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shristi1

@shristi1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#281

Originally posted by: mel420

????????

sorry dear while updating my stupid poem my internet was gone.

so there's my stupid poem.

Yeh kya naya pachdha hai.

update ke naam peh ragda hai.

Joh aaj tak kiya na jeevan mein.

woh aaj kaam humne paakda hai.

Yeh kya naya pachdha hai.

update ke naam peh ragda hai.

Mel ki bacchi ne humari lagayi hai.

Aur aaj meine yeh pehli poem banayi hai.

Yeh kya naya pachdha hai.

update ke naam peh ragda hai.

humara Maaneet aur is story se pyar ka phayeda utaya hai.

Paar mujhe baada mazza aaya hai.

Phew atlast completed.

Now update soon. Plz.

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Ruchi

@ruchs

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#282

My new FF Aaiynaa…

MG FF-Aaiynaa...

Hope you like it dear...😳

Edited by ruchs - 13 years ago

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Ruchi

@ruchs

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#283

Originally posted by: Anu-Ananya
@Mel: He he mom and funny! She can be greatly irritable at times!
@Ruchs: Wwhoaa! Finally I can claim that I know a great novel writer *winks*
@Ruchs and Mel: Do u have fb id?

Me has one… Will PM it to you...😳

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Ruchi

@ruchs

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#284

Originally posted by: mel420

I know and then we can claim that's she is our friend cool na

How chweeet….😳

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Ambibamby

@Ambibamby

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#285

Abb to yeh quota be hogaya
Hume aur na sataoon
Yeh dil chur chur hojayega
Tere intezar me meri saanse rukhjayegi
No karon ab is bejan dil ko pareshan
Kahee hum is intezaar mein no hojayain hareno pareshan

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#286

Originally posted by: crazy_125
UR UPDATE IS THE THING WHICH I AM ANXIOUSLY WAITING FOR...
UR UPDATE IS THE THING WHICH I AM ANXIOUSLY WAITING FOR...
HOPING THAT U WILL GIVE AN UPDATE FAST ...
HOPING THAT U WILL GIVE AN UPDATE FAST ...
AS IM NT ABLE TO CONTROL MY EAGERNESS...
THAT HAS BEEN FORMED DUE TO MY FONDNESS ...
HOPING THAT U WILL GIVE AN UPDATE FAST ...
HOPING THAT U WILL GIVE AN UPDATE FAST ...
UR UPDATE IS THE THING WHICH I AM ANXIOUSLY WAITING FOR...
UR UPDATE IS THE THING WHICH I AM ANXIOUSLY WAITING FOR...

HOPE U UPDATE NW ...INTERESTING CONCEPT
AND IF U CAN READ READ TOOTE HUVE DIL MY FIRST ATTEMPT 😛
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2927227

will be updating right now goes you are the 10th song writer😃 nice song acha I will defo chek it pakka promise

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rizwanaq

@rizwanaq

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#287

waiting patiently for the next update

just read your note so hope its not too late

you said write a song

so make sure the next update is long

i want geet to find out that maan is munna quick

so we can progress with the love story and it should be slick...

ballay ballay shava shava

^^ thats the best I can do"

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Ruchi

@ruchs

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#288

Originally posted by: mel420

will be updating right now goes you are the 10th song writer😃 nice song acha I will defo chek it pakka promise

Phew thank god….

Yay we are getting an update...😃

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#289

Originally posted by: shristi1

sorry dear while updating my stupid poem my internet was gone.
so there's my stupid poem.

Yeh kya naya pachdha hai.

update ke naam peh ragda hai.

Joh aaj tak kiya na jeevan mein.

woh aaj kaam humne paakda hai.

Yeh kya naya pachdha hai.

update ke naam peh ragda hai.

Mel ki bacchi ne humari lagayi hai.

Aur aaj meine yeh pehli poem banayi hai.

Yeh kya naya pachdha hai.

update ke naam peh ragda hai.

humara Maaneet aur is story se pyar ka phayeda utaya hai.

Paar mujhe baada mazza aaya hai.

Phew atlast completed.

Now update soon. Plz.

😆 loved it you've got the feeling your back at school

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#290

Originally posted by: Ambibamby
Abb to yeh quota be hogaya
Hume aur na sataoon
Yeh dil chur chur hojayega
Tere intezar me meri saanse rukhjayegi
No karon ab is bejan dil ko pareshan
Kahee hum is intezaar mein no hojayain hareno pareshan

😆 nice Liked it