MG(FF)--REVENGEFUL MARRIAGE THREAD 1 - Page 44

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it...
awesome..
i liked the maan attitude towards sasha...
maans liking towards geet is so cute...
i want the story to continue as a ff...
will be waiting for ur updates...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: drrose31


Hi all...do read the note at the end...and voice your views


he cuts the call and drove to khurrana co. in frustration and anger.


Geet looked at Maan scared. As if sensing her gaze Maan spoke:-

you don't have to worry about my anger (she averted her gaze). We are going KC first then home, you just wait for me for half an hour(Geet nodded yes).


Maan entered KC, Geet by his side. All staff members looked at them in surprise. They knew Maan sir has married someone forcefully after ra**g her. But the world is unaware of Mrs. MSK, and seeing her for the first time all were surprised at the innocent looking girl and felt "perfect Jodi" hai'


Geet was shocked again at his style, arrogance, attitude and rudeness towards his staff. And the atmosphere, the place, the way the staff shivered with his single look at them. All she could do was to follow him.


Maan said:- Adi and Sasha come to my cabin in two mints and he opened the door for his wife.


Geet was again shocked that MSK is opening a door for her!! He never showed this kind of respect before. Geet entered followed by Maan.


Maan:- Sit there (pointing at the chairs opposite to his , on his working table) and he sat on his chair..


Geet was 5th time shocked seeing his cabin'It was wow. But colors were as life less and dull as of his room's. And she already planned how to brighten up his cabin.


Maan saw the change of expressions on her face and he got it what she must be thinking.



Maan:- I like the office this way (then thought'why I said so???? That too her???)


Geet was shocked nth time(ST):- He actually talked with me???? Or I just imagined ???


Maan(cleared his voice):- wo'. I ''mean'..I like these colors'


Geet(sighed, he actually said that to her):- Nice'.They are sober (she gave him a little smile).


Maan liked that:- Hmm'.


A knock on the door and Adi and Sasha entered .


(Adi and Sasha along with Pinky and Tasha knew Geet as they were present at reception party'Adi and Pinky were friendly with Geet but Sasha as usual didn't like Geet at all)


Sasha:- Hello MK. I told clients, but...


Maan(cuts Sasha):- Sasha did you forget my wife that soon???

You didn't greet her?? And for clients, am here now'I don't like excuses right!!!!


Sasha was fuming but pretended to be cool:- Hello Geet.


Maan:- Call her ma'am. No need to take her name as she is your boss's wife'


Geet felt proud at the respect which Maan showing to her for the first time..Poor Maan, he didn't know what he was saying , it was like, as if words were coming directly from his heart and his tongue just followed the words.


Sasha:- Hello ma'am!!! So MK shall we go(Sasha was double embarrassed by the person whom she wanted to win )


Maan:- Hmm'.you go am coming..(sasha left)



Maan:- Adi, let them wait for 30 mints. They must know the consequences to call MSK without any necessary work.


Geet just looked at Maan'who was he actually???


Maan dialed a no and said:- Pinky come to my cabin'.Haan(yes) leave the reception and come now'.and he hanged up.


Within 30 seconds pinky was in.


Maan:- Pinky, take my wife with you and show her around my office make sure she is comfortable. I will be busy for 1 hr..


Pinky nodded and Maan stood up and Adi followed Maan outside his cabin.



Time with Pinky was just amazing for Geet .. Geet enjoyed being with her and same was with Pinky. Someone was getting jealous seeing Geet happy that was Sasha.

On the other hand Maan was seeing smiling, giggling and laughing Geet, the first time in this 1 month(or so ) of their marriage.


Maan realized she was indeed a happy go lucky nature girl. Again a little guilt build inside him and he left to meeting room.



After an hr, Maaneet left for home. Geet wished she could spent some more time there but she couldn't voice her wishes as no one except papa(Rajveer ), who thought of her happiness and asked and permitted her for studies, cared what she wants.



The brakes made Geet back to the present and she saw outside window, it was a traffic signal and at a corner a gol gappa wala was there. She eyed the shop with her longing eyes. After landing California (means after her childhood) she never tasted them. A kid inside her popped out and she wished she could taste it once again.


Maan watched her face keenly with signal turned into green but Geet's eyes were still on the shop. Eventually the sight faded , leaving a deep sigh, Geet turned to Maan's side and then she saw him turning the car back from other side and the car stopped in front of that golgappa shop. She happily turned to Maan.


Maan:- Jaao khaalo'(Go eat')


Geet(happily):- Sachiii!!!(Really!!!)


Maan:- Hmm'.Now don't waste my time and go..Eat fast and come back'I will take a turn..


Geet :- Thank you and she just hugged him out of excitement.


Both got shocked at that sudden hug'Geet broke the hug and said:- Sorry'.wo..


Maan(cuts her as he saw her scary face):- It's ok' Now go'. And she went out happily.


Geet was eating golgappazz and Maan was just watching her making cute and funny faces, automatically he smiled seeing her happy and excited.


After she finished shop keeper asked for money, at the same time Maan thought something and came out of the car.


Geet(st):- Oh no!! I don't have money.. but for now let me ask Maan then I will see what to do to return his money.


Thinking so she turned and she collided with Maan, Maan made her steady and said: -Watch and Walk.


Geet:- Sorry' Wo '


At the same time Maan took out money and gave to the shop keeper and said :- keep the change'


Shop keeper got happy and Maan asked Geet:- Lets go' we are getting late'

and they went to the car


Maaneet entered home . Raj was happy seeing them together and asked:- What happened???


Maan:- She got admission and from tomorrow she has to attend classes for final semester.


Raj:- oh!! Are you happy beta????


Geet smiled and nodded:- Ji papa(yes dad.)


maan looked at her...she is calling dad papa!!!!



Dadimaa:- One mint, how can she go to college???? She must take rest as she looks weak'and she is pre**t naa!!!


Geet nervously looked at Maan and Maan thought it's the time to reveal the truth..


Maan:- Well, there is no such thing dadi.


Everyone looked at Maan with confused expression, while Geet shocked..






Precap:- Will Maan tell the truth of their marriage'????



plzzz like and comment if you like to


Note:-ok so some of my friends are saying to convert this ss into ff(and I really don't have problem, to change it...After all I will just make it as a mini ff...)


And some want the revelation of Geet's past...As i told before someone that if I reveal her past then this is gonna end soon...Umm may be in max of 3-4 part ...what should I do next????


Do you all want me to reveal her past in next part or in few coming parts?????

personally, I think wait for few more and bear with me plzzz


voice your thoughts and suggest ...I will go according to your wishes


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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome part
I want this ss turn in ff this is awes ome
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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome update...

really love caring maan...

continue it as ff

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome, brilliant part
loved it
maan is slowly slowly falling for geet
precap is interesting
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice n do cont. Dont revel d truth soon let dem realize dare luv.
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Posted: 13 years ago
fantastic update...i enjoyed it continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for the lovely update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww I just loved this part...
the golgappa scene was fab...

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Posted: 13 years ago
MAAN IS CARING FOR FOR HER NEEDS AND HER RESPECT
HE COULD SEE THE LONGING IN HER FACE TO HAVE GOL GAPPAS AND GOT HER TO EAT THEM
AND HE TOLD SASHA OFF
HE LIKED THE BUBBLY YOUNG CARE FREE GEET WHO WAS WITH PINKY

DO CONTINUE IT SOME MORE
IT CANT TOO SOON
LET MAAN COME CLOSER TO HER
Edited by punam2712 - 13 years ago

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