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Deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

part 9
this girl is really a disaster...
why is that she always ends up doing something like this?
her dad could be somewhat considerate...
cont soon dear...

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Sara Khanna

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Posted: 12 years ago

Jaan, mujhe pata hai, all of this. Not to worry coz you will not discontinue any of it. Will wait till last breath and i mean it. Leap?? Story ki pace thodi fast honi chahiye, agree. Geet ka overweight, iske baare mey mein bahut baar bata chuki hu.

It was lengthy and very well written, no doubt. Bechari, not even a single chance in whole part to act normal. Dadima, as cute as ever, my teddy bear. Whole of it was so much, i can understand ke bechari par kya beeti hogi. But it was so amazing moment between them. The 'meera' imagining scene, the 'sharam se pani' Geet hiding from shirtless Maan, the 'accidents' in a row, the all in all scenes ... I mean, as always, the EVERYTHING was damn beautifully written. Haye, ab toh bechari ko baksh de.

Do cont soon and do PM me.

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Tinker ;)

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Posted: 12 years ago

i feel sooo bad for her 😔 its was so embarrasing poor girl

hope maan support her 😳

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice part
feel sad for geet
hope she will fine soon
continue soon

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punam2712

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Posted: 12 years ago

POOR GEET

WHATEVER SHE DOES TURNS INTO AN EMBARRASSMENT IN FRONT OF MAAN

SHE JUST ENDS UP LOOKING LIKE AN IDIOT IN FRONT OF HIM

WHAT WILL HE THINK OF HER NOW

SHE LOST AN OPPORTUNITY TO STAY WITH HIM FOR SOME TIME

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

hi thanks 4 da pm bt read n commented already

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kuhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

lovely update

poor Geet sick what next

pleas cont soon

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preethia

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Posted: 12 years ago

loved the update

poor geet not sure when she will gain some confidence in herself

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crazydream

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Posted: 12 years ago

Lovely update.

Poor Geet. Always end up in

Messing things up in front of dadi n Maan

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take_a_hint

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome

caught up with all 4 parts

amazing story

wish u update often

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