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awesome OS dear
it was pain ful but i just simply loved it
it was indeed their happy ending
argg hate that stupid dev😡 want to kill him with my bare hands
how could he just do this to his younger brother who he looked at like his son
i would rather have them die together fulfilling their last wish of happy ending rather then seeing geet humiliating and that too in front of Maan
thank u so much for such a lovely / sad OS dear
yes i would prefear for u to write happy lovely dovey OS like u always do dear coz i got the habbit of reading happy OS ff from u😆
thanks for the pm dear

Beautifully written marvee!! Loved it

Omg dat was beautiful!! Nd painfull !!
Ive gt tears in my eyes :'(
Loved it!!

my my gurl you have written OS for the first time congrats for that

You know my biggest fear is that my loved ones dies erode me and I have to bary them so my Pryer always is to die before or when my loved ones die so I understand this story completely

OMG Marvee...i'm balling right now😭

It was very beautifully written...BRUTAL...but beautiful😭

I would say that you really do have a writer in you..jo har kahani likh sakti hai..well done hun👏👏

To answer your question I would say that this is a happy ending in a tragedy because the way death came to them was unfortunate but at least their wish came true and they died together.😊

Thank You hun for writing a masterpiece and sharing it with us...love you😛

Beautifully written bt my eyes went moist, such a sucker I am

awesome update loved it 👏