Dial A Secret... MG FF (thriller) part 13 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: pearl_warrior

The Concept n CS look very interesting..

Add me to your pm list..
Waiting for you to start it..


thank u 4 d comment.. hope u wl like it..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Maaneet_Vidu

congrats mimi...one more FF.

Sounds interesting.


hmm 1 more FF.. but gonna gv regular updates now.. hehe😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: honeygrape

congrats on your new ff ...concept sounds interesting ...continue soon


Thanku.. 😉 hope u wl enjoy it..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: punam2712

THE CS AND PROLOGUE ARE VERY INTERESTING

WAITING TO READ MORE


thanks a lottt.. wl post in next few minutes

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

congratulation for new FF Mimi
awesome and interesting concept and character sketches
waiting for update


thank u.. 😉 ebar regularly debo.. w8 knte hbe na...😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanjh89

WHAT A CONCEPT YAAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

How u people manage to hv sch thrillng ideas yaar??????????????

n thn cms the Character sketch... seems u hv employd al the hot people around Globe...

I m bowled...

LOVE

SANJH

Originally posted by: sanjh89

WHAT A CONCEPT YAAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

How u people manage to hv sch thrillng ideas yaar??????????????

n thn cms the Character sketch... seems u hv employd al the hot people around Globe...

I m bowled...

LOVE

SANJH


He he.. i m glad dat u like my characters 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
This FF is wafting in my nose...

Start it Sooon...😃

But, In the Picture Gwen does not look like a Geek 😕

I think you have posted Katherine's pic instead Of Elena's...





Charo na.. k r dekhte ja6e?? r er theke baje pic hole ami sohho korte partam na
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Guys.. thanks for your comments.. your comments are v. precious for me.. here is the 1st part.. plzzz hit the like button n do comment..😉


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Secret Keeper Blesses you

A regular evening of Upper East Side. The most expensive neighbourhood of New York City. Where people wake up hearing a gossip and went to bed after making sure the gossip has spread all over the world.

Geet was being ready to attend a party at club. She gave a final look to her dress. Not too long like loosers' or too short like s**ts'. She applied her lip gloss and turned to the mirror to give herself an appreciating smile. "Perfect." She selected her bag carefully and shouted to her maid "Lola.. I'm gonna be late." And left her penthouse. Her driver was waiting for her as she sat inside the car. Driver closed the door and started driving. After a few seconds her phone rang, she picked up with a smile. "Hey Naomi.." Naomi was her best friend since kindergarten.

"Geet! We are meeting at Maan's. come as soon as possible."

"on my way." She cut the phone and order her driver to go to Maan's.

After a few minutes she reached Maan's building. It was luxorious 25th floord building and Maan's flat is on 23rd floor.

As she entered his sitting room her eyes fell on Maan at first who was sitting on a eassy chair.

"Here comes the queen." Maan gave a smile to her. Geet did not pay any attention. She spotted Naomi sitting with her sis Nicole, she took the seat between Naomi and Nicole.

"So Maan" Geet spoke looking directy in his eyes "what I'm doing here now? I'm in no mood of missing the party."

"We're here to discuss what should we say to the police about that night." Brandon answered. "it's important to be discussed."

"Hmm.. Geet's jaw tightened "so, what to say?"

"we know nothing." Everyone's eyes turned to the door following the voice to find Adrian standing at the door.

"Isashkov." You are late. Maan said in a irritated tone.

"sorry. But you know I'm not." He replied with a smirk.

"you won't be.. you are a cold blooded cunning fox.." Maan said rising his level of voice a lil bit.

"why should I be sorry?" Adrian said in same cold tone "people die to be me.."

Sensing the atmosphere is getting heavy Geet spoke "So, Adrian you were saying something about what to say?" she smiled sweetly.

Adrian made himself comfortable on a sofa and lit a cigarette. He is hardly seen without it. Letting out smoke from his mouth he started to speak "We all were drunk. Don't know where did Damien go after the party. We know nothing."

"He is missing Adrian." Geet said in a worried tone. "All have seen he had a fight with us."

"Don't worry Geet." Maan assured her.

:I'm trying hard not to think about it.. But.." Geet could not finish her sentence.

"We have got the best lawyer.." Brandon said clearing his throat.

"And about Damien having fight with us." Maan could not finished as he was intorupted by Adrian. "Not with us Khurana. He had fight with you." He chuckled.

"Oh really?" Maan was trying hard to control his temper but anger is the only thing he could never control. "It wasn't my plan to throw him out of our life.."

"Stop fighting over a silly thing." Brandon spoke loudly. "Maan, calm down."

"Guys! Forget those things." Geet stood up. "We're getting late for the party."

"Yeah! Lets go. My lemo is waiting outside. I'm giving a lift to all of you." Brandon flashed a charming smile. "you owe me."

All started to leave. Maan and Geet were behind others.

"Maan, I hate your flat. It's too small." Geet said moving her hand like a handfan near his face.

"It's my own flat." Maan replied smiling.

"C'mon Maan. Mr. Khurana can buy you a pent house easily."

"Why do always take dad's favour?"

Geet couldn't pay attention to Maan's last words as she was busy to read her just arrived sms. It was from an unknown number. It says "Geet, God knows everything. So do I. Secret Keeper Blesses You."Her smile faded she read it again and again.

"Geet? Who is it?" Maan questioned.

"Mom." She forced a smile to him.


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So how was it??? i m w8ing for ur comments frnds..

Edited by princess_mimi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it...
cont.soon..
thanx for d pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome part.I am wondering why did geet get such sms from an unknown number.

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