**FLAMES OF DESIRE** MG FF IMP NOTE ON PG 145 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
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i like ur concept
update soon😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi dear...superb concept! Love dthe intro n cs! Looking forward to this FF! Please pm wen u update! Will add u as a buddy! please accept! thanks 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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~PART 1~

"maan"she screamed getting out of her dreamland...she sat on her pluffy king sized bed...panting heavily...dushta danav, dus sir wale ravan ab toh sapne mai bhi mujhe satane ka ek mauka nhi chodate...babaji saath samundar paar hai fir bhi mujhe chain se sone nhi dete jab wapas aayenge tab toh ek mauka nhi chodenge...chi chi babaji...mai yeh kya bol rahi hu...

n she slept again pulling d covers on her...it was 8 in morning n geet was still sleeping...her mom entered her room n found it all messed up...hey bhagwan kya hoga iss ladki ka...room ka itna bura haal karke rakh diya hai...geet puttar utha ja bache...aur kitna soyegi college nhi jana..."hmmm''...geet abhi ke abhi utho..."mumma bas 2 min aur"...."hey bhagwan iss ladki ka kya hoga shadi ke baad...pata nhi maan kaise sambhalega iss pagli ko"....hearing this she snapped out of her sleep n got up...sat on her bed wid baby face...
her mom patted her head, smiled knowingly wat effect maan's mere name has on her...chal ab jaldi aaja niche...

Geet quickly got ready n came downstairs..all ready for college...she kissed her papaji on forehead "gud morning papaji"

"good morng beta"

"papaji itni jaldi bhi koi uthata hai kya woh bhi daud bhag karne"

"beta duad bhag nhi jogging...n fit rehna jaruri hai aaj kal ki life mai acha stress buster hota hai...n apne maan ko hi le lo...how fit he is...kabhi apna routine excersize miss nhi karta itne hectic schedule mai bhi...

geet self talk..."yeh subeh ka sapna kya kam tha jo mumma n papji unka naam le leke mujhe dara rahe hai"...then to her papaji... ha ha papaji aap bilkul sahi keh rahe hai...mai toh bas avaiyii keh rahi thi, ab mai chalu der ho rahi hai"

"beta nashta toh karti ja"

"mumma aapko pata hai na mai breakfast dadi ke saath hi karti hu khurana mansion mai...phir bhi puchate ho har roz...ab jau bohat bhook lagi, n who sab wait kar rahe honge"

And she ran hurriedly out of her house...went to khurana mansion...she entered the dining area...where all the khuaran family members were waiting for her...she went n hugged dadi "gud morning dadi"

"gud morning beta"

then to annie and Vicky..."gud morng bacha log"

annie : geet tu thoda jaldi nhi aa sakti, mujhe kitni bhook lagi hai

Vicky : princess tu ek din pitegi mujhase agar tu issi tarah mujhe bhooka rakhegi

geet : dadi dekho apne ladale pota poti ko kaise mujhe dhamka rahe hai''aapko pata hai na mai roz subeh jaldi uthati hu, fir jogging bhi jati hu n fir mom ko help bhi karti hu n fir yaha aati hu''inki tarah nhi ki subeh uthe n bhukkad ki tarah baith gaye

Vicky : geet kitna fekegi...aursudhar ja warna

at the same time dev n naintara entered...and dev pinched Vicky ear

dev : vicky geet ko pareshan karna band karo aur chup chap breakfast shuru karo''

poor Vicky n annie made a golgappa face and geet was grining on other side

geet: gud morng dev bhai and naintara bhabi.....naintara smiled and patted her cheek lovingly...

they all were having their breakfast chit chatting...but Vicky had sm evil plan...he smiled wickedly and poked annie for gaining her attention...vicky winked n annie smiled knowingly...

Vicky: dev bhai, maan bhai ka baa rahe hai London se...unki ab kuch jada hi yaad aa rahi hai...unka project toh khatam ho hi gaya hai na

geet choked on her food after hearing this...naintara gave her water and patted her back...vicky n annie burst laughing...and seeing geet's plight... naintara, dev and dadi also joined dem...geet made a baby crying face..."aap sab bure ho, hume aapse kisise bhi baat nhi karni"

n she ran from their...

dadi: geet beta ruk ja breakfast toh karle...dev smacked Vicky "ja ab mana usse"

annie pulled Vicky wid her n both ran behind geet...screaming ..."dadima hum usse mana lenge aap chinta na kare"

Nt : dadi geet itna kyu darti hai maan veer ji se

dadi : pata nhi beta...na jane shadi ke baad kya hoga dono ka

dev and naintara sighed

Geet was walking on road wen a car stopped on her side...vicky came out of car "geet ruk bhi ja abhi...n chal car mai baith"

geet "nahi jao yaha se"

Vicky " princess yaar maan ja warna uthake baitha dunga"

annie: "geet yaar maan ja na...tujhe pata hai na Vicky kitna kamina hai'toh uski baato ka kya bura manana''...vicky greeted his teeth on annie''annie mouthed sorry

geet stomped her foot n sat in car...n dey drove off towards college...

Vicky: princess yaar bhai kaunse rakshash hai jo tu itna darti hai unse...kha nhi jayenge tujhe...

geet made a baby angry face thinking...ab inko kya pata kitne bade dushta danav hai woh, kha hi jayenge mujhe"

annie pulled geet towards her..."geet hume nhi pata tu itna kyu darti hai unse lekin yeh yaad rakh kit u unki hone wali biwi hai'...toh waise behave kar biwi types...order kar, apni baate manwa, apne isharo pe nacha, shopping karwa...n she went on and on

geet thinking...isharo pe toh woh mujhe nachayenge apne...babaji kuch samjhao inn na samjho ko...

geet pulled her wits and dared to ask "waise who ka baa rahe hai"

Vicky n annie "oye hoye...abhi se woh"...geet blushed...n Vicky started whistling...

annie: "waise aapke who waha se nikal chuke hai n kal morning mai hamare saath honge'...toh kal ka breakfast aap unke saath hi karogi"

geet got a mini attack hearing this...she made a quick prayer to her babaji...

they reached college n day went well wid their non stop masti n fun...n smhow geet forgot abt maan's arrival...

Night at around 12pm

Geet was lying in bed reading her fav novel mills n boons...

n her mobile rang

"kaun khotte da puttar hai jo itni raat ko cal kar raha hai"...without seeing d caller name she answered d call...

"hello, kaun hai"
"kuch bologe bhi"

"oye ullu ke pathe baat nhi karni thi toh call kyu kiya"

"jahil paji kutte bol jaldi"

"GEET" he gritted in anger on the other side...

"CHUP BILKUL CHUP"😡
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precap: MAAN'S entry😉
So gals done wid part 1😊...i tried my best...i hope u all will like it...i know there was no maneet scene...bt wat to do, i hv to create d plot for maneet passionate romance na😳😉...dats y all dis family drama...just bear wid me for few parts😆
pls hit d LIKE button n will appreciate ur comments...waiting for ur response...fingers crossed😕
Edited by mahimaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
Bacche ke jaan loge kya??
Plz update
don't make me waiting
I hate waiting like MAAN SINGH KHURANA
so before I lost my temper😡 update
Mujhe sirf or sirf update cahiye
congtrzzz 4 ur first FF dear 👏👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
interesting cs
update soon
waiting for the update😍


Edited by kamiya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
Lovely update dear...
Love it graphics

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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
jahil kutte ullu ke pathe lol ..hehhehe gud going dear😆

n maan ka chup bil kul chup 😳...hey cant w8 ..where is another update...post karo jaldi se
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: nishitaa25

jahil kutte ullu ke pathe lol ..hehhehe gud going dear😆


n maan ka chup bil kul chup 😳...hey cant w8 ..where is another update...post karo jaldi se

hehehehe...mai ek update mai hi thak gayi😆...ab baki ka update kal pakka...waise i am ready wid it...lekin thode changes baki hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: singh24

Lovely update dear...

Love it graphics

thank u so much😊😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank u dear😊

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