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@bhanu_rekhag

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

simlly amazing dear...

tgough its sad story butcits truly maaneets happy ending...soo heart touchy

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

aah marvee...that was sooo painful but i liked it...the way you portrayed it. awsome dear...but pllsss dont repeat this😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

very heart wrenching n a beautiful OS...

loved it..

thanx for d pm...

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crazydream

@crazydream

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

A beautiful update
Fabulous

A totally different concept.

Hats off to you for writing such a story.

Not evry love story has happy ending but this had a tragic ending with a reunion of two souls.

Geet n Maan had undying love for each other.

The ending was great n was totaly justified.

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Sushmacholke

@Sushmacholke

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

O.S frm marvee!!!! i was so excited and thrilled by ur warning !!! as i started reading gosh shock again shock pain so much it made me cry!!!!!!! anger just filld my viens bloody filthiest scumbag basterous dev...
I cudnt take tat much brutality...
Maan n Geets helplessness hurt me to the core... i was hoping for miracle
, i stoppd my breathng wen geet cut herself n maan to got shot !!!!! but trust me ending was justified
DEAD BUT THEIR SOULS MET
Maaneet prayed for their death together in each others arms!!!!!!!
I was relieved tat they both died for their love to be only theirs not being others ...Superb execution of past and present
THANK U FOR O.S MARVEE JAAN
PERFECT ELEMENTS OF LOVE PAIN VENGENCE HURT LOYALTY ...
GRTLY PUT TOGETHER
IT MADE US CRY...WITH SATISFIED SMILE
P.S-LOVED THE S.R PART MUCH;);););););)

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Coffee

@coffee_beans

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Marvee! This is one of your best work... I'm so deeply moved by this OS ..Its awesome and you have done a brilliant job with the writing style too .. the flashbacks are so aptly placed and the characterization of all is commendable.. so touching and loving!
I'm in love with this <33

xoxo

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asmuasmi

@asmuasmi

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

aww!! it is sooo gud n osum,...truly magical, hats off!

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mahi.ve

@mahi.ve

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Oh god...it was just AWESOME OS...usaly i hate this type of OS(i mean which has THIS type of ending) but but...u just change my hatred in to LOVe...i just loved this OS.

Simply supberb...great job.

Thax 4 the pm.😊

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Maaneet4eve

@Maaneet4eve

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#49

The pain was beautifully depicted... brilliant... and though the ending was tragic... it was definitely a happy ending because whereever there is Geet Maan will always remain there!!!!