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Posted: 13 years ago

"Maan'"she whispered with masses of tears in her eyes' Maan turned around and saw Geet as this emotional mess! He looked at her in disbelief not registering the face that she was standing in front of him at this moment in time' "Geet'" was all he could utter out his mouth. Was this reality? Or was this an illusion? That his love was standing right in front of him. Maan did not want to create such an issue in front of masses of people, so grabbed her by the arm and took her to an obscure corner of the airport and started his shouting"Kya kar rahi hain aap yaha?? Kyu ai ho? Ghar chaliye aap' Humari flight ki deri ho ri hai!" Alll she could see was her Maan in front of her, she could not her his constant scolding or anything at all. Geet give a damn to his words and threw her arms over him in a breath taking hug' Maan was confused at first as she said for him to stay away from her' now she followed him to the airport and is giving him such a passionate hug that left him dumbstruck.









PART 10





Geet snaked her arms around his neck leaving no gap between the two... It was if the almighty himself planned their meeting in the airport... Just the two of them, alone. Maan did not however respond to the passionate hug from his 'lady-love'... he seemed to be stuck in those rude words that Geet had spoke to him earlier on in the day. The whole of Geet's upper body was glued to Maan's, longing to be in his arms and craving for his touch...



Maan's hands were clenched into fists and lay stiffly either side of him, almost rejecting her touch... She felt this muscles becoming hard with anger, so she let go... feeling down and shattered at his rejection...



In a jerk, Maan grabbed her petite waist with his strong arm and crushed her, from head to toe, to his body. Both Geet and Maan felt alive with each others touch' Geet head was placed in the crook of Maan's neck, sensuously nuzzling it driving Maan to his peak. Maan buried his face into her hair, inhaling the sweet scent of his 'lady-love'. Maan started kissing her fervently along the nape of her neck' Maan's inner devil rose and started caressing her waist with his hands ever so coyly. Geet managed to suppress her moan until Maan's hand were travelling in the forbidden areas of her body'



"Maan!" her moan surprised him and also brought him back to reality that they were in the midst of a busy airport and they were busy romancing in the corner of it.



Maan unwillingly let go of Geet and straightened himself and Geet. He placed an audible, yet cute, on her cheek, which made her blush profusely.



Another bell brought Maan back to reality. The airport announced that the final passenger to board the flight to Shimla had to hurry as the pilot could not wait any longer and secondly, Maan's father, Yashwardan was calling Maan telling him that he has set off and was instructing him the work that had to be done up north in Shimla.

Maan unwillingly let go of Geet and held his trolley and went on' Geet was shattered! He was actually leaving her due to this morning and his father's commands. Tears brimmed out of her eyes as she saw him walking further and further along, not once even facing back towards Geet for a farewell smile, wave or hug/kiss. Geet clenched her dupatta in one hand and clenched the other near his mouth, trying to discard the unmelodious pain coming from within'


Maan on the other hand, did not dare to look back at her shattered face. He does not want to see her angelic face in such an emotional turmoil'







Geet felt an unknown pinch in her heart' That pinch indicated her not to let go of Maan! Without further ado, Geet sprinted towards Maan, not caring about the people around or even surrounding them, watching this innocent young girl running towards her destiny'

Geet reached Maan and he turned around baffled to still see her here.

"Geet, Humne aap se kaha ke aap ghar chali jaiye!" He roared yet it did not bring a lot of publicity.

Geet shattered managed to say a few words whilst her eyes were building up more tears as his unaffectionate words were causing havoc within her' "Hum aap ko kahine jaane dege! Aap sirf humare hai! Sirf humare!" Geet broke down and held his shirt collar questioning him further.

"Agar humne uss baat pen a kiya hai to humare paas ek waja bi hai!"She shouted at his face'"Kyunke hum nahi chate ke aap ki zindagi mein kuch aisi samasya ho jaiye jo aap ko apne pariwaar walon se dur karde!" Maan stood dumbstruck. All the while he thought that Geet never loved him or even cared about him, yet here, she has only been thinking for him and his future reputation. Maan held Geet's hands, which were on his shirt and pulled them off and started walking away, as now he did not know how to face his 'lady-love' anymore'

Geet shouted from behind'



"I LOVE YOU!"

Maan stood rooted at his place, he turned around and walked up to her' she looked into his eyes again' "I LOVE YOU!"


Maan could not believe what he had just heard' For the first time Geet had voiced her feelings! For the first time she actually told him that she loves him! Maan's eyes formed a wet layer but his fluttered his lashes to keep the tears in.

Just then Maan grabbed her wrist and dragged her out of the airport and into his car. He was driving away from the airport to an unknown place' During the drive, Maan called Aditya and told him to attend the meetings in Shimla for him as an emergency has cropped up. For once, Geet was scared at his intentions' she did not know where he was taking her. Slowly, after an hours drive they arrive at a small gazebo hut. Maan stopped the car and dragged Geet out too until under the gazebo hut.

The winds were smashing through the hut and the bells were chiming. Then reality struck her' She was in a temple!!

Maan finally spoke "Aap ko yahi hi dikhat hai ke zamaana kya kahe ga?" He roared, the winds carried his voice and penetrated them all around Geet. Geet shuddered with his anger.

"I say this to this stupid zamaana!" Maan hauled her in by her waist and grabbed the sindhoor box and filled her maang completely, leaving Geet partially paralysed...




PRECAP: 😳

Shocking! He filled her maang with sindhoor! 😲

Sorry it's short and I did not manage to fit in the second teaser 😭

Next one is promised to be very very very very HOT! 😉

if there are less likes then I will not feel to post 😭


TEASER: He carried her to the small cottage, voicing his intentions through his eyes, penetrating deep into her soul... She knew she had to give him what was rightly his and she will give him her everything at any cost!!

After all she could not deny him no longer since he took the most important decision of his life...!


Edited by halemakhan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow... awesome update... 😊
Finally Geet voiced out her feelings for Maan... Maan did the right job according to me... now wanna see his family members reactions...
waiting for the nxt update...😍
Edited by samina_17 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome...
omg yeh kya kiya... shaddi kar le...
ab kya hoga????
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Posted: 13 years ago
yaay!!my guess came true...
She voiced out her feelings..
and maan removed her insecurities..!
Beautiful one...
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update...
finally geet said i love u... and maan filled her mang
thx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
so he married next part..ahem..
i loved geets care...thinking of maans family..
what will happen if his fam comes 2 know?

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Posted: 13 years ago
Shadi hogaya!
Ab to Maan ko romance karne ka lisence milgaya.
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Posted: 13 years ago
arre kyun aise latka diya meri jaan 😭 update next part sooon i cant wait for the 2nd precap 😳 awesome update though very short 😳
Edited by maan_ki_jaan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Makpie

Shadi hogaya!
Ab to Maan ko romance karne ka lisence milgaya.

🤣 🤣 Very Very true!
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Posted: 13 years ago

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