Lag Ja Gale - MG OS - Page 3

Awesome OS
Thank You So Much For The PM

Awesome... but it seems like a sad fever has gripped GF... all the recent os I have been reading are so sad... guys please write something happy now... 😊

hey from 1st two lines itself i knw its walk to remember so i prepared myself for sad ending...so no jootis from my side(poor u ..u lost a pair of joothis in ur collection...k i am kidding) ... but i liked this OS...

very painful...

but loved it...

thanx for pm...

ohh that was one of ur best writings hinal...i loved it so much!!!!!
the begining was fab... it was the most natural...
the best thing was the way u flipped from presnt to past and den again back to present
when maan promises her not to fall in love with her and again breaking his own promise!!!

and the painful part was the confrontation...
i loved geet...how she kept her smile even through all this!!
and maan...he is a sweetheart yaar
he actually married her and wanted her to leave the world in his arms!!!!

the song...so apt...and so giving the feel...
felt like crying when maan wanted to record ehr voice as though he could capture
her not in his arms den probably in his cell phone!!!
and the final part...she did leave the world peacefully in his arms!!!!!
fabulous yaar!!!!
hats off to u!!!👏

oh why oh why...
twas touching...
read another OS too like this...
no more sad ones in GF ever again...

u made me cry dear
heart wrenching one
but u wrote it beautifully is what i can say
loved it

fabulous story yaar...i am feelin like crying...