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t_areeb thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
sweet.. they are going to have a family..

please make him speak once...she needs his words more
Shruthe thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
last part ... Just cant wait for it... update soon
jasraj123 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updates
omggg geet found out about MK and she is hurt but why can't she remember that MK is married to his jaan😕
I guess in all this confusion she forgot this real truth😆😆
ufff this maan is tooo sweet can't even confess his love to her😉😉 and he still does not want to hurt her😕
how is this possible
love their being one and still not able to tell each other that they are in sooo much love with each other.
last part😕😕😕 but still alot to tell.
pls make maan atleast confessing openly.
he talk to everyone else sooo openly then why not geet now
at least last time

waiting for update
when are u going to update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yayyy Di me waiting…

Me started a new FF..


Pweeez batana aapko kaisa lagaa...😳
ruchs thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

Waiting for your Lovely UPDATE di….
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Posted: 13 years ago
Muski di.. R u updatin..??
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: AbbyluvsMaan

Muski di.. R u updatin..??

she is off line 😭

muskanp thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
His moans mingled with her own as that pressure built to new levels before finally cresting, breaking, falling, & then he shuddered , jerking in spasms before collapsing atop her small frame taking her with him, resting his head in her neck. She hugged him like it was the last time she was holding him in her arms.

Before he could compose his rasped breath & form words to pour his heart out.. she dosed off with tears in her eyes. He kissed the tears away & promised her the most beautiful day of her life tomorrow. He woke up early & spoke to every one in the family not to question her anything abt her dress in the party. He told them, he had challenged her to wear it & she was just a puppet to his will. He got blasted as usual but was relieved atleast no one would question her. He went out quickly to get some flowers for his jaan.
Geet woke up to find herself alone again in the bed. She slowly caressed her stomach, fresh trail of tears followed. She wrote a note to Maan
u r free from all my bandishein
with a tear inundating her words.
She took her shower & shot a quick prayer to her babaji. She didn't know wat she was doing is right or not. But she didn't know wat else to do. She knew if he learned abt their baby he will have to leave his love for ever. She definitely didn't want him to lose anything in life. She didn't wat their baby to be another bandishein in his life. She was really terrified to go down & face aunty & uncle but then she had to.. she just took enough cash in her purse & went down to the kitchen. She was surprised at jhanvi's reaction when she took her blessings.
Jhanvi ' hume sab pata hain, sab Maan ki zidd thi na. Pata nahi kab yeh ladka suderega. He doesn't respect family reputation at all.. all this r just like some strict rules for him
tum ek bar mama se baat kar lo, wo bahut pareshan hain kal ke incident ko leken.
Her heart was filled with more love & respect for him. He even covered up for her, like always.
She smiled sweetly & went to her house to meet her family before leaving.
Brij slammed the door at her face & told her she was a disgrace to the entire family. Rano tried to explain.. but brij was very stubborn
Maan jo bhi kahen, issen tho aapne ghar ke izaad ka khayal rakna chaiyen tha, its not just Khurana's she has disgraced its Handa's reputation too.
Geet knew she has really brought them lot of defame. She silently walked away. She took a cab & went to the station.

Maan came back excitedly with the bouquet of red roses. He had decided propose to her in the typical filmy way..on his knees.. but was shattered to hear from jhanvi the way she was treated in handa's. He could have yelled at Brij for being rude to his wife.. but then..that is not priority now.. he had other things to sort out. He ran to his room.. only to find that note.
Geet .. his voice sounded unsteady... choked with emotion. Million thoughts slinked through his mind, helplessness, anger at self, fear .. fear to lose her his love his life.. a self hate-redness, on how he failed to keep close his most precious cocooned.
He went out rushing without saying anything to Jhanvi. He inquired with the community guards indirectly. Geet mam ko taxi milne main koi taqleef to nahi hueen?
The guard promptly blurted out he helped her to get the taxi to the station.
Maan smiled weakly & drew crazily to the station.

Geet sat by the window, resting her hand on her stomach. I am sure u will understand me.
She remembered every moment they spent together.. the first time they met.. & all the time they were together.. her heart felt heavy parting away from him like this. As the train began to move slowly... she took a deep breath.. stopping herself from getting off the train, she felt mixed emotions.. she wanted to go back to him.. but then.. she chuckled closing her eyes.. resting her head back in the seat. Her eyes fell open when she heard a thud of person sinking beside her. Her eyes were widen in shock to see him.. though she didn't expect him to find her, but she wanted him to.. tears didn't stop flooding down.. she immediately turned her head away trying to hide it from him.
She didn't have the courage to look into his eyes & say.. mujhe nahi pata tha aap kisi se pyar karten ho
aapne kabhi kaha hi nahi
kher aab main aur aapko humaren bandisho main bandna nahi chathi
the humaren word filled his heart with happiness..joy.. he couldn't express, he felt so filled with emotions.. he just composed himself...
aab tum sab jaanthi ho tho yeh nahi jaanne chavoghi vo kaun hain jise main he chuckled still feeling very shy to openly confess it... pyar kartha hoon
sudden pinch of jealousy ran through her.. though she knew he loves someone.. she had accepted it too.. but to hear it from his mouth, pierced her heart. She wiped the trail of tears & tried to look at him.. he pulled his purse out & showed her the snap.. she didn't want to look at the pic.. she couldn't have seen him with another girl. Wasn't she already going through hell & now to see that persons face!!!
I love her a lot he added with a deep voice
she irritatedly looked back to snap.. but her expression changed into an awe to see her on photo from the wedding album. Tumhi tho thi jisen main college ke baad miltha tha
her cheeks turned red
tumhi tho thi jiske samne Mk ki bolti bant ho jathi.
She was still in shock.. amazed.. disbelieve... he went on his knees & sweetly kissed her stomach
aur yeh koi bandishein nahi, humara pyar hain
she hugged him instantly breaking down in tears, wanting to believe every word he said
she sobbed between the words aapne kabhi kaha nahi
he pouted cutely to the baby... aapki mama waisen tho meri har baat samjh jaathi thi.. pata nahi shaadi ke baad inhe kya hogaya
she made a cute baby face
lekin aapne shaadi ke liyen mana kyun kiya tha
tum engagement ke din itni upset thi
wo tho mama ne daantha tha aapko niharne se...she blurted
he blushed instantly ' phir shaadi ke din kyun danta
wo main dar gayen thi
he complained again cutely to the baby aapki mama na mujhe bahut danthi hain
umm she cribbed
he gently kissed her cherry lips.. & looked back at her with big questioning eyes. Does mama know abt .. she slowly shook her head .. he sighed .. thank God!! he went around shutting the window of the compartment they were in..followed with the door. Her eyes followed him puzzled.. thank God u didn't tell mama.. warna tho wo humren honey moon pe bhi bandishein laga dethi
honey moon
she gasped blushing furiously. He sank next to her pulling her in his embrace, he kissed her cheek wrapping his arms around her, loving every feel of her in his arms.
Maan was staring at her beautiful face, her curls were tied back into a plat.. he slowly opened it.. still lost in those beautiful almond eyes. Her dark full lashes, her lips..sinful temptation.
Maan she muttered not once turning her face away, though it was turning into deeper shade of red.
Aisen kyun dehk rahen ho
Maan shook his head quickly with a small chuckle, agar main tumhe pyar bhi nahi kartha.. I still would have been the happiest person to just have u as my wife.
Geet blushed prettily locking her eyes to his, with a question in her eyes
he took a deep breath kyun ki tum bandishein ke khilaf nahi.. tum ussen utna hi maanthi ho jithna main. Tumhe bandishein main rah ki bhi life enjoy karna aata hain
I was so looking forward to being with u.. sneaking out.. just us.. still not breaking any bandishein
.. she slowly moved closer towards his lips. He kissed her passionately.
She hugged him free from all bandishein.. still bound all... I love u he said moving his lips to her ear & kissing the part of her soft, sweet skin just below her earlobe. His last words came out in a deep whisper. Geet shivered slightly. & he was not surprised to find her lips fused his own in less than a second later. Her silky warm lips sealed against his, her hands clutched his shirt possessively sending a shiver through his spine. He wrapped one hand against the small of her back & other gently resting behind her head keeping her to him. When they pulled apart panting resting their foreheads eyes locked in each other.. I love u a lot she said between the breaths.

almost immediately into a round of kissing & began to make love
an hr later
Geet awoke next to Maan, she smiled at her husband. Looking at him in awe.. did this really happen she wondered. Maan kissed her again. I love you Geet


I love you too, Maan, said Geet. Maan took her into another round of passionate love making.
Don't look at me like that.. we have waited enough
so they lived happily ever after with all the bandishein.. yet nothing bonding them just their love.
PREV PART 29
hope u like it
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love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
sbse pehle...
Time for me to celebrate...
Me first ... Yipppeee... 😃

Okay now.. Muski di... A biggg huggg to u for giving us bandishein.. 🤗
It hs been sucha beautiful and a roller-coaster like journey... I really love u for writing us and giving us the pleasure of reading dis beautiful piece...

I really loved how cutely once again Maan covered up for Geet...
He can never tolerate or bear anyone to point a finger at His jaan..
N he always makes sure that no one points a finger at her... Shooo cutee... 😳

Poor Geet... Decided to leave a note for him.. Bt in ol her hurt heart.. She never let her thoughts properly ponder ova wht xactly those girls had said bout MK n his Jaan...

Aww... i feel sooo bad for Geet... She ws treated sooo badly by her own family.. Brij is sooo mean... Hate him... Grrr...

Awww... Yash came sooo happy.. N her voice got all hoarse reading the note... His heart bleeded n feared at the thought of loosing his jaan... Me felt sooo bad for him...

But oye oye wait...
I knew.. Maan wil catch Geet... 😉
But the after scenes... Muski di.. A standing ovation to u for them.. Dey wer sooo cute... 😳
Maan confessed his love sooo cutely...
Aww... He always kept her foto in his purse...
Geet dhyan rkh leti cheezon ka to pehle hi pta lg jata.. 😆
But it ws sooo cute.. The way he confessed that Geet hi to uski jaan hai jisse wo colg k baad mila karta tha...
It ws sooo cute...
Srsly.. Muski di.. Dis amazingly cute confession rly brought tears of happiness in the corner of my eyes... Sooo adorable...

I loved hw cutely Maan complained to the baby ki uski mumma uske papa ko bohot daant ti hain... I ws lyk awww... Cn anything be cuter than dis... 😳
I loved hw maan told her dat even if he hadnt loved her.. He wud hv been d happiest person to hv her as his wife bcz she knws hw to njoy even wid all these bandishein... 😳
I rlly adored hw Maan said .. Acha hua honeymoon k bare me mumma ko nhi btaya wrna yahan bhi bandishein... Aww.. Poor guy.. Fed up of all the bandishein...

I absolutely adored this beautiful SS Muski di..
N it wil always be close to my heart...

Love u sooo much... 🤗
Edited by AbbyluvsMaan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yaay Me SECOND…😆


Awww Me loved this part so much…😳


My breath literally got stuck in throat when Geet left….


Maan is really very sweet…😳


He took all the blame…😲


He even thought of proposing her in a filmy style…😆


Me hating Brij…😡


Awww Maan chased her and caught her finally in the train…Phew…😳


Aww so sweet he understood, just with the word 'Hamarein'😳


Me really loved the honeymoon part….😳


Awesome update di…👏


Really sad that such a beautiful SS ended…😭


Love you di...😳
Edited by ruchs - 13 years ago

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