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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ruchs

Okies so since me cant update before Tuesday due to my assignments, Me is giving you a nice twisty teaser' Hope you like it'😉

Twisty TEASER

"WHATTT Vicky is married???"

"Haan' Parr yeh baat mere alawa koi nahi janta'."

"But' Yeh hai kaun'"

"SASHA di'"

Lagaa na jhatka'.😆

Okies now tell me what do you think about it'😉 Me will pakka try to update ASAP'.😳





ab ek to tum aisa jhatka dogi or phir kahogi update dene mai time hai to hum 😲kya karege...
bachere maan ko bhi pakka itna bara jhatka laga hoga sunkar that shasha is married to his brother
come back soon...

Edited by maansee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ruchs

Okies so since me cant update before Tuesday due to my assignments, Me is giving you a nice twisty teaser' Hope you like it'😉

Twisty TEASER

"WHATTT Vicky is married???"

"Haan' Parr yeh baat mere alawa koi nahi janta'."

"But' Yeh hai kaun'"

"SASHA di'"

Lagaa na jhatka'.😆

Okies now tell me what do you think about it'😉 Me will pakka try to update ASAP'.😳

Love you guys'.😳

Ruchi'



POOR MAAN

EK KE BAAD EK JHATKE MIL RAHE HAI USE



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Posted: 13 years ago
just read the whole thing in one shot... loved it to the core...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing updates...
awww poor pari...
nice teaser...
waiting for the update..
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Im 2 much sleeppy!!! 🥱

Kb tak update mile gi????
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: princes939

Im 2 much sleeppy!!! 🥱

Kb tak update mile gi????


Me just posting it in max 10-15 minutes….😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

A super big thanks to all those who commented and liked...😳
Your comments really make my day...😳

Me is a little down... Having series of headaches.. So me got late, Sholly...😭
please buddy me for PMs...😳

PART - 37

Geet looked on amused to see a variety of emotions on Maan's face. He looked up and tilted his head as if asking her to elaborate. Geet wanted this part to be elaborated by Vicky rather than her but she knew that today Maan was not in the mood to let anything go.

"Haan... Meera hi Pari hai…. Mujhe bhi yeh baat London mein hi pata chali thi..."

Maan was not satisfied with this answer. He knew that there was much more to the story. He was about to enquire further when Geet replied as if understanding his questions.

"….. Meera yahan India mein apni pehchaan chhupa kar kyun reh rahi thi yeh baat mujhse aur Vicky se behtar aapko Papa bataa sakte hain…. Parr haan yeh baat zarur hai ki Meera ko bhi apne asli Mom-Dad ke baare mein kuchh saal pehle tak nahi pata tha…."

Maan nodded making a mental note to question his mom-dad first thing when they come back from London. He was rather surprised when he got to know that they, along with Rano ma and Papaji had gone somewhere for some important work but he didn't know then that they had gone to London. Now that he thought of it, he wondered why Rano ma and Papaji had also gone along with them? Maybe, to provide emotional support. He clutched his head as nothing was making sense to him.

Geet knew that all this was very hard on him. She was quite worried what will happen when he comes to know about the other facts related to Pari...Specially about her medical issues….

Her thoughts were disturbed when she accidently knocked her purse off the bed. All the things came tumbling out. Before she could get off the bed, Maan held her hand and assured that he will do it.

"Yeh kya hai Geet?"

Maan was holding another photograph. Geet took it from him and gasped.

"Bass Babaji issi chiz ki kami thi... Abb main kya karoon…."

She cribbed to her Babaji and unfortunately Maan heard it.

"GEEET…. Apne Babaji ko shanti mein jeene do, unhe tang karna band karo aur meri baat ka jawaab do…."

Geet's mouth became a perfect 'O' hearing the allegation and she cutely pouted.

The photograph showed Vicky tying a mangalsutra to a girl .The girl's face was not visible due to her hair and the veil on her head.

"….Tum mujhe sidhe sidhe batati ho ya phir main apne tarike se puchhoon???"

"Vo…. Vo…. Vahi hai jo aapko dikh raha hai..."

"GEEET... Yeh kaisa jawaab hai…."

"Hey Babaji aankhen hain ya Button…." Geet muttered to herself.

"Kya kaha tumne???"

"Hey Babaji aap chilla kyun rahe ho... Kal hum doctor ke paas challenge….Mujhe pura yakin hai ki aapke chashma lagne ka time aa gaya hai aapko itni badi badi aankhen hone ke baad bhi dikh nahi raha???..."

"GEEET…..."

"….Aapko dikh nahi raha ki wo superman ki shaadi ki photo hai…."

"WHATTT Vicky is married???

"Haan... Parr yeh baat mere alawa koi nahi janta….."

"But... Yeh hai kaun..."

"SASHA di..."

Bechara Maan got the shock of his life. His very loyal employee and his twin brother were apparently hitched???? He felt like a fool that he couldn't even get to know what was happening right under his nose. He was very sure that if all these shocks and twists keep on coming in his life daily, he would very soon have a heart attack. He looked at Geet angrily.

"Kya hai….Aap mujhe aise kyon ghoor rahe hain…."

"Yeh tum mujhse puchh rahi ho…."

Geet meekly nodded getting scared of his anger filled red eyes.

"…. Ghoorun nahi toh kya tumhari aarti utarroon???" He asked sarcastically.

"Arrey nahi nahi aap meri aarti utaarenge toh achchha nahi lagega na…."

Maan gave up on her.

"GEEET…. Mujhe yeh batao Yeh hua kab??"

"Vo… Vo... Kuchh hi din pehle..."

"Oh god Geet aur bhi kuchh hai toh please mujhe abhi bata do…. Don't tell me ki Vicky ek bachche ka baap bhi hai..."

"Arrey nahi nahi…. Sasha di is on birth control pills…."

She said and immediately bit her tongue. Now Vicky and Sasha will kill her for sure. She looked up to and saw that Maan's eyes had become as large as saucers. He went completely red from embarrassment.

"OUCH..."

"Kya hua Geet... Tum theek ho…."

"Vo... M..Main…. Aaah..."

He had first thought that she cried because the baby had kicked but Maan became alarmed as he saw Geet double up with pain.

"GEEET KYA HUA???"

"M…. M.. MA…. MAAN..N"

Geet moaned in pain as her breath started getting heavier. Maan was horrified to see her face was losing colour and it had become deathly pale. He immediately picked her up and without wasting any time rushed down the stairs.

"NAKULLL…. DRIVER SE KAHO JALDI GAADI NIKAALE…. FASST….."


PRECAP

BRIJ ka pehla Vaar...


Me Knows the update is short but that's the best me could do with this headache...😭

Me will try to update again tomorrow if this stupid headache allows me..😳

Me also wants to know if you people feel that there is something lacking in the story till now...😳


PREV - PART 36 NEXT - PART 38


please do leave your precious comments

they encourage me to write more!!!😉

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Edited by ruchs - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hahaha awsome maan ko laga shock!!!!!!! 😆
Sasha or vickey ki shadi ho gai or bataya bhe nae upr se geet ne un ka embrasin raaz khol diya haha
Geet kon se month ki pregnent ha??jo pain ho rhi ha!!ya avi undr baby footbal khel rha ha??hehe lol i mean kick mar rha ha!!
Loved da update!!!
Maan v r wid u!!or pata nae kon kon se shockin raaz chupae hai geet ne hum se!!! 😉
Update next sooon
WAITING
Edited by princes939 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
kya hua geet ko😲
brij ka pehela war
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Posted: 13 years ago
maan so shocked😳
so the cute baby already started troubling mama😉

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