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Melvina Preece

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi guys I am back. I finished my first FF Deceived:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2758605/deceived-link-to-thread-2-p-1
So now I am back with dirty revenge. Hope you love it. The prologue is written by Francessa. And the poem is written by none other then Ananya (yup the one who owner of butterfly, puppy,giantyy, goldyy etc)
Girls check this out: Mel's world

Ishq tumne bhi kiya
Mohabbat humne bhi kiya
Phir kahan galti hui hamari
Kis kadar badla yeh rishta humara
Jo liya aapne humse badlaa!!
Zindagi badal di aapki Dirty Revenge ne
Puchti hun kya maaf kar payega kahbi dil se apne??
(written by Ananya)

Prologue

Geet's world crumbled.

Revenge!

Rang in her mind.

"All this for revenge" her heart cried. She was in her bed. Maan was nowhere to be seen. Geet had shouted at him; they were married for almost 1 year and all Maan was doing was for REVENGE...and the doctor just said she was expecting!

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Melvina Preece

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Posted: 13 years ago

Link to thread 2:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2943244/dirty-revenge-2-page-1-link-to-thread-3
Thread 3
Part 1... p. 2
Part 2... P.11
Part 3...P.19
Part 4...p47
Part 5...P 71
Part 6...P 85
Part 7...p 105
Part 8...p 117
Part 9...P 131

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Ruchi

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Posted: 13 years ago

aaj Me ka FIRST aane ka din hai….😆

Me sooo happy you started this new FF….😃

Me would have missed you so much otherwise…😳

CONGRATULATIONS

dear….!!!!!!

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Melvina Preece

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ruchs
aaj Me ka FIRST aane ka din hai'.😆

Me sooo happy you started this new FF'.😃

Me would have missed you so much otherwise'😳

CONGRATULATIONS
dear'.!!!!!!

😆 ha that's true me me loving it

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Melvina Preece

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Nav2010

😕

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Melvina Preece

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ananya21

for new ff
interesting concept, do continue soon...😃

wow thx

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love2_soma

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Posted: 13 years ago

interesting n nice start dear...
continue soon plz...

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Melvina Preece

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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 1

Dadi walked into Maan's study. She saw her 37 year old grandson working as always. What will happen to him she thought.

D:Maan I need to talk to you
M:Yes Dadi
D:Mr. Mehra came today you now his daughter Tina
M:Dadi please don't start
D:Maan you 36 don't think you should have children and a wife. I want grandchildren.
M:Dadi I am already married
D:Maan geet ko mare hoewe 16 years hoge hai. isn't it time you move on
M:Dadi she is she will and always will stay my wife. She is still zinda in this heart which only beats for her dadi.

Dadi walked out of the study it is and always will stay useless to talk to maan about marriage. Maan opened the drawer he took geet's picture out of it. Misty I love you so much but you hate your maan na, he has hurt you a lot haina. He kissed her picture and thought about the past.

Past
Maan was 20 he walked in to his sisters college. He saw meera standing that must be her group of friends he thought. He looked at geet there she is he thought. He walked towards them.

M:Hi I am annie's brother maan
G:Hi how is annie We haven't heard anything from her for a while is she okay.
M:Don't worry about her she went to Germany to study.
G:What and she didn'tell us
M:Well you should ask her that but I am searching the principle's office I reconized meera so I figured out you guys must be here friends so could you guys tell me principal ka office kaha hai.
G:Friends my foot that's why she left without telling anyway go left and you will see it
M:Thx btw what's your name
G:geet
M:geet...
G:Geet handa
M:nice to meet you geet handa

Maan walked into the cafeteria. He saw a girl who had seen before with geet. Maan walked over to her. He introduced himself as Annie's brother and asked geet adress without thinking pinky gave him the adress. Bingo maan thought.

The next day dadi went to her house with maan's rishta for geet. Geet's parents agreed she came from a very conserfitive family where it is normal for girls to marry on ther 18 so they where very happy when maan came they also knew Khurana was one of the most respective family's. maan and geet got married within no time.

Geet woke up she looked next to her she saw no Maan she stood up and went to the kitchen, to see maan making breakfast. geet and maan lived alone in the outhouse. geet walked over to maan.

G:Maan yeh aap kya kareihain. I should do it.
M:Nahi geet I want to make breakfast for my Misty

Geet blushed.

M:hai you look so cute while blushing.

Geet hugged maan and hid her face in his chest.

M:I love you geet

Geet didn't react

M:Won't you answer me back

geet blushed maan smiled and wanted to feed her breakfast but she stopped him. Maan gave her a confusing look.

G:no maan I can't eat before you have eaten.
M:pagli why not
G:wo mom says your not allowed before a man eats
M:what rubbish come on open your mouth

Maan made geet eat her happiness knew no boundary.Three monts long he didn't let her do chores and took care of her. he treated her like royalty but every time she would ask him about annie and why she wasn't at the wedding he would silence by keep a finger on her lips and say shhh will talk about her another time. Geet has just confessed yesterday that she was head over heals over maan. He smiled like a devil and left. She was sure he was planning a surprise for her. Geet smiled.

End of flashback
maan closed his eyes he hated what happened the next day he refused to think about it today. he kept working until his eyes closed. but after a hour he would wake up her hazel eyes would follow him.

In HP there was a huge mansoin Geet shighania lived here. With her two 16 year old beautifull daughters. Ruchi and Nisha. Ruchi and Nisha where twins but you wouldn't say that. while ruchi was well behaved and a true angel at heart. Nisha was a true prankster and had a strong personalty

G:Nisha come her now
N:yes mom
G:did you put salt in rani aunty thea
N:Nahi toh
G:nisha
n; haan mom bole
g; so no you have even started lying to you mother
n; sorry mommy
G;go and apoligize
n; yes mom

nisha walked to rani aunty.
n; sorry
r; shaitan it's okay.

at night ruchi was looking at maan 's picture.

R; I wish papa zinda hote
n; me hoon na
r; so your now my papa
n; yes why not if you want I can grow a moustace if that helps

geet had tears seeing this sight in front of her. the girls giggled, they hadn't notice geet. they cuddled up and fell a sleep.

Precap: more past and Nisha seeing maan poor maan😆

Next:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/55658927

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love2_soma

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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome n beautiful starting...

loved it...

toh fr geet n maan both are dead to each other...fr geet we can think of it to b right...but fr maan...hw can he think of dis...

thank u very much fr such a lovely update...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

eagerly waiting...

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muskaan...

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Nice concept...looking forward to next part...

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