A Life For You MaanEet SS_thd2_Completed - Page 12

ab aise to hum apne Maan ko b nahi dekh sakte na 😉

i'll make dis point clear in nxt updt pakka 😃

i knew dis is gnna arise bt it was needed as well

hmmm u think she will

lemme think on it 😉

confusion kya hai ?? shal i help 😃

howww tune mera mind read krna to nahi shuu kia kya 😉

hehehehe dont wry i luv maaneet endings as well

hm ulhjhano main suljhan milti hai na 😉

Originally posted by: tich.1990mg

oye hello exuse me maata,, u are here to bash her,, loll u only made this acc to come here and bash her,, grow up girl if u don't like anything just get lost from here,, no one need ur gyan i think u urself a cheap down market girl who know only bad mouthing about another girl, there is lots of other fic where writer had wrote many vulger items,, where her work is in a decent way,, grow up u gal... and SAYING SORRY IF I HURT SHOWS UR SICK MENTALLY BECAUSE EVERYONE CAN SEE HOW LOW U R...

Originally posted by: tich.1990mg

dear this girl has came to bash divz only see she is a nei bie only 1 post,, she is really a sick minded, she has nothing to do with story or anything,, only to bash the author she is here,, can't thought ppl can be so jealous of others work...

Originally posted by: Nasioush

Frst of all u hve no ryt to insult or judge her...itz already showing u hve opend thz account to bash her...so still thr z tym...grow up...it ll be better...

Originally posted by: icy_magma

I know...
What a character... 😡
She is feeling disgusted ki geet ka character low ho gaya but usse thora sa bhi gussa nahi aaya ki a woman was treated this way by her husband... 😡
God... 😲

Originally posted by: paponecon

totally agree wth u...n she dis this wth her husband her lv although she is showing damn attitude bt u also showed that maan felt that geet is nw somewhere contented...she only wants to punish him n thats the way...n this is a hubby-wifey realtion where u can behave wth ur partner nything what u desire if other have no problem...maan also wants to get punishment from geet n he silently followed geets way...not protested her...only sais i love u...n wanted to punish himself bt nt geet coz in this way geet actually is punishing herself by punishing maan...nywy i hope u never mind for such bogus talks...update sn...

Originally posted by: -harneet.gill-

u jus made an account to bash an author and to abuse her :s

u have no rights to say all this

and by saying all dis ..it shows that you are da one dats cheap and SICK minded.

Originally posted by: SONOMAKTER1

hay u idiot how dare u say anything like this to someone. no its not show her low character its show ur chip mentality, disgusting thought u bloody moron its just a character not a real life story kk and for ur kind informantion if u are a woman than u understand what geet went through when maan dating other woman if u didn't like this story than simply just stay away from this😡. and DIVZZ pls dear don't feel bad bcs of this chip girl/boy whatever😡😡

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran

what is this...u have made a false account to bash a writer...u don't have guts to say ur so called womanly feelings with ur original account...
I am really shocked to read ur comments...are u urself a girl...I doubt...
it is ok if u don't like any update...u should write simply that I don't like what u have written and made Geet's character...
but bashing like this by pointing finger at someone's character is very low mentality...
just like u have write these hurtful words in this forum...if u have guts and call urself a human...u should appologize to her in this same forum...

Originally posted by: sweat_poison

oye heloo

i JUST WANNA WARN YOU

DARE U SAY A WORD AGAIN MY DI

A WORD N I';LL DIGG U OUT OF HELL AS WELL

U EVEN KNOW WHO SHE IS

miss?mr whoeva u are

stay in ur limits

Originally posted by: tich.1990mg

ohho all teh ppl of this forum have gone mad and u are teh only man woman girl aunty whoever u are here to say ur view,, bulls*** just buzz off from this site, no one needs ur vasan n SICK mentally,, go and do ur vajan kirtan in ur temple, japte raho mala apne ghar me what teh hell u came here, to bash everyone,, yeah u are only teh pujari here and yeah i can see who is more despo checking everyone's ff and cmnting on selected one now i won;t be surprise if u came on my post as well but god save u then, but yeah chalu raho MATA thats what divz's thread will be full by next day n she can open a new thread as well, what say girls..

she hugged him, his hands ached to hold her in

she slowly moved off him & slept next to him, cuddled up'

she pulled his arm and rested her head on it & put her leg on him.
he lied looking up what did she want

does she love him any more

will she ever come back to him

why did she look so contended then

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tune on dis song swthts 😳

Song Link

He stares continuously outside towards the big dark sky

Like his life

Like him

BIG..yaa he is big'KI in the best not in India but in whole world

And DARK'because his life was dark, scaring thanks to his own deads

Today is the day when there little angel became 6 month old

And he even doubts

Does she even know it is almost 6 months now

Zindagi Ne Zindagi Bhar Gam Diye
Jitne Bhi Mausam Diye Sab Nam Diye

He knows he did a grave mistake now he have to repent for his deeds his illness

He gave a life scare to the girl who always loved him selflessly

Without any words or commitments, who always lead her life for him but what he gave

Pain and longings

Zindagi Ne Zindagi Bhar Gam Diye
Jitne Bhi Mausam Diye Sab Nam Diye

His life was now all bound with endless tears who long back dried

The one whom he was suppose to worship and love he always gave her a new pain

Whom he should have treasured he always gave her the worst he could

Zindagi Ne Zindagi Bhar Gam Diye
Jitne Bhi Mausam Diye Sab Nam Diye

Now what he was getting

Her late nightouts, her new boyfriends, her new life style

A new Geet'who somewhere made his Geet lost in the same crowd he once was

Jab Tadapta Hai Kabhi Apna Koi
Khoon Ke Aansoo Rula De Bebasi

He was getting the exact same he bored

It is rightly said'you cut what you sow

And her he was'getting the same what gave her

What he always gave to her

Jab Tadapta Hai Kabhi Apna Koi
Khoon Ke Aansoo Rula De Bebasi

His bloody tears long gave up'long dried

But the scares of those tears were still evident in those eyes in those traces

But tto whom he shal shed these

No one he had now'just that little angel whom he treasured

Jee Ke Phir Karna Kya Mujhko Aisi Zindagi

He tried'he tried killing himself several times

Several nights he made a vain attempt of suicide

MSK trying commit suicide'sounds a joke na

Jee Ke Phir Karna Kya Mujhko Aisi Zindagi

Yaa his life was a big joke now

A big bloody joke at whom his own wife laughs sometimes

Each time he did an attempt like this she always mockery me

Jisne Zakhmon Ko Nahi Marham Diye

But what to do I could never lost her even at the sake of my whole life

For my whole next lives

But the punishments he was getting were far painful

because there was no one to apply medicines on those scres

Zindagi Ne Zindagi Bhar Gam Diye
Jitne Bhi Mausam Diye Sab Nam Diye

He comes out of his room and stares at the little manvika playing in her crib

Aoww she is exactly her mother's copy

The Geet who was his'The Geet HE KILLED

Zindagi Ne Zindagi Bhar Gam Diye

He goes near her and silently sits next to her

Caressing her face'

Till now he did everything a parent. A mother and A father was suppose to do

Asking her'he lost the hope long back

Apne Hi Pesh Aaye Humse Ajnabee
Waqt Ki Saajish Koi Samjha Nahi

She was a stranger'a complete stranger to him

She is not his Geet because he was the one to kill her

He was the one to make her ome at the stage she was

Apne Hi Pesh Aaye Humse Ajnabee
Waqt Ki Saajish Koi Samjha Nahi

The Geet he lived all these 6 mouths in the same house in the same room

Was never his

She was someone whom he dint knew

They had that so called husband wife relation but

She was the GSK now...

GSK'now his Geet

Beiraada Kuch Khatayein Humse Ho Gayi

Raah Mein Patthar Meri Har Dam Diye

He smiled with unshed lonesome tears

He always did the same mistake always broke her trust and now when she is doing the same

He is at the stage where he can't even tell her what she is heading towards

And neither could he part from him

Zindagi Ne Zindagi Bhar Gam Diye
Jitne Bhi Mausam Diye Sab Nam Diye

Zindagi Ne Zindagi Bhar Gam Diye

She was his life, his love, his wife, HIS GEET

But he couldn't do anything to make her realize her mistakes

Because he knew what results, what pain it give after that

How painful bloody tears in have for us in the end

Ek Mukambal Kashmakash Hai Zindagi
Usne Humse Ki Kabhi Naa Dosti

He keeps his head at the small small feet of his little cotton ball

Smiling at his fate, at himself

The turn his life gave, the twist it gave all of a sudden to him

Was killing him now

Ek Mukambal Kashmakash Hai Zindagi
Usne Humse Ki Kabhi Naa Dosti

He kisses her feet and slowly a sweet smile crept on his face

Remembering the times he spent with HIS GEET

Where they use to plan for this angel's future

But his life'how true it is na

Life never be friend of yours'never

Jab Mili Mujhko Aasoo Ke Woh Tohphe De Gayi

His own life left him with nothing

Just with the pain, the tears, the longings

Has Sake Hum Aise Mauke Kam Diye

He again shifts his head back to wall'

It was late'again another late night

He knew she will be late again'but who can he sleep peacefully knowing she is out

When he got to know what his life is

Has Sake Hum Aise Mauke Kam Diye

He smile knowing he can't even smile at his fate and slowly closes his eyes

Not sleeping but dreaming of her

HIS GEET

Zindagi Ne Zindagi Bhar Gam Diye
Jitne Bhi Mausam Diye Sab Nam Diye

Zindagi Ne Zindagi Bhar Gam Diye

A wrecked smile marks his lips

And a lonely soul makes his way to his dreamland where he could meet his soul

Where he meet his Geet

But his dreamland got disturbed with a sigh smile knowing the footsteps

Approaching the door

And he at once made his way towards them

And opens the door with a beautiful smile and a sigh

To capture the sight like always

Precap: some secrets to reveal 😳

Prev: Part 14 Next: Part 16

and i was with you all when we bashed MSK

but fr geet

I JUST WANNA SAY

meri geet ko kuch matt bolo pulease

so now give me my comments and like

will be waiting

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