind. ''.Bhumi showed her thum up to rest of the khurana's who where sitting in the hall predenting to do their work. In room MAAN has no courage to face the HANDA'sS especially GEET HANDA.

@Handa Haveli in GEET's Room

GEET lost in her thoughts while getting ready. She saw her image in mirror, a faint smile visible on her lips. Touched her lips and her wild thoughts reminded their KISS at hospital. A tear escaped from her eyes. GEET to herself "Babajee!!! Hey main aaj kal kya kya soochne lagi hun''.sirf main hi ek jo hun unnkey barey main soochti hun'..Wo tho ek baar bhi mujhse millney nahi aaye aur ek baar bhi baath nahi kiya''.mujhe kuch samjmain nahi aaraha hain'main kya karu'."'..showing her index finger up'."babajee!!! aap sunnrahey ho na'.Dekhiye'..aap kya karengey woo mujhe pata nahi '..bus mujhe MAAN se millna hian''Ghar main sabb abnormal jaise behave karrehy hain'..kisise kuch pooch tho sabb mujhe sullvaney main laggey rehathey hain'."'.looking up'."Aaap Madat karengey na!!!"''Rano entered GEET room and saw her daughter talking to her BABAJEE''smiled to herself'.RANO "GEET! Puttar Jaldi Karo!!!...hey saadi pehano aur jaldise ready hojaho''."'.GEET saw her mom in confusing look'."Per! Maa Saadi q'.Main kohi suit pehanlungi'.na"'.'.RANO came near to her and said '.while caressing her head'."Pagali!!! Aaj ke din tumhariley hain bahut hi kaas hain'chup chaap Jo main kehathi hun woo karo'."'..GEET "KAAS DIN???...per q maa'..aisa kya kaas hain'..aap log mujhe iss room se bahar bhi nikalne nahi derahey ho '.."'geet complained like a cute baby pounting her mouth...RANO'caressed her cheeks'. "Meri baat mano beta'..kuchhi der main '.tumhey pata chal jayega'..challo mujhe bahut kaam hain'..tum jaldise tayyar hojaho'."Saying this Rano came out of the room with a wide grin on her face'. showing her thumb up' mouthed " DONE" to rest of the Handas who are egarly waitng outside.

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MAAN was too engrossed in his redemption which he falied to notice all the decorations made in Khurana Mansion'.he came out wearing the sherwaani given by his mom ''for his surprise no one is at mansion. There he heard his Dadajee Calling him to come out soon'..MAAN just rushed out to find his Dadajee sitting inside the decorated BMW Z4 Roadster, MAAN felt it ODD'.and asked his dadajee'.

MAAN "Dadajee!! Hey??...hey sabb kya hain'..hey car decoration'.kisiki shaadi hain kya''.."'.Dadajee "Maan Puttar!! Kuch hi der main tumhey sabb kuch samaj main aayega'..jaada sawaal matt pooch'."'.MAAN tried again to ask'..he stopped when his cell phone beeped a message'.which made him to smile widely'.ear to ear'.this is the first time after 3 weeks he got message from GEET'.its not that he never tried to call her but his guilt conscious stoped him to do that'''everytime he typed her number which followed by to cut in mid'.he was behaving like teenage puppy lover'.when he opened the inbox'..to read the message'he got his life time shocking news'. GEET : "I'm Getting Married Today. Only Come, If you want to"''.that HIS GEET IS GETTING MARRIED''his blood boiled'..he want to kill that Bloody Langoor Dhulha''in other side Dadajee was observing MAAN, with a wicked smile '.he just called someone and said'." DONE".The Car stopped infront of Handa haveli, immediately maan stepped out of the car just to welcome by the band baaja''..when he reached the main door'.he was stopped by his sister Anvesha'.to take aarti of him'..MAAN lost his last thread of patience and shouted '"ENOUGH!!!"'."Hey kya maazak banakey rakka huwa hain'.."'..all the guest and relatives stood dumbfolded coz of this Crazy DHULHA''except the smiling Handa's and Khurana's''.MAAN came towards Mohindar Handa, GEET's Papajee'.. MAAN "Papajee!!! Mujhe Please ek baar GEET se millna hian''Please mujhe ek baar GEET se Baat karney ka mouka deejeye'."'.with a pleading tone'Dhanraj Khurana Maan's Dad came forward "MAAN hey kaise fariyad hain aapki'..aaj GEET ki shaadi horahi hain'..aapko Kushi honi chahiye'.ki finally GEET shaadi Karrahi hain'..yehi chahathey na aap'.uss din hospital main bhi aapney hi kaha tha "''.MAAN "Papa!! Please Mujhe ek baar GEET se Baat karni hain'..Please!!!"'..Mohindar handa'.thought for a while and said'"Teekhey puttar !!!...aapkey paas 10 minute hain'.."'saying this Mohindar Signaled Rano to take MAAN to GEET's Room'.

Here in GEET's Room'.

GEET is unaware of all this drama''.she tiered of sitting at one place which is unlike her. She was looking totally stunning with the red saari which she was wearing'.her milkey skin glowing like a snow'' She was thinking about MAAN'.and she actually heard him call her''..GEET "..huh!!...GEET hey tumhari wahem hain'Wo q yaha hongey'."'..she was making chim chim noises from her bangles ''MAAN stood rooted to floor '.seeing most beautiful Bried infront of him'.his own voice is alien to' him..he gathred himself and called her again'..MAAN "GEET!!!..."''GEET saw maan's reflection in mirror and turned back to see worried MAAN''.she is so happy to see him after 3 long weeks''..got up from the chair '.ran to him just to melt in his arms''hugged him tightly'..where maan was in delima whether to Hug her back or not to''and his toughts trailed to 3 weeks back'..

3 Weeks Back''''...(FlashBack)

When MAAN found sinking GEET at their usual hangout (Gazebo), he was scared for the first time in his life '.. To Lose something precious'''he was pleading to almost every doctor to save his GEET''..he knew that he himself is the responsible for every pain that GEET was Going through'.today'..he saw her through the glass'.her body is shaking on the bed where doctors are trying there best to bring her into conscious''he don't know what to do? Whom to tell ? 'he felt helpless'..he can't see his GEET going through all those pain''he promised himself that not to trouble her anymore''his presence causes her more pain''..he don't deserve his ANGLE'.

After whole 4 hours'..Doctor.stayam came out of the ICU'to inform that now GEET is out of danger'..wiping his hands'..there MAAN left a relief breath''.MAAN "Doctor! Can I See her"'.Dr.Stayam "yeah sure!! But one by one!...she will sleep like 14 hours'..coz still she have effect of those pills'. "'''Arjun GEET's Brother wanted to stop him'.Arjun was really angry on MAAN, coz of him Arjun almost lost his Guddi''.but Rano Stopped him'..not to intefer between them''.

MAAN slowly made his way towards the Bed where GEET was laying with the tubes in her mouth''..covered with many equipments''..MAAN sat beside her'.he brought his hands near her face to feel her skin'..he caressed her paled cheeks with his back fingers'.like a feathery touch'''.her skin just burned him'..MAAN took her right hand into his'..kissed it''holding near to his heart "GEET!!! I'm so sorry'so sorry so sorry so sorry'..so sorry'."continuesly he chanted till he satisfied''his tears '.is not stopping'.what he has done and said is not taken back but '.he nomore want GEET to suffer coz of him '..he felt a jerk in GEET hand'.and in next moment GEET hold his hand close to her heart''murmuring something in her sleep''..she still was on effect of sleeping pills''

14 hours Later'..

GEET Slowly opened her eyes'..she felt a weight on her right shoulders ...the weakness has taken toll on her'..she has no energy left in her to lift her hands''she removed her oxygen mask after with great effort'..she inhaled the as much air she could''she felt the similar aroma''filled in all over the room'..her heart started to beat faster'..turned her head little towards her right side '.jsut to See MAAN slept on her shoulders ''.surpsride GEET all can do is only to whisper his name '.. "MAAN!!!"'..GEET was still on seductive and she couldn't understand whats real and Dream''all GEET could say in her subconscious state is "I'm Sorry Maan!!...I love you so much!!!! Please forgive me"'..saying this again GEET drifted to sleep'..MAAN couldn't take it anymore and left the place silently''

Present in GEET's Room'..

SLAP''..SLAP'''SLAP'''

A Slap echoed in room followed by another slap back to back '..MAAN kept his palm on his cheek where he just got 3 Slap From GEET'he just stared at her face'he has never seen this side of geet...GEET is fuming inside'.her tearey eyes are accusing him for saying such words'''to her'.how could he say such things to her'.how could he???...GEET is fuming with anger'..which is nothing infront of MAAN's Anger'''MAAN was still in shock what he got from GEET'..His GEET SLAPPED him''GEET'crushed his Sherwaani Coller in her fist '..GEET "'What did you say??? Come Again!!!..."'..asked him with Greeted teeth'..MAAN was dumbfolded to see another side of GEET''..GEET' ..pulled him more into her '. "Mr. MAAN SINGH KHURANA!!! I Said REPEAT YOUR WORDS AGAIN!!!!...now."'.MAAN himself was not sure whether to say it again or not'..What if he get few more Slaps'..this time'..he covered his both cheeks with his hands''.GEET brought him more close to her body and next moment MAAN was out of breath'..GEET slammed her lips on his Lips ''..into a soul carousing kiss'

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Edited by GurtiWonderland - 13 years ago
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Chapter 18


MAAN himself was not sure whether to say it again or not'..What if he get few more Slaps'..this time'..he covered his both cheeks with his hands''.GEET brought him more close to her body and next moment MAAN was out of breath'..GEET slammed her lips on his Lips ''..Into a soul carousing kiss'''

After 5 whole minutes GEET let go of his lips to take breath''.kept her forehead against his with still closed eyes'..tears were flowing countinously through her eyes''maan was still in trance , First a SLAP; second a KISS''.GEET brought her right hand towards MAAN's cheek to caress it''Where it has become red coz of the TIGHT SLAP''GEET' asked him with still closed eyes'.."WHY????...WHY MAAN???...AAp hamesha aise baathey q kartehy ho'???"''..MAAN kept staring at her face'..he don't know what to say'..his heart cried to see her tears yet coz of him''..automatically his hands wrapped her waist pulling her more close to him'.GEET slide her head on his shoulder''slowly'putting her hands around his neck'..MAAN tried to say something'..but he was cut by GEET in mid'..just to listen her'MAAN "GEE'"'...GEET "Shhh!!!...Don't!!!... "'.Warned him keeping her index fnger on his lips''.still keeping her head on his shoulder''.GEET "DON'T Say Anything'..MAAN'.Aaj Mujhe bolney deejeye''Aapney aajtak bahut kuch bola hain''abb aur nahi'.Naa hi main Aapki hey Bakwaas Sunungi'.aur naa hi main aapko apneysey alag karungi'samje aap'.!!! "'.asked him looking into his eyes'..all MAAN can do is just to stare at her beautiful brown eyes'.which only emmiting immense of love for him'..how could he think that he can go far away from her''from her life'..how could he''???...don't he know that he is her life'..her breath'..her love'.GEET 'kept her both hands on his chest ''"aapney!!! Hey kaise maanliya ki main kisi aur se shaadi Karlungi''aapko hey haq kissne diya''mujhe apne aapse alag karney ki'''aapko pata nahi '.ki hey GEET sirf MAAN keliye hi Bani hain'."'.a fresh layer of tears formed in her eyes''.lighlty punched him on his chest with her fist'."'Maan tired to talk'.but GEET Shut him'GEET "DON'T!!!...DON'T Even try'."'."Boliye MAAN'aap chup q hain?...Boliye"'.Shook him'..MAAN opened his mouth to say something'...*ROSE :i pity you MSK*...GEET "CHUP!!!...ek aur shabdh nahi'"'"Jab aap mujhse nafart karthey thy tab mujhe uttna boora nahi lagaa jittna aaj laga hain''hey jaankey ke baad bhi '.aap mujhse hittna pyaar karthey hain ki''aap mujhe kisi aur se shaadhi karney se rokney ke bajehi'..mujhe "Congrats" Kehaney aagahey'.."'..geet started to cry''."Mujhe aapsey alag nahi rehana '..mujhe aapse door matt keejiye'."'.said between her sobs'.GEET kept repeating the last sentence '..again and again'.MAAN hugged her tightly to suppress her sobs'.but instead her sobs increased'.MAAN "I'M SORRY!!! Guddi!!!...I'm Sorry GEET"'."I'm So SORRY ...I LOVE YOU GEET..."'."'GEET "I LOVE YOU TOO MAAN"...maan wanted to tell her about the Message which he got''.now he knew who all are behind this little DRAMA'''.GEET separated from hug to see his face'.and said'"AGAR !! Phir aapney Mujhe aapse Door jaaney ko kaha tho '."'..sob'"Main!!! kabhi bhi lautkey wapas nahi aahungi'..aur'" MAAN took her complaing lips into his and started to nibble on it''to silence her'..GEET felt herself light '..When she felt him lift her in air''by holding her waist'.GEET hairs fell on his face which covered their faces '..MAAN made her sit on the Window railing'.still kissing her'..and made her to relax back against side wall''.MAAN took her both lips into his to bite those rose petal of hers'..sooth them by caressing it with his warm tounge'.GEET did the same to maan and both are panting due to shortage of air'. 'MAAN left her lips and staretd lick corner of her lips''.then her cheeks'.giving a tail of wet kisses'..on her jaws followed by her red cheeks'.Continous Sucking of her Lips, which are now swollen with deep red in color'..even as maan's''too'.MAAN's hand roamed on her bare back'sqeezing the flesh making her to moan with pleasure...GEET did the same to maan''mainkng him loose ''.his sanity to say such words to her'..which is alike MAAN who was same as 8 years back'..MAAN whispered in her ears 'almost in aroused tone'.."GEET!!! I WANT YOU..I Want to make love to you till last bit of strength in our body..I want to F..'..GEET closed his mouth and gave him a shocking look'.and her red cheeks turned into more crimson red'..which is matchng her Saari color now''she hid her face in his crock of neck'.to answer him''GEET "'.IN that Case!!! you need to MARRY ME Lt. Col Maan Singh Khurana"''.Making maan to groan '..coz of her simple gesture of submission to his deamand'..MAAN '.kneeled down infront of GEET'''took her both hands in his ''making GEET to gasp ''."Miss. GEET HANDA Soon Going to be Mrs. GEET MAAN SINGH KHURANA, for all that you are, and for all that I'm not, would you be my wife?...WILL YOU MARRY ME?..iss faujee ki bewi banogi?."'.MAAN kissed her hands'.overwhelmed GEET just managed to shook her head for yes'.Hugged him tight making him to lean back on floar''GEET'said with her shivering voice'"YES!!!.. ''both MAAN and GEET lost in their own world '' when they heard a knock on the Door! both staringhted themselves '..MAAN '.ran his hands into thick hairs to look desenct and GEET made her hairs '..when GEET saw MAAN's lips which have red lipstick mark 'she wiped them fast before anyone sees them'..MAAN said "Come in! "'.keeping some distance'..Anvesha entered GEET's room hodling her Round Big stomach'.

Anvesha "Bhai!!...Hogaya aapki Baat GEET Se Abb Hum!!!...AAPKI GEET ko tayyar karna hain'.aap please thoda kast lengey '..humhey akele chodneyki'."'.MAAN stampperd '"Main'woo'!!!."'..just left the place without looking at Anvesha who was giving him a "I CAUGHT YOU "Smile'..

When MAAN came out of the GEET's ROOM'.he was surrounded by whole Handa's and Khurana's who are giving him "WHAT THE HECK? "Look'.

Edited by GurtiWonderland - 13 years ago
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Whoaaa! Go go Geet! I just love this Sherni Geet!!
Ha ha Maan babu slapped! Abb akal thikane aayegi!! Bechara would have been so panicked hearing Geet being someone else s!!
awww he slept beside her in hospital!
Glad both families unitedly planned their shaadi!
OMGGG Kisss and what a kiss!! *Though I had previously read till this part!*
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Oye hoyyeee what KISSES!!
What Confession! Totally fida-ofying types lol!!
Haayyeee loved how Geet made Maan silent yet asking him to answer her!!
Truly I pitied MSK at that time lol!!
Whoooaaa Wild wild vampire MSK and complaining!!
awww Geet blushing and embarrassed too for his choice of words!!
Hmm so Anwesha caught them!
cont soon!!
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loved it dear:)...

maan ko kya thapdh pada...hehheheheh😉
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thank God all misunderstandings cleared...

Geet is saved and now marrying Maan...

amazing updates...

thanx for pm...
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wow just loved it..do continue soon...
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awesome updates..
loved it...
finally all MU is cleared...
their marriage... wow...
continue soon...

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