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Posted: 13 years ago
very painful upd.
can't comment more...😭..
unable to relate to geet...previously maan n now her...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweat_poison

hey guyz

i don't know how many will come to know about this post
but i am here to do my job
Di not well so she wont be able to update for 1 or 2 days
i dont know by when but she will be discharged by tues so she will update after that 😊

wish for her
sorry for the delay and thanx for cooperating

WAT HAPND TO HER? IS SHE ALRIGHT NOW? PLZ WISH HER GOOD HEALTH FROM ALL OF US.
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Posted: 13 years ago





Waiting...😍
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sun333

WAT HAPND TO HER? IS SHE ALRIGHT NOW? PLZ WISH HER GOOD HEALTH FROM ALL OF US.


yaa she is dnt worry just she had a huge HB loss so she is weak that's why
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part :)
and get well soon <3<3

harneet <3
Edited by -harneet.gill- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update...
hmm can understand geet's anger..
but feeling bad for the baby...
plzz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

A Life For You
Part 16

But his dreamland got disturbed with a sigh smile knowing the footsteps

Approaching the door

And he at once made his way towards them

And opens the door with a beautiful smile and a sigh

To capture the sight like always

Geet…His Geet waving bie with a flying kiss to her new boyfriend

The sight always burned him to an extent he could burn anything anyone who come in his way

BUT

He can't

He won't do anything because he deserve this pain

This longing which he poured on her for whole these years

Geet turns and sweetly smile on him

And paced a quick peck on his lips…heloo darling

Missed me…

Oppss…how can you

You have what you desire

And walks inside without giving a head to answer anything further to him as if he will ask anything

He know he can't say anything to her

But he know

NO ONE

BLOODY NO ONE WILL EVER DARE TOUCH HER

SHE IS HIS

HIS GEET

So my little khurana's nanny..,oopss dad…sweet smile with a hidden smirk

I want you in my room after what seems an hour or so

You know na sweetheart I need some rest them we can enjoy…she winked and made her way out

And yaps please send Maria in my room

And left leaving a shattered, betrayed and heartbroken MSK behind

He smiles bitterly at his fate and moves inside his little angel's room to complain about her mom to her

That was the only person whom he could share his loneliness of last 6 months

In whose embrace he hide out, to whom he pour his heart out

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How your day was madam???…Maria asked setting her bed

As always marvelous….Geet winked

All went well…Maria's voice had a little concern

Yess Maria everything was well and in favour…geet looked at her in a consoling eyes

Here your medicines madam…maria smiled to geet giving her a packet and a prescriptions

How was Manvika today…was she fine…did she trouble you..geet asked taking her medicines

Maan stood rooted he was coming to ask…or shall I say again plead with his new payback for feeding Maanvika when he heard her name from Geet's Mouth it was always your child or Khurana waris

Since her birth it was the first time Maan was hearing Maanvika's name from her mouth and the ques

It shook his soul

There was defiantly something she was hiding

He stood behind the doors listening her

Wishing god his nightmares to end, his longings to end

His sins to end

Don't ask Man that little brat…and Maria bit her tongue looking at the angry eyes of Geet at the word brat…ooppss sorry Madam…But truly she is really a trouble

Ask me what I go through whole day…Maria pouted

You deserve this for calling my princess a brat…Geet chuckles

And Maan's heart felt at peace Geet loves Maanvika very much

He knew it and now he have the prove for it

Man for how long is it gonna be the same why cant you just tell sir the truth...

I cant you know…it took me 2 whole years to turn THE GREAT MSK into MAAN…my Maan

Maan couldn't wish more today

Can't wish anything else in his whole life

Geet calling him Maan again after 6 mouths

His heart swelled with happiness

You know the time I saw him after I gained conscious in hospital I knew he changed

I knew he is mine…MY MAAN…ONLY AND ONLY MY MAAN

It felt like I won the entire world…As if I got whatever I could ever wish for

Whatever I could ever dream of…He knew his heart that moment

You know his eyes…those dark brown chocolates speak volumes

Always

And I can read them before even he knows what his eyes showing

He is my heart Maria…how can't I read My Heart's eyes

Is that even possible to keep youself away from your breath

From your heart…from your soul…

I am his shadow how I could I even think of leaving him

Is it possible Maria…Geet asks him

Maan was heaving with each breath

A lone tear with a sweet smile enchanted his handsome face

With the satisfaction the love ever he died

But

He again got it easily…he wasn't able to realize the what is the feeling when you can't get the same love back

You know it was damn difficult for me to say…to do this…to behave like this with my Maan

The Man I love more than anything…more than myself more than any damn thing in this word and outside this world

He never knew the real meaning the feeling of being loved because he never loved the way he should

Just because he wasn't able to realize what rally is this love

What is the need to love the need to commit the need to be one's

He was always a self made man…a self built man

His freedom was something he was used to…which he lived the entire life

So it wasn't easy for him to leave his freedom

I know my Maan very well Maria his heart always beated for me

Not from the time he realized…before the time I entered his life

Even before the time he entered my life

From the first look of mine he was mine

Only and only mine

Maan's breath caught in his throat…she loved him even then

She was his always

ONLY HIS

She always knew him understood him but he always mislead her

He always

Dammnnn always

He don't deserve her

She is n angel and he a bloody beast

You know at that time I just wanted to run hide myself in him in his embrace

In his soul

Hug him tight to protect my own self from each dark desire of this world

From each bad eye

To kiss him till I leave my last breath

Love him with all the love present in this universe

But I couldn't

It killed me thousand millions trillions and even more deaths to control myself

Maria do you know how it feels when your love for whom you longed ever...whim you desired ever is infront of you with the same love, same longing, same desire
But you can't love him back...do you know the pain
it pierced my heart into each every second slit into small small pieces

do you know the time I was dying for one glimpse for my baby...of my angel...Are Love...are Maanvika
I was there spitting all shit for my own baby...for the little piece of my own self...my own heart...my little love
the each sentence I said was killing my soul with each word
I killed my own self brutally...stabbed my own heart harshly...snatched my own earth with my own hands
Maria why me...Why always me...what have i did to deserve all this

Geet's heart wrenching cries were filling Maan's already burdened heart with more guilt, more remorse, more longing
he thumped his stiff body on the ground near the door
tears gave up to shed even a more drop...his sins were so much big that his existence seemed small to repent

it aches here...here in this heart Maria...a lone tear rolled down her cheeks holding her heart tight she poured her heart in front of Maria...

From the day she left this lonely world to herself...For herself...For gaining her Maan from this big dark bad world
Maria was the only one whom always shared her loneliness, her secrets, her true self...the real Geet was know just to Maria from then
Maria was the one who always took care of her needs, her medicines, her health

you know the time Maan asked me to feed baby that i was suppose to wanted to run to my baby to engulf the little cotton into myself
to fill the emptiness my soul was having...the pain my heart was bearing
but see my luck I couldn't because more them my little baby...baby's father was much much much more important to me
how could I Maria
how could I do this to him..to My Maan...To my Baby
if I have gone to Maan that moment you know he wouldn't have taken a second to become MSK again
the same MSK who killed his own baby

who cheated his own love
and them his remorse would have been way to much then it is now
tooo much
that wouldn't have been any limits of hatred for self
I couldn't take my Maan to that state how could I Maria
tell me was there any other way for me

Maan pushed his head back to the wall lifeless her each and every word made him realize her insecurities...her each step was wrong to make him right
how could just how could anyone love anyone beyond sanity
how could she love a beast like this
HOW..??


Precap: truth continues 😭😳


Prev: Part 15 Next:


guyz know what i dont wanna say anything today but

somewhere yess i am shocked

from 101 to a drastic steep od 39

left me mum today

i was hell excitd with the post coz i was doing it after more then a week

but

seems like

euuu i dont know


sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry FOR ALL THE LATENESS AND ALSO FOR GIVING IT TILL HERE

I WASN'T REALLY ABLE TO TYPE MORE 😕 ME STILL NOT ALLOWED TAKE STRESS

and sorry sweeties i couldnt reply to all so i didnt replied to any

but

THANK YOU FOR ALL THE LOVE YOU PEOPLE SHOWED


so now give me my comments and like

will be waiting

AND WHO ALL WANT PMz PLEASE SEND ME BUDDY REQUEST

I'LL NOT BE ABLE TO PM OTHERWISE

❤️Luv Divzi

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Posted: 13 years ago
it geet truth confession to maria maan listening so emotional



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Posted: 13 years ago
its beautiful.. MAAN guilt and Geet touching lines.. aaww really thats pathethic.. i wish YE dooriyan jaldi khattam hojayen and both get dere love back not as cruel as dey are.. its lovely going.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww Divzz...that's beautiful update...
my herat went out for geet...I knew it...she can never be wrong ...I just love her...can't wait for the next part...

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