'Two Broken hearts falling in love' THREAD 6 - Page 59

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mrs.ZSK


lmfao🤣

i don't cheat its just harmless flirting 😉

what does it mean in ur dictionary ? 🤣🤣

i feel like its just part of the entertainment package of the show. . .just like ragini crushes on Guru. . .me so jealous ufff!

but whatever it is i find them very funny and cute.


🤣Na Man He's Cute😳 I Like His Eyes, He's Not Fit or anything Like GC But Ehh...Whatever😆

Yeah They do that A LOT
I Actually Started laughing watching Manish& Bhaarti's Convo🤣 He's Hilarious Man!
He Goes "How do I Praise her, Just look at her"🤣 and Bhaarti says "I Know I'm Beautiful and Sexy"

Did you see GC's expressions🤣

Oh Man I Wish They do that more often! Me A Comedy Lover😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Sadiie..


🤣Na Man He's Cute😳 I Like His Eyes, He's Not Fit or anything Like GC But Ehh...Whatever😆

Yeah They do that A LOT
I Actually Started laughing watching Manish& Bhaarti's Convo🤣 He's Hilarious Man!
He Goes "How do I Praise her, Just look at her"🤣 and Bhaarti says "I Know I'm Beautiful and Sexy"

Did you see GC's expressions🤣

Oh Man I Wish They do that more often! Me A Comedy Lover😆


remo not my type. . .but yeah he is cute i guess.

yes i am loving bhaarti. . .her personality and courage is what i love about her. .as well as her comic timing. .. omg u should see her do the naagin dance step with her tongue. .. damn she is good 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mrs.ZSK


@ abi

hey abi!

yeah i had a feeling he got a 30 when i saw his tweet. He was really happy. but then another friend tweeted me that he got a thirty . . .i like the suspense though. . . biting my fingers after the performance and waiting to see that last 10 from karan..i know i am crazy. . .but next week i will be in toronto. . .i will be barely on IF so it will definitely be a surprise.


where u on vacation these passed couple of days?


no dear my mother board crashed and hence i havd to get a new lappy so wans not online
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079



no dear my mother board crashed and hence i havd to get a new lappy so wans not online


oh awwh. hope you get another one soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mrs.ZSK


remo not my type. . .but yeah he is cute i guess.

yes i am loving bhaarti. . .her personality and courage is what i love about her. .as well as her comic timing. .. omg u should see her do the naagin dance step with her tongue. .. damn she is good 😆


Shut Up! Main Aisi Wais Ladki Nai Hoon!🤣
He's JUST Cute😳

GC's Effin Hot☺️

LMFAOOO🤣 She's A Comedian! Bound to be funny😆
Can't wait to watch her performance -- AND GC's☺️
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Sadiie..


Shut Up! Main Aisi Wais Ladki Nai Hoon!🤣
He's JUST Cute😳

GC's Effin Hot☺️

LMFAOOO🤣 She's A Comedian! Bound to be funny😆
Can't wait to watch her performance -- AND GC's☺️


are you implying i am a aisi wais ladki 😲

shut up ...there is nothing wrong with thinking a guy is hot or cute 😆

isn't this gonna be complicated when you meet your real life MSK. . .i will be hear with coffee and my undivided attention 🤣

i know me too😍
Edited by Mrs.ZSK - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part:65

Once a b**** always a b****

Geet wakes up as the sunlight hit her face. She sits up and runs a hand through her hair. Her heart felt lighter. She had thrown the anger and hate out of her life with Dev last night. In a couple of days would be her wedding and in every way she would only be Maan's and only Maan's. That brought a sweet smile on her lips.
Just then there was a knock against her door.
"thinking about me" he says with a grin.
"Maybe. . maybe not" she bites her lip seductively and gets up to go to the bathroom.
"Hey" Maan grabs her wrist.
"I already took my shower, but I don't mind taking another one" pulling her closer and snaking his hands around her waist.
"You know what" Geet moans millimeters away from his lips.
"Leave something for the suhaagrat", Geet lightly pecks his lips and giggles away to the bathroom.
"Will see how you escape from me in our honeymoon" Maan mutters to himself as he lightly threw himself on her bed.
******************
Geet steps out of the bathroom and was looking for Maan, but in its place found a rose on top of a letter.
She opens it up it read, " Gone for an important meeting and after that will come home. . . maybe. I am still sulking with you. Hmph!
Love you,
Your Maan
"Such a drama queen" geet giggles to herself.
*******************
Romeo tried calling them again and again. They weren't answering his calls
"Damn it" Romeo frustrated throws his cell phone.
Maybe they went back to Mumbai after so much that happened last night.
********************

Geet hears the doorbell ring. She goes to open the door when her mouth gets covered by a white cloth, and the last thing she heard was a faint whispering, " Now no one can separate us. Not even your Maan. You will be only mine, just like always!" before she dozed off breathing in the chloroform.
******************
Maan just came out of his meeting and was going to head home when Sasha came and gave another important file to look over, needed for the next day.
He agrees and goes inside his office. He checks his phone, hoping to see at least a text message from Geet, but there was nothing.
"She is playing hard to get now. Wait until I get home future Mrs.Khurana" with a smirk.

******************
Two hours later Maan gets finished and it was about five in the afternoon. He gets in the car and drives home awaiting to be in his love's arms. But when he reaches the door step of the outhouse he finds the door open.
He goes inside calling out, "Geet. Geet are you here? Geet"
But there was no response. He rushes to the Khurana Mansion.
Geet. . . .Geet! Geet Where are you!!! Maan screams inside the mansion, but there was no response.
Daadi comes toward him, " Maan what's wrong. Why are you yelling for Geet?"
Maan: Have you seen Geet today? I go inside the outhouse and the door was open.
Daadi: No I haven't seen her all day I thought she was with you.
He quickly grabs his phone out and tries dialing her number, but her phone was not in service.
He tries dialing again, still no luck.
He dials another number and Vicky picks up, " Vicky have you seen Geet? Is she with you?"
Vicky: No bhai I was with Meera all day. Why whats going on?
Maan: I don't know. I don't know where she is.
Vicky: Calm down bro. I am on my way. Nothing is going to happen to her.
He hangs up and tries calling her number again, again no luck.
"GEEET" he screams throwing the phone against the wall in anger and worry!
*******************
Geet slowly flutters her hazy and weak eyes open. Her eyes finally adjusted to where she was, all tied up against a chair.
"Get me out of here! What do you want from me. Let me go! Please . . ." she pleaded.
"Awhhh seeing you in this state my heart dances with joy" she heard a familiar voice say.
She looks up and in anger says, "TUM".
" Of course me . . .who else sweety".
Geet: Maan will kill you Sameera. You won't get away with this.
Sameera: oooh I am so scared. Let me tell you something. I had the control of his heart once and I will have it again. I just need to get you out of the picture.
Geet: And to think we both wanted to forgive you cowards. Where is your brother? Isn't he a part of this! I will never take him back. And maan will never take you back. The faster you get that inside you puny brain, the better it will be for you.
Powww!
" I get to do the talking around here not you. Understand my sweet best friend" Sameera says slapping Geet across her face.
" I guess we are even now" she gives an evil grin.
A tear spills from Geet's angry eyes.
Sameera: Awhhh what are the rain clouds for? Did it hurt that much?
Geet: The tear is for the disgust of once calling you my best friend.
Sameera: Best friends don't steal the each other's man! Like you did!
Geet: You broke his heart. You left him! You lost him. It was because of you me and Dev broke up and I met Maan. IT WAS ALL YOU. Don't you dare put such an accusation on me!
Sameera: I made a mistake. I was foolish. But you knew that I regretted leaving him. You knew Geet! Yet I heard your parents trying to arrange your marriage with him, and even after leaving everyone and everything you still found your way into his arms didn't you!
Geet: what are you talking about Sameera. I loved Dev at the time. My parents would never get me married without telling me.
Sameera: Maan's grandmother and your parents were already talking about you two and planning for you guys to meet. So I did what I had to do. I told Dev.
Geet: You didn't tell Dev. You lied to him!
Geet: You know what I don't even want to know. Nothing you can do now will make you take Maan away from me. He doesn't deserve you.
"hahaha" Sameera laughs.
"You think he deserves you. I know you Geet and we both know he deserves better".
Sameera: Just you wait and watch how I snatch my MK back away from you.
Sameera takes her cellphone out and dials a number putting it on speaker.
"Hello" his familiar voice echoed through the dark room.
"Hello sweetheart" Sameera says with a little too much emphasis.
"I should of known. You have Geet don't you?" he says possessively.
"oooh such a possessive brother in law. You know that can prove to be very dangerous for you Vicky darling" Sameera gloats.
" Vicky she is trying to get back Maan. Don't let him fall for it" Geet screams so Vicky could here.
Sameera: Shut up Geet, or I will finish you off right now. Vicky knows to what lengths I can go too. Don't test me!
Vicky: Sameera! Don't you dare. Just let her go! What do you want!
Sameera: Is maan near you?
Vicky: No I am alone. Driving home.
Sameera: Now here is the plan if you want Geet safe and sound.
Sameera: You will have to tell Maan that it was you. The man that Maan saw me the day we broke up was you. Tell him this if you want to see your precious so called sister alive.
Geet: Don't do it Vicky. It will kill him.
" uff Geet shut up" Sameera says menacingly pulling her hair, as Geet shreaked in pain.
Vicky: Don't you dare touch her. I will do it just you don't lay a hand on her you hear me.
Sameera: Now we are talking. But there is still more to the plan you have to do. You will have to tell him that soon Geet will fall for you too! And that you are almost successful. Tell him that you and geet almost kissed the night before.
Oh and you won't tell him all this face to face. You will have to pretend that you are talking to someone over the phone, but make sure Maan will be able to hear your whole conversation and confession. Uske baad maaza ayega.
Vicky: Your sick! How can I do that to my own brother? No wonder my brother left you.
Sameera: oyeee darling, you might want to stay in your limit. You have 24 hours and you better not get the police involved. You know what I am capable of so don't mess with me.
Geet: Don't do it Vicky. I rather die, but don't do that to him please. It will kill him.

Vicky: Just name your price. I will give you how ever much you want. Just leave Maan and Geet alone. Name your price Sameera.
Sameera rolls her eyes and whispers "Good luck sweetheart" then hangs up the phone.
Vicky starts to drive faster lost in what the hell to do. He turned left so swiftly he almost hit another car, but that didn't make him slow down. He was battle with himself, which was the right choice.
He presses on the breaks the car wheels shreaking as it came to a rough stop. His head hits the steering wheel hard. Their was tears of anger for Sameera as well as for just thinking about the pain that he would have to put his brother through. But he had to, if Maan knew why he would be doing this than he wouldn't of object in fact he would be proud of him. Except he could't know, Sameera was a monster that couldn't be trusted.
Vicky takes his step out of the car and goes towards the house.
Pre-cap:
Someone takes out a gun *Zee closing her eyes*

Hello galz. I will be going to Toronto on Monday for a vacation. It will be around a week or so. The next update of this FF will be on the next thread. So plz do finish it. There is a lot in store for you guys in the next update, gonna be a rough roller coaster ride, hold your breaths.

Plz hit the likebutton if you liked the update and do comment 😳
Edited by Mrs.ZSK - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
yyyiiipppeee...i m d first..
lets talk abt update...
sam is such a b@#$#...
a real one...
i hope maan doesnt fall into her trap n save his wud be
mrs khurana...
cont soon...
Edited by lively-piia - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
bloody bas***d sam
i want to kill her
bloody cheap
waiting for the next
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update..
i knew it tat this sameera can never change...
i hope vicky saves her

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