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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congo on d new thread dear...
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Congrats for d new thread dear 😃
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congrats on the new thread

maan should suffer now. Like Geet has been suffering for last 2 years

hope geet teaches maan a lesson

please update soon and pm me


Edited by amita5 - 13 years ago
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Ab update kareghi bhi yaa rotey hi rahenghi
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A Life For You
Part 14


Warning 18+...so read at your own risk 😳

Saying so she was about to leave a baffled Maan when she turned and looked towards him with a smirk

And as of now Mr. Khurana

Don't you think you should payback as I did your wish?

To feed your kid

It's time for you to return my dead Mr. Khurana


Payback...he asked in confusion and frustration

yaa payback...I did something for your child and you
so now don't you think you should pay me back my return for my good dead...
she smirked

what do you want...he asked in frustration...not knowing what and where his life was leading to
The MSK who never bowed in front of someone bowed in front of her
but she is not Geet..No...she can never be his Geet

hmm let me think...
I was always your Body Need na...
So now I want my body needs to be fulfilled...
she winked and Maan's heart just stopped fearing for the worst

what are you saying...he asked in rage
you are out of mind...

What am I saying...simple
ohkiz if that sounded difficult for you
let me make it again for you
I want to have Se* with YOU today...
she asked in a cool way

Maan was filibustered...baffled...shaked...his whole life came to an end
his mind started spinning
his heart raced manically
his veins cursed an uneasy blood flow

Geet we need to talk...he closed his eyes just to calm his anger down

I don't want to
You want me to feed your baby
fine then make it a deal
Se* with me and I'll feed your baby...
Half an hour I want you in my room...
saying the last words she banged shut the face on his face moving out

Maan sank on couch holding the arms of the seat tight in his fist
what have he done
what...
He killed his Geet'he killed her
she is not his Geet who could have given her life for me
but'Geet...

Sab maine kia hai na baby
sab meri galati...

Maine tumhe khud se itna dur bhej dia
ke ab...
Main khud se dur ho raha hu

baby main kyaa karu'I can't do this to your mumma
I can't...bacha but I dont know what am I supposed to do now

angel kuch bolo na dadda kyaa kare...
Meri kuch samjh nahi aa raha...MSK is out of anything right now
tumhari mumma ko apne pass humaare pass kaise laau baby...am loosing it
I lost everything i should have ever treasured but now I lost everything
kuch bol na bacha...
Dadda kyaa kare

he sat lost in his lost world
lost in his new world
lost in himself


thought and rethought and rethought
what his life was and what it is now

**************************************************

Geet sat reading a magazine when he enters the room and she smiled blankly placing her magazine aside

so here you are
MSK always on time...right
so can we start

she smirked looking directly to him

he closed his eyes in disgust...loathing himself for this
cursing his own faith

and slowly opens his eyes to witness her standing real close to her
her warm breaths falling on his bare body mere an inch away

Geet please...he tries again to make her understand but she smashed her lips on his

His shock surged renewed as her lips swarmed down to crush his

Biting his lips'nipping them

As an immediate response, he begins to turn his head

But his conscious tries to resist he tries to calm her down

But she crashed into him maddening ferocity, breaking his resistance sending it spiraling into the cold depths of oblivion. Her walls of shyness no more existed'the way she use to blush the way she use to shy there was nothing like that but a simple lust he could feel

He found himself stranded, lost in the tides of her anger filled passion.

Her lips boldly claimed him hurting him biting on them making him bleed. His hands invariably reached to squeeze her closer entrapped in flames of passion & pricking pain.

he could feel her

but before he could think further
she slowly lowered herself he could smell her scent he took it in. it seemed to fill him with life.

she bend further

he urged to hold her to stop her'but he couldn't he was helpless

not just physically and mentally but emotionally as well
he felt horrible at his plight

she kissed his crook bitting them making it red

and then sucked and licked to sooth'

she made her way down to his exposed chest and kissed furiously

she again managed to reach his lips
he was shocked, he could feel her lips on his

it felt wonderful
but a guilt a self hatred engulfed him

she bit is lower lips & then said'hmm seems like you lost your charm Mr. Khurana

she passionately kissed him, he could feel
every bit of it, the way her tongue invaded into him, touched his tongue
setting life into it

she tasted heaven but his self loath wasn't letting him to give in

to respond back

geet jaan please stop it'stop punishing yourself in this'he pleaded in her mouth

she just went on & on for quite long finally got up catching for her breath
he could barely breath

maan was not able to bear her rudeness, her indifference, it was not his geet
he was shocked to look at his angelic geet in this new way

he gave gave her a pleading look still trying to understand her.

He gulped hard perplexed with her response...Was she still angry...

He didn't know anymore how to response..her closeness, anger & passion was driving him insane.

She pulled him towards her bed

And throws him on it

she climbed again over him & sat on him'he turned his face & closed his eyes
with feel of her on his stomach'he hated himself more every minute every second

she moved slowly to nibble his ears. she worked all over him seducing him
pinning his hand down'

which wanted to protest but could not, kissing him passionately
he wondered how can she be so passionate when he was not even responding by now


she looked into his eyes & took in his lips slipping her fingers in his hair

he wished'he prayed'he thought
she will just stop it with all this'but she moved on'

she was actually making it out with him'

and she looked enjoying every bit of it'she worked on a longer
foreplay to get him into it'

She straddle around his waist..while her hand tasked to snap his shirt buttons

Few buttons were freed willingly while others were sheered by force

how it didn't mattered anymore'

she wanted to feel him or hurt him it was not sure'

Finally his chest was unwrapped , she scraped her nails along his sculpted muscles.

His eyes widened at her action

She smirked at him

And he immediately looked away by now understanding

She impatiently leaned over is bare chest sucking them carnally'biting her way down his neck into the crease of his collarbone

He sucked in deep breath'fighting to hold her.

But she stopped him again pinning him down to bed

Her every action was filled with passion'

He buried his head in the pillow

she scratched at his back violently. ..

He flinched in pain'Making her wilder losing any bit of gentle or kind demeanor'


Her lips devoured over his chest like she was possessed'like she was hiding her own pain in it

He wanted to hold her to sooth her

He could feel something in her each touch but her each and every action said a different tale all together

while her lips traced damp patterns across his waist

She madly worked on his tracks'She ravaged them completely off...not even a moment before she had him completely nude'

His eyes widens at her attempt and he looked away hiding his embracement for his arousal


looks like someone all ready'
she winked crushing back to his lips

His hands reluctantly snaked her back'Making its way under her kurti'

his response was wavering when he stared deep into her eyes'

He felt hypnotized by them as he felt her mouth crush his again'

He inhaled sharply'pressing his hands down on the mattress'
I love u'he cried'I am sorry jaan

I really am'don't do this please

Her body took on a will of its own, caressing exploring every inch of his bare flesh now softly soothing the marks she trailed.

She was defiantly not in her senses right now

The searing flame engulfed his body as she sought to quench her blazing passion

She kissed his ears, her soft lips fell on his eyes..instantly tear followed out his eyes and she harshly kissed them away

Kyu Mr. Khurana ko mazaa nahi aa raha'she said in disgust

His hands couldn't resist further from capturing her closely'

She remembered little about her kurti which instantly seemed to vanish, only vaguely recollecting the snapping of her bra hooks

Then followed cascading of her breasts into his warm soft hands & then being fed into his wanting mouth'

He turned her over & laid down & suckled them in desire & longing'

His hungry mouth worshiped her tracing moist patterns on her creamy skin'

His every touch was soft & tender very well aware & conscious of her every moan & whimper'

He was not sure whether to get still closer.. her legs parted arching her back to receive him

BUT

He couldn't

He shouldn't commit the same mistake again'I love u Geet..
I love u lots'I am so sorry'for once forgive me please jaan

She lay beneath all the while in command & he offered his complete surrender

Her breath came out ragging & gasping as he entangled his fingers

But she took to the next level

She pinned him harshly to the bed again

And took him in'he wondered how on earth his
body was reacting to her touches getting hard enough'

how could he feel evoked, but he did
and they did move into a rhythm

it was so insulting & hurting. why was she stooping this low. she definitely
does'nt mean any of these words. he tried to reassure himself. he could barely
her acts were becoming mean & rude as the time passed

Cupping his fuming face'he looks away feeling helpless
she kisses his nose tip'he closes his eyes how his anger seemed to drown in her touch. he hated himself to feel like that.
u look hotter when u are angry'geet smirked and bits his lips & kisses him passionately

he doesn't kiss her back'she didn't seem to bother
she went on & on. driving him nuts and irresistible' he still holds back
his urges'he leaned against the bed and fought the emotions welling up inside him

she smiled naughtily pushing him further into kissing her

her each movement became more hard more harsh more passionate

her each contraction could be felt by him

and they did rise to a climax & finally
she collapsed on him breathing hard matching his raised breathing.

she hugged him, his hands ached to hold her in

she slowly moved off him & slept next to him, cuddled up'

she pulled his arm and rested her head on it & put her leg on him.
he lied looking up what did she want

does she love him any more

will she ever come back to him

why did she look so contended then


Precap: A small leap


Prev:Part 13 Next: Part 15


ohkiz guys i dnt know how it is

that's my first attempt to write something like this

I sachi needed to go through whole encyclopedia for it 😆

I can read but while writing it took me whole sweating forehead and palms 🤣

If anyone dint liked it

please sorryyy...

BUT TRUST ME A LITTLE PLEASEEE

i wanted to say a lil thnxx to all...and i knew aftr a certain time i will be getting borred and sabko thnxx nahi keh paayungi 😕 n i dint wantd to say thnx to few and miss odrs 😃


so here is the thanxx to everyone

THANK YOU EVERYONE

for your support and liking my story

Luv u all


Ohkiz one more thing I know I am goin way to over broad with these MaanEet but can you guyz give me just two more part liberty

I PROMISE I'll reveal it everything by 16th

pakka


so now give me my comments and like

will be waiting

AND WHO ALL WANT PMz PLEASE SEND ME BUDDY REQUEST

I'LL NOT BE ABLE TO PM OTHERWISE


❤️Luv Divzi

Edited by dazzlingdivz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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AWSEM SO GEET TEACHING HIM IN HIS LANGUAGE
Edited by tamanna1391 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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o plz pehle maan ab tum geet ke character ko kya kar rahi ho
i know she wants revenge but i think u r spoiling her character
don't mind sweets
i m expressing my views
waiting for next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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love it geet decide toi play maan's game on him
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yeh pay back bhi itna dard bhara tha ...
😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update
u have ruined the character of geet
from this update
actually not from this update
from previous update only i started hating and feeling disgusted
by this geet who refuse to feed baby
earlire u made maan disgusting for ur readers
now u r doing it for geet good if this goes on i dont think i culd read on
sorry if i hurted u with my comment

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