MG(FF)--REVENGEFUL MARRIAGE THREAD 1 - Page 45

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Posted: 13 years ago
will try to give the longer comments but i'm not too good in wording out the thoughts,though i'll try
As for the story I think you can reveal the past in few coming parts i don't want this to be a ff but mini ff sounds good.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome upadte
yes change it to FF di
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update...
Geet is still scared of maan but has fully adjusted to her new sasural...even man is getting attracted towards her...
Sasha toh sasha rahegi...uska kuch nahi hoga...
I am loving the progress of the story...

As for your query...I would recommend ki turn it in ff...the story has lot of potential...abhi tak maan and geet are just tiniest bit attracted to each other but they are not aware of thier feelings...from the story I can feel ki geet has few baggages from her past...she is still afraid of maan but yet somewhere trusts him too...
Your characterisation of maan shows him as an ruthless person...he has not yet started to think about geet as his wife...ofcourse he feels somewhat guilty of what he did but still names to squash that feeling quickly...
Thier relation needs time to grow...geet needs to overcome her past and maan needs to accept geet fully as his wife emotionally...
So my vote goes to turn it to ff...

Continue soon...
Thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
love to their bond

its really wowww to see sasha face
ha ha haaa
maaja aa gaya yaar
kya dil hai maan ka

and respact for geet in his move
is just something that left me like wowww
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superlike as stupid like nt wrkng 😡
luvly prt...geet n we got to see a diff side of maan...

I personally want the story shld build up in few more prts then only reveal geet past...
would love to read more prts of this...rest is upto u...
thnxs 4 pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
really nice part...maan is getting lil sweeter with her now...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww amazing dear..i really loved it..hayee maan taking care of geet...cant wait for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
do it as u wish dear i mean if u feel its necessary to reveal in the next part do it otherwise the 2nd option ok with anyone wanna know the reaction of maan's family update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome dear please pm when u update thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome update loved it don't end this story so soon i want to see maaneet some sweet moment😳

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