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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Maaneet4eve

Aweosme... so they remained friends... so what caused this to happen???



Thanks hun! 😃
Well...wait and see😉

Originally posted by: salmankhanrulz

that was nice
update soon



Thanks dear!😃

Originally posted by: PaintedSky

Wonderful plot. Loved it very much. Awesome.



Awww thanks hun! 😳

Originally posted by: t_areeb

the insane secretary changed into an elegant lady


the khurana women must meet her




LOL she is still insane 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi u back! thanks 4 da pm n superb update! Love dadi n anjali! Poor Maan! Maan impressed with Geet! Past n Present well incorporated! update soon



Thanks hun! 😃
LOL Anjali and Dadi will be even funnier 😉

Originally posted by: -memorable-

welcome back

loved the update



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Originally posted by: tushti-kiran



Maan is staring at his traditional and crazy secretary like a fool at her transformation...she always prove him wrong...

wonderful update...

thanx for pm...


Thanks Kiran! 😃
LOL he can never win against her!😆

Originally posted by: manali garg

great going...continue soon...



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Posted: 13 years ago


Thanks! 😃

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

Welcome back...missed you so!


I totally love Maan's character in this story...of all your other stories. I dont know why, maybe he touches a string in my heart...

Loved his silent apprehension about losing his friend and then boundless joy on getting her back...
And Pari, well loved how she was waiting for her friend as if that one year didnt exist...and yet over the years we see the same...as if the yrs of separation never existed between them..

Geet never fails to surprise. Her change of dress is just an example. Thats why Maan is ever fascinated with her - she always seems new and unfathomable - not under the famous "MSK" control LOL

The change from Pari to Geet is so evident here. The little girl who was so expressive in her actions - hugging Maan so naturally when he left and again came back now just pats Lady L's back not used to those show of feelings anymore...how difficult can life be !



Awww thanks! 😃
I am glad you like this Maan! And yes, Geet is very different from Pari...circumstances have changed her.

Originally posted by: marvee-khan

oh sanjana!!! i will never get over the eloquence of your writing style!!! you're amazing darling👏


-marvee



Thanks Marvee😳
Glad you enjoy!



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

simply amazing part. ...



Thanks dear! 😃

Originally posted by: spvd

part 10
lovely part...
Maan and Pari are so attached...
Maan is amazed seeing Geet...
he has entitled her pesky Sect...
cont soon dear...



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Originally posted by: sindu_gurti

Sanju your update makes me wonder what would have happened to that beautiful kid PARI to turn into such a gang leader..😲..what happened was that all i think about.!!!😲...a nice and a good update..are we gonna get a romantic /sizzling umber from Geet dressed in that gorgeous gown!!!!..😳..waiting for your next update..great work..keep writing Sanju...👏...



Thanks hun! 😃
Well...a lot of things happened to Pari...
And yes...a sizzling number shall come up😉

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Amiiish

Superb update, eagerly waiting for the next part=)



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Posted: 13 years ago


Thanks dear! 😃



Thanks hun! 😃

Originally posted by: Hot_Indo_Chilly

Such a nice chapter... geet doesn't want to remmeber the past with out Maan!



Thanks yaar! 😃

Originally posted by: KaSh-Maneet-Fan

hiii

awesome update
loved it
part 10
loved maan
da kids r sooo cute
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanksss

sorry 4 da L8 comment
been abroad



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Glad you are enjoying!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: crazydream

Beautiful update

Wat Geet is now is becoz of Lisette... In a way she is her mentor or teacher. N is now getting her work done by Lisette.

Must say Maan is impressed by her work. Why not afterall Geet had done arrangement for the party.

Dadimaa amused by his behaviour... Loved the part wer His family is talking abt Maan n his crazy secretary.
Geet directly came ro meet Maan...ohh love the way she approached him.

Looking forward to Maaneet scenes in party n Geet craziness.
Hope she meets dadima.

The past was sweet. Maan- Pari reunited in next summer.
The way Geet hugged him with all her energy was soo soo cute n sweet. Aww love these two inseperable crazy kids.

Thanks for pm.


Thanks hun! 😃
Don't worry...Geet will make a splash at the party😉


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Originally posted by: jyoti_l

seems like the secretary keeps surprising her boss...😆


continue soon...

thnx for PM..


LOL Secretary loves surprising her boss😉😆


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Sooo Geet-ish to look down and boldly comment like that!! Would love to know Maan's reaction to that and his family's reaction when they meet his 'traditional' secretary!


Thanks for the PM! Update when you can. 😊


LOL Geet is predictable in her own unpredictable way😉


Originally posted by: Shefali16

Wow man! ur story is so damn interestng!
m a new reader of urs...
u write xtremly wel!
plz pm me



Thanks Shefali😳
Welcome darling...hope you continue to enjoy😃

Originally posted by: flowers4u

omg loving this geet to bold but adorable and dark ...continue soon


Hahhaa...glad you like Geet😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: .Stuff.

🤣 Sir I'm a D cup...now where did you get that from? ;) 😆
Love this girl, she's awesome!

-Boogle



LOL...I have no idea what you mean Fari! hehee...*fails at looking innocent*...


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Posted: 13 years ago

Femme Fatale


Chapter Eleven


Enter my world

Rules for agents 11:

Integrate and infiltrate

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The summer flew by, with the two companions becoming even closer to each other. They shared confidences as well as indulging in their escapades.

They created chaos around town, a fond nuance for everyone.

Today was another adventure but a different sort. Rajiv had decided to take a photo of the two but it was easier said than done.

"Sit still!" he ordered the squirming pair. They were prodding and pinching each other to get a reaction. "No funny business, I want to take a proper picture of you two"

"Monkey face!" Pari giggled out to Maan, causing him to snort and laugh, falling onto the floor.

"Pari!" Rajiv admonished fondly, "No more jokes"

Immediately contrite, Pari reassured him, "Ji Baba"

But the other devil was not so easy, he smirked and whispered to her, "Smelly pants"

For that split second when Rajiv took the photo Pari's eyes were widened and laughter brewing from her lips while there was a smirk on Maan's face.

Later on when Rajiv would develop the pictures, it would be that one that would catch his eye for the photo captured the essence of the pair.

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Maan's jaw was nearly on the floor as he saw his secretary smirk at him, clearly understanding his surprise. The devil woman looked amused by his bemusement and even wiggled her eyebrows.

"What on earth are you wearing?" He gestured towards her.

"I believe they call this a dress" She gestured towards her dress, following his action.

"You are showing too much cleavage!" Maan spoke defensively, even though Geet was dressed quite modestly compared to some of the other women. Indeed she looked stunning, but that was part of the problem. He could already see some of the men looking and admiring her.

She isn't meant to be like this! She is my efficient secretary, not a woman! He knew that he was being illogical but for some reason he didn't want Geet to be like any other woman for she was unique.

"Sir it covers most things" In typical Geet style, she glanced down at her chest and spoke without hesitation, "Sir I am a D cup, so some cleavage is unavoidable."

Involuntarily Maan's eyes wondered towards the mentioned body part but he quickly raised his eyes again and snarled out, "Miss D-cup, can we move on from talking about your'.body parts? Or shall we now have an intimate discussion about my underwear?"

"What is wrong with that?" Geet looked genuinely puzzled but her twinkling eyes gave away her amusement. "And you were the one who started talking about cleavage."

Maan wanted to strangle her and clenched his hands to control the urge. "You are unbelievable"

Before he could continue or she could interrupt, their conversation was interrupted by someone else.

"Maan!" An imperious Savitri Devi stood next to the pair, "Who is this charming young lady? Introduce me to her at once!"

Maan snorted inelegantly at the word "charming" and muttered something about "nutcase women" before managing to say, "This is Geet Handa, my secretary and this is my Dadima."

"Namaste Ma'am" Geet said with a smile, causing Maan to roll his eyes at her attempt at being innocent. "I've heard so much about you. You are a true inspiration to all women, showing that we can achieve anything men can, if not more and better"

Dadima chuckled, "Well it is the truth darling. If a woman puts her mind to it, she is unstoppable"

"Well, my belief is that there is no need for men" Geet said with the tiniest of smirks, looking out the corner of her eye at her boss. "Why women can now get pregnant without men! That was their last real use"

Savitri Devi chocked on her laughter as she heard the comment while her grandson glared at Geet. He said in a sardonic voice, "Before you attempt to impregnate yourself without the help of a male, might I suggest you focus on today's task"

"Maan, don't be mean to the girl" There was a knowing glow in Savitri Devi's eyes, as she saw the beautiful young girl as well as the strong reaction she brokered from her otherwise cocky grandson. She must be special.

Maan on the other hand saw the diabolical look in Savitri Devi's eyes and knew that cunning woman was already plotting something. So he was decided to take action before his grandmother could do so, "Geet time for you to work. I need you to network and talk to the investors."

"Nonsense" Savitri Devi dismissed her grandson's weak attempt at disrupting her plans. "Geet just arrived at the party, let me introduce her to people."

"Dadima, this party is for work, not a game" Maan pinched the bridge of his nose in frustration.

"Maan, don't talk your grandmother like that!" Anjali Khurana's soft voice cut in, "And let Ms Handa enjoy herself"

Knowing that he was truly outnumbered by the women in his life, he only grunted out, "Fine, enjoy yourselves!"

However as the Khurana women started to lead Geet away, somehow the waiter had split a glass of juice on her dress.

"Oh dear" Anjali exclaimed in concern, "Why don't you run up to the bathroom and clean the dress. Luckily it is black."

"Don't worry, I am sure it'll be fine" Geet reassured and soon walked away to go to the bathroom.

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She slinked into his room, walking in the darkness.. The beautiful room was decorated in rich blue and black. The masculinity of the owner was reflected in the sturdy but elegant furniture. There was state of the art computer set up on his table and a 54 inch plasma on the wall.

However what caught her fancy, was his smell that lingered in the room and the pieces of personal belongings that claimed this room as his own. This was a forbidden intimacy to walk into his room in the dark, all alone while everyone was downstairs.

But she moved those thoughts away, because she was here for a job not to ruminate over the past or about them.

Lifting up her dress, she removed the little package that was taped to her thigh as well as making sure that her gun was still strapped properly.

Never leave unprotected, was one the first rules that she had learnt and one that she still held close. Even at a party like this, especially at this party, it was important to be prepared.

Slowly walking around the room, she let the moonlight illuminate her path. She traced her gloved hands over things but made sure to not displace anything.

As she was looking at his table, something caught her eyes. In a beautiful and elegant frame there was a picture of two children smiling with love and mischief.

Such innocent and carelessness, she thought with a pang. Those were the days. Her fingers brushed across the photo, even as the barest of smiles lit her face with the memories the photo brought in her. Wish I could go back to those days.

But she was the boss. Such nostalgia could last for seconds at most before duty took over. So casting a critical glance around the room, she found the perfect spot to put the miniscule camera. Reaching up, she placed the tiny dot right above the mirror, where no one would pay attention.

Job done.

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Where is she? A disgruntled Maan looked around for his secretary, as he needed her to listen to his talk with Mr Takahashi who though not associated with the PAR-1 project was still a valuable investor for Khurana Enterprise.

Just as he was about to call her, his irritating secretary swooped in next to him.

"Sir, I am back" She gave her usual bland grin, causing him to roll his eyes at her. "I thought I might as well unload my bladder after cleaning my dress, to save time. After all I am an efficient worker!"

With a sigh, for he was already used to her randomness, Maan just said "Come along, we need to talk to Mr Takahashi" He steered her towards the mentioned personage but along the way they were interrupted by someone else, Mr Shetty.

Mr Rohan Shetty was a well know playboy, having the typical rich boy attitude. While Maan was renowned for his "success" with women, he was also known for treating them as ladies. However unlike Maan, Rohan had a mean streak within him that disregarded anyone else opinion. Indeed he was known to have treated female employees very poorly.

"Maan, how are you?" Rohan gave his slimy grin, that he thought was attractive to females but only made him look like a pervert. Indeed the way he looked at Geet was lecherous and revolting. "And who do we have here?"

"This is my secretary, Geet Handa" Maan spoke calmly but he made sure to stand between the two.

"Well it is a pleasure" Rohan's eyes glanced downwards to assess Geet head to toe. While some other women would find it intimidating, Geet just raised an eyebrow and turned towards Maan.

"Sir, should we go?" She asked Maan, her words much more restrained than her usual manner.

"Why the rush?" Rohan interjected smoothly, "In fact, Ms Handa what about a dance?"

Maan felt disgusted by the imbecile and before he knew what he was saying, he said in a hard tone, "Actually Miss Handa is going to dance the next with me" Turning to Geet, he held out his hand, "If I may?"

For a second they stared at each other, before the slightest of twitches on Geet's lips showed her gratitude and amusement, "I would be delighted boss"

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AUTHOR's NOTE:


Again I am so sorry for the delay...
Thanks for all the support!
Hope you all enjoyed the update😉
Trust me, you'll enjoy the next one as well as the secretary and boss share a dance😉😳

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Edited by maan-ki-sanjana - 13 years ago

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