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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
its really intriguing OS. Waiting for the next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
awesome parts dear...pm me when u update dear..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 4

Sudden frustation,confusion,disheartening caught maan..he felt so miserable..many words running inside in hz mind..Geet ki bato k mtlb kya hai..why she didnt say ki woh in 4 saalon me shadi kyu nehi ki..kyu..aur phr kch nehi to bass ye puchlete ki woh ladki kaun hai..bass 1 bar janna chate geet..kyuki mujhe nehi pata sab kch achanise tmhe kaise bldu..kaise in dil ko bato ko jawan deke tmhe ye kahu..tmhi mera pyar ho..sirf tum..hz heart cried out..he felt lyk many niddles piercing in hz heart..his love z now wid hm..bt he cant able to say anythng..he sighd wid heavy heart..
here geet still standing in same position..her head only saying her that maan loves sm1 else..may b she ll nvr get any place in hz hert..may be never..she bit hr lowes lip to get rid of running turmoil inside her..suddenly their door knockd..pyush bgn to call them..Dadda mumma,dalwaja kolo..maaneet lukd at the door..maan went imidiatly opend the door..geet too cm bhind hm..pyush entrd..
maan askd..kya hua beta..pyush went to geet.. mumma solly main apko gud nyt kissy nehi dia..geet touchd agn wid her cuteness..she bent down..Oleee mela shona bacha..koi bat nehi..abhi dedijie..

Pyush give a toothy Smile..he kissd hr cheeck cutely..geet strokd his hair..kissd hz cheeck..her sadness vanishd at once wid her son^s sweetness..pyush huggd hr..maan lukd at thm wid love..Annie too come there..smiled,than made a face..pyushji ab chale sone..ap ab v jagrahe..pyush gigld at her fake gussa..than trnd to her..placing bth hand on waist..To chal lahe na Anni..maaneet laughd at hz cute attitude..anni cribbd..oyee,ab anni..naughti boy..he yawnd.. abhi mujhe ninni alahe..aul ap del kl lahe..naughti gal..
Anni shakd head..Papaji chale ab..Pyush nodded..bading maaneet agn gud nyt..went wid her..maan clsd the door..Mujhe v nind arahe geet.. she nodded silently..
CONT BELOW..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
CONTINUED..

..Maan went towards bed..geet too wnt sme rest..mentally..here maan thought may b geet ll not feel cmfrt wid hm on same bed..he took the pilow..geet knotted brow..what is he doing..Ap kaha jarahe..maan lukd at her..Woh main couch me so jata hu..tm yaha so jawo..
Geet get the last shock..his talk agn stabbd her heart..Nw he want to keep distance between thm..she felt a lump in her throut..bit lip agn to muffled the cry..she lukd dwn..Ap mere vagese taqleef mat lijiye..main couch pe so jaungi..her voice crackd..maan didnt miss that..he tried to undrstood wht happen to her..damn..has he hurt her..he deicided to leave the couch matter imidiatly..Nehi..tm kyu waha..agr tmhe prob na hai to..woh dono yahi..
Geet sighd..she dnt knw why he suddenly change whl talk..bt no she ll do as he want..keep distence..Ap chinta na kijiye..main so jaungi..
Maan felt so horrible..Nehi geet tm v yaha so jawo..geet lukd at hm..Par....maan intrupted..Plzz geet..mujhe sachme bht nind arahe..so jawo.. saying thz he lied dwn..cz he dnt knw wht to say mre..

Geet stood thr numb..than she silently lied dwn on the othr side of bed..facing her bck to maan..he z clsing hz eyes..felt geet has lied dwn..he calld..Geet..geet slightly tilted..Woh lyt off krdo..she put off the light..
Still rum z coverd wid soft moonlyt..geet z cring silently..evrytym she rememberd maan lovd sm1 else,she felt pain in her heart..her voice chockd fr cring..sobbing sound cm out..
Maan heard her sobbing sound..wndrd wht happend..he slided to her..hesitatly put hand on her shoulder..Geet kya hua..Geet remvd trs..Kch nehi..Her cring voice made hs heartacheing..he trnd her by hlding hr shoulder..bt she lukd at othr side..he hlding her cheeck made her luk at hm..he rubbd the tears..she lukd at hm,sobbing..he lukd in hr eyes..Trid to read them..For the 1st tym..ths eyes saying hm smthng..which he need to read..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
yieepeee i m the first one to comment


loved the update

there is communication gap between them that y they are doubting each other

please soon they confess their feeling

thanks for pm

bye
take care😊
Edited by angelic_cute - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
awesome OS
poor geet she thinks that maan loves someone else
n maan was forced to marry sam
hope they confess their love soon
n pyuish is veryyy cute yaar
plz pm me when u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
amaznggg dear
piyush is shoo cute
plz clear this mu btween maaneet...😊
lvd it
THX 4 PM.
cont soonnn



Edited by parikashyap - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
aye haaye romance chalu...😳

loving it..

nxt update jaldi de dena..ok...😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
awesome part
ohhh maan didnt tell that it is geet only
n pyush ha ha loved his attitude
n geet crying awww feeling so bad
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50

thanks for the pm

pyush is so cute
hope maaneet soon sort out this misunderstanding
feeling bad for both
continue soon

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