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Part 6

There were some used utensils kept in the basin...she decided to clean them before she is instructed to do something else...

maan was in deep sleep..in the mean time...geet did all the cleaning and decided to hav a bath...she proceeded to move towards room when her eyes fell on sleeping maan...he was very uncomfortably lying on that sofa ...and aircondition was in the lowest of temperature keeping the living area very cool...
instead of this coolness ,man lying there was not even with his bedsheet on...and seems was not in the need of one...geet folded her hands close to her chest giving him a last look moved inside the room...

She observed she had all her clothes lying in bundles on floor...she still couldnt make out why she is been treated so strangely good..then
she thought may be becoz she is wearing his clothes thats why she is given her own to wear...though her collection had almost heavy stuffs included in it...she took out the simplest of chudidaar and kurta in white ,white being her favourite color..



she could make out that she had the Fanciest and costliest of clothing with her ...In deep and confused thoughts in her mind with all possible reasons for such happenings she went to take a bath and soon to get ready for other house hold chores when all of sudden her head spun lil out of weakness...she kept her fingers on her forhead and avoiding it moved towards the washroom to freshen up...



She came out in her bful white kurta ,her wet hairs open...and wthout a single jewellery and ounce of make up she was looking nothing less than an angel...





she put her dupatta elegantly on her neck remembering how her father likes it that way...she was lost in those days when she was been pampered by her father to the extent one cant even think off..starting from hair massage to her favourite food ..he use to do it all for her she never felt the need of her mother...a lone tear escaped her eyes
..when door bell again rung...she quickly rubbed it with her weak hands and moved before maan wakes up with the bell ..last thing she wanted was to disturb him in his sleep...

she opens the door only to find sheela...sheela smiled looking at her extraordinary looks and looking her much fresh ...she entered inside greeting her good morning...geet reluctantly let her inside not knowing why sheela is here in the first place when she is already there almost fit and fine now...thinking something geet said to sheela..

geet: mai ab theek hu

sheela once again smiled at her saying

sheela: bohot achcha madam...aap sach me kaafi theek lag rahi hai aaj...aap aaram kijiye ab


saying this sheela moved inside only to see the most unusual site ...maan sleeping on sofa at 9 am...sheela looked at geet and then maan...at which geet gave her the most innocent looks as to she dont know why the ac is at the lowest temperatures and still he is fast asleep..geet shivered slightly and followed sheela towards the kitchen...

It was strange to see there were no utensils in sink .she moved to pick the broom for clening when geet quickly took it from her saying " i ll do that"...to which sheela coudnt stop wondering and said

sheela: mam ...aap aaram kijiye..ye mai karlungi...aapka kaam nahi hai

geet didnt know how she decided if it was her work or not...before she could respond..sheela took the broom from her and started cleaning...geet arranged her stuffs in maans wardrobe giving sheela free floor to clean which was earlier all filled with her clothes yesterday...she cleaned the bed sheet while sheela was cleaning the floor ...

sheela even stopped asking geet to take some rest realizing she is no where to listen ...she shrugged and let her do whatever she was doing...


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In living area...

Maan moved in his sleep feeling a strain on his back coz of sleeping uncomfortably...his phone beeped to which he came out of his sleep and took his phone to see it was aditya's call...he kept the mobile aside not in mood to attnd his call...since his head was aching badly now off hangover...along with his back...he sat straight when again aaditya called him to which he switched off his phone...

maan heard some noise in kitchen...and blankly shouted knowing its sheela

maan: my coffeee...

he took out his cigratte and started blowing after doin little exercise to loosen his muscles...

Here geet convinced sheela politely that food preparation is her duty ...sheela made it a point to discuss this with sir tomorrow as to what is going on here...sir dint instructed her as she has to leave her job then why all this... gal from no where, all of suddent kicking her out of this house devoiding her off from such handsome salary she was getting by maan...she was actually scared now ...sir definitley would not need her anymore ...sheela left while maan was sleeping

Geet was in kitchen now loooking a the egg which she never made being a vegetarian...now learning from sheela that maan will have half fry egg in his brkfst and a coffee as soon as he wakes up ...sheela left after instructing her as to how she needs to make his cooffee,...as he was v specific abt it and will shout if it is not as per his taste...

geet jumped in kitchen when maan asked for a cooffee...she kept the egg aside deciding to think over it later on...and started making his coffee .she mumbled

geet: paaani...coffee...brown sugar half spoon...no milk😕

she made an eww face saying this recipee...and above all she made ever so weired face when she tasted it...🤢

geet: chi babaji ...lagta hai kuch galti ho gayi hai sheela ko batane me...sugar k bina kaise achi lagegi coffee...

according to her taste ...she kept on placing the sugar till she tastes it sweet enough to drink...she so wanted to add the milk but then she was sure sheela asked her not to put milk strictly...and coz he was specific abt his cooffee ,she dint dared to make any changes...😛


Maan was now and then looking at the door of geets room which was closed...seems she is still feeling weak ,he thought to ask sheela to hav a check on her...he lied again with his eyes closed and hands on forehead in deep thoughts...when geet came and kept the cooffee on table and rushed inside the ktchen without looking back...hearing a noise of cup on table maan sat straight to have his coffee now..

As soon as he had sip of it...damn...it was soo sweet...he could even smell that swetness from his nose...strangely he didnt felt angry today but then this sweetness was not his typesss

There geet was peeping from the kitchen door to check if he was ok with the coffee...but her eyes popped out when she saw his face and furious body moving towards kitchen...she jerked and ran inside knowing she did a mistake ...he dint like her cooffee...

maan inside the kitchen ..kept the cooffe mug on slab with a thud...and his eyes rolled towards the only physical presence there...

maan: ye kya hai...?


and there when she slowly turned to face him...he was stunned to see her in kitchen ...but in a moment she knocked out all senses from him...she was standing there looking heavely bful...his world stopped there and he was in semi conscious state...geet looked at her feets till chest bending her head down as to why he was loking at her in this manner ...to check if something was wrong..


she moved towards him and ever so softly asked ..

geet: coffee achi nahi hai...

to which maan didnt replied but kept looking at her moving lips and eyes in to and fro motion...not sure he heard something

geet was confused why he was standing like a frozen structure...she again tried to speak out this time taking the cooffee mug from his hands which slightly touched his fingers ...
he immediately removed his fingers from the mug having some senses...

geet intelligently said😳

geet: isme milk nahi hai...shayad isliye nahi achi lagi hogi...daal du..

maan : hmm

geet quickly placed some hot milk in coffee ...stirring it with some more sugar...she had a slight smile when she tasted it which dint went unnoticed by maan...she offered him his mug...he could sense it with her eyes that she wanted him to taste it ..so he took it from her and tasted it looking into her eyes...

geet: ab theek hai..

geet looked at him expectedly

maan: PERFECT!!!!!!!!!!😲


geet smiled very slightly...and there with divine look of her ,maan had the entire coffee looking at her madly...all of suddent geet felt a giddiness ..she held the kitchen slab to hold herself...
maan came out of his mesmerized state and held her waist before she losts her balance...but thankfully it was short lived and out of weakness she was feeling dizzy ...and without brkfast as well...

maan was hell angry...now realizing wht she was doing in kitchen in this state...and why he is having coffee made by her...angry on him self...he pulled her by her waist to which she fell on her chest grabbing his shoulders softly.


he held her ever so tightly ...she wriggled a little


maan: why are you here.. ?? in top of his voice scaring geet...she was red listening his high pitched voice...and carried her in his arms
strange ...all his head ache and muscle pain was vanished ...god knows ,,,if it was by looking at her or drinking her magical coffee😃

part 7
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Edited by varshr - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Geet doing household work.
Loved confused expression seeing Maan
Sleeping like that. N she doesn't understand
His ever so nice caring attitude. Remembering
The time wen she was pampered by her dad.

She needs to build trust in Maan. Sheela
Angry that she is doing all her work n she
Will be fired.

Geet while making coffee was looking cute.
How she was making faces seeing the distasteful
Coffee. Preparing in her style.

Maan ordering for coffee. Angry getting
Coffee so sweet. But everything vanished seeing
The Angel. Lol Geet adding milk n cursing
Sheela for recipe of coffee.

Do continue soon. Loving the flow of story.

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Posted: 12 years ago
oh missed the last two parts...
loved the concern of Maan...even being a "devil" he's so nice and love the way he treats Geet...and Geet is really cute...

pls update soon loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful part dear
poor geet is not able to understand why maan is treating her good
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Posted: 12 years ago
SUPER AWESOME DI 👏
love it soo much
haayeee maan drinking milk coffee made by geet lost in her 😳
itna chotu update 😔

waiting for maan reaction about geet doing house hold work 😛
plz update soon n big update 😃

Edited by Brown-Eyes - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautifulll Update Di 😃
Wo bhi after this lonnggg,
Really missed ur writings 😭
Welcome back 🤗
Hehehehehe Bechara Maan, Geet ki sugary sugary coffee bhi pee gaya chup chap 😆
Witing for their Love to blossom ❤️
Plsss continue soonnn 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww...that was super sweet update...
cont
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally you are back ...awesome update ...loved it :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 7


he kept her on bed...geet knew she is gone today...he locked his fingers with hers lying partially on her in sitting postion...while she was lying completely straight on bed her eyes closed ...she was still not sure if it was his concern or anger on her... completely confused about this man...

He drinks alcohol which she knows now,he smokes alot...he is fiery ..broad enough to scare her...but still he never hits her...may be he is helping her..but his weird mannerism frightens her every now and then...

N no. of thoughts ,rationalization was goin in her mind...but there was no one to answer her as to why she is here ,who is he,wht she is expected...she was just perceiving things...

Here as always maan was waiting for her to open her eyes...but geet's chain of thought has no end...deep inside maan knew he was behaving like a psychotic...but he wanted her to open her eyes so that he could look into her and calm himself in her depthness and purity...whtever it was...it was his very need now and here...

when she made no efforts to open her eyes...maan put his wait on her hands...encircling his fingers more tighly on her at which geet flinched lil ...dare not opening her eyes ...he was still smelling alcohol + coffee...he was going completely mad ...she was in white colour like the goddess of purity lying beneath him ..he was breathing heavily..

he lost it...having no other way..in sheer need ..he said

maan: open your eyes...

Never expecting these lines by maan...geet opened her eyes in a jerk ...all her thoughts and imagination of worst goin to happen vanished..she was baffled...now she was more puzzled as to what this man is????why he always asks her to open her eyes in the first place...

she looked into his eyes only to see he was already so deeply involved in them looking at her...this time his vision halted on her eyes for sometime till she looked into his eyes...and then to her lips...her face...and neck..again on her eyes and so on...as geet observed...

geet was naive to know much about love and things like that ...so she never thinks on that part...she was already so mistreated by ppl that only thoughts she could hav were negative... long before she had stopped expecting any positive frm this world..

Her little palms were numb with his weight she tried to move them to adjust his weight looking at her hands sideways...maan's eyes travelled her vision when he realized his position...he was almost lying on her...he pulled himself in a jolt ...ohh...he was ashamed off himself now..wht ws he trying to do??? wht is she doing to mee!!!

geet sat straight now looking at him like an alien

maan in frustration: u had something to eat??

geet lowered her lashes

maan even louder: medicine??

geet shivered

she immediately took the medicine placed beside and clumsily opened them

watching her body language...maan closed his eyes tight..he was frightening her , he realized..he tighten his fist to cntrl his emotions...and held her hands tight into his to stop her...

geet went cold when all of sudden he placed his hands on her and he took the medicines away frm her...

he wanted her to have something and then take medicines so he straight away went inside the kitchen...only thing he could see was eggs placed on slab..he quickly made omlettes for her..

Here geet was not sure what she was suppose to do now...she really needs to know what he wants else she will end up doing mistakes and last she wanted was to be thrown in brothel again ...she wanted to stay here coz the feel of this place was far better...

Her chain of thoughts broken when maan came inside with a tray of juice and omlette...

geet eyes popped out when she saw egg on tray..(note:she is vegetarian )

**varsh says :lolzzz... geet beta ...aap maan ko meethi coffee pilaogey aur wo badla bhi na ley ;);)**

maan sat besides her and gave her the plate without once looking at her...he was fed up to loose himself every now and then...seems he needs vigourous exercise to get his brains on right track..otherwise this girl will definitely end up sending him to a psychiatrist..

geet was looking at her plate with her big eyes...in place of omlette ..now she could see small little chickens jumping and crying on her plate asking her to leave them

maan : have it

geet: Ji...her imagination came to end listening to maan's word...

maan : never take medicines empty stomach..dont you know that...and where is sheela??

geet : she left ..

maan thought to give her a piece of his mind tomorrow...

maan was not leaving her room til she will not hav her brkfst and medicines...he knew she is irresponsible when it comes to her health...god knows why she was in kitchen making coffee for him when she is so weak...he cursed himself to ask her for a coffee..sweet coffee!!!!

There geet was still staring her meal...she slowly placed her hands on knife and fork and a sound fron bakgrnd came..

pak pak pakaaa...

she left them on plate making cracklling sound to which maan looked at her plate...she didnt even started yet..

maan rubbed his forehead with his palms and grabbed her plate ...took a fork near her mouth with a piece of omlette...

geet looked at it expanding her eye balls..she had no spare now...she opened her mouth slowly and ate with full disapproval...

maan didnt noticed anything...he was hardly lookin at her face...just took the fork near her and so on..

Her eyes had tears eating them...she could still feel chickens jumping inside her mouth...when he neared the fork for the fifth tmne now...geet couldnt hold anymore...she stood up and ran towards washroom and threw badly...
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poor geet chiken am vegeterian

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