CAN WE FIX IT ??? ~2 EPILOGUE PG 72 - Page 19

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Posted: 13 years ago
part 20
nice part...
poor Geet...
but who is the father?
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful update
Fabulous

Hmm... So the truth is out of Geet's past.
Never thought Geet's past wud be like this.
She had gone thru a lot.
But i loved it the way you wrote it. Its totaly different concept.

Excited for new arrival.

Continue soon.
Thanks for pm.
Will be waiting.

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Posted: 13 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n intense n emotional update! So Geet was never married n Karan is nt Sid's dad! Wat a twist! Poor Geet ! Maan upset n angry tht someone cld hurt Geet! Well written
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Posted: 13 years ago
what happened to her there..??

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh so geet suffers from partial amnesia
ok now who is the guy???????????
n awesome twist
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Posted: 13 years ago
me still tryng to comprehend wt arman said...
nyc update...
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CHAPTER 21

Maan was sitting in the room thinking …………………. How misunderstandings could spoil many things ………………. If maan had talked with geet before during college days now everything would have been so smooth ………………….. it's not that geet's past affected him nor his love towards sid changed but every time he thinks what all trouble his geet would have undergone those few mins his heart ached …………………….


Maan's thoughts were broken when he felt small hands hug him from back ………………… a small smile crept on maan's face ………………. He bend a little so that sid could be pulled front of him ……………………. Sid now stood on maan's lap facing him ………….
Sid showed maan his arm where he just got a injection


" is it paining ? " maan asked in concern
" ummm………….. now its ohk " sid said
" that's my boy………….. dady will take u out in the evening to celebrate ur brave act " maan said patting sid's cheeks

Sid hugged maan

" where is mom ? " maan asked caressing sid's head
" I don't know I came running to see you " sid said
" really! " maan asked lifting sid in his arms while standing
" lets play …………. Uncle has got many games " sid said
" sure champ " maan said


Sid was playing while maan was guiding him to play …………………. It was when geet came …………….. she saw them playing and smiled ………………….. she kissed sid's forehead and then maan's but when she was about to move maan held her by wrist and made her sit near him …………………… Geet looked at him in qus……………….

Maan hugged her sideways and placed his head on her chest ……………..


" what happened is everything ok ? " geet asked seeing him behave diff
" yeah ……… I just wanted to be near u " maan said………………………….. geet started to caress hi hair soon he shifted to her lap and settled comfortably ………………………….


" maan I was thinking if ur family will like me " said geet
" u know they all love u so much " said maan
"I know but as a daughter in law"
" geetu u are so sweet no one can dislike you ….." he said placing a small kiss on her hand that was on his chest


" geetu I wanted to tell u something " maan said
" what ? "
" I wanted our marriage to happen soon " maan said
" why suddenly ? " asked geet
" I can't bare the distance anymore ………………… I want u to be mine in all ways " maan said looking into her eyes
" ur wish ……… I can talk with amy " said geet
" no I ll talk with him …………………. We all will go to delhi this Sunday " maan said
" are u both still not fine with eachother ? " geet asked
" we are perfectly alright ………………….. btw I want to talk with brij as well " maan said
" amy will do that actually I spoke with bro last night he was happy knowing about us ………………… he ll come to india next week " geet said


Ridz called geet and so she has to go ……………….. but before she could walk away maan pulled her to the corner at a safe distance from sid…………………….


" maan what are u doing ? ……………… sid might see us " geet said looking at sid who was still engrossed in the game
" he can't see us from there …………………… don't worry even I don't want my son to witness his parents romancing …………………" maan said
" so ? " geet asked raising her eyebrows with a naughty smile
" I never got to taste any sweet since we came to Mumbai " said maan with a grin
" I can't help it " geet said turning her face to the other side but still she can't stop smiling or rather blushing ………………….
" u r the only one who can help it " maan said bringing his face close to her ………………………….


Geet was about to tell something but he stopped her placing his lips on hers …………………….They broke their kiss after few mins when they heard ridz shouting again ……………………….


" I have to go " geet said
" but I m not done " maan said amking a baby face
" awww……….. my baby is sad " geet said pulling his cheeks
" sad beyond words " maan said
" you will get whatever u want later but now leave me before ridz barge into our room and spot us like this ……………….. she will kill me teasing then …………" geet said
" promise? " maan asked
" 100% " geet said kissing his cheeks before she left ……………


Maan then went back to Sid……………..

" are u done champ " maan asked lifting sid placing him in his lap…………..

Sid proudly showed maan the puzzle he solved……………………..

" ohhh my champ is great……………..i ll remember to get u a extra ice cream for this " maan said ……………………….. and sid laughed……


Before dinner maan went to talk to armaan ………………….. he knocked at his study …………………..

" come in maan " armaan said
" how do u know its me " maan asked walking in
" neither ridz nor candy knock the door they just march in " armaan said with a chuckle

" so u want to tell or ask me anything " armaan asked after silence
" armaan I wanted to tell u that I wanted the marriage to take place soon " maan said

Armaan looked at him for quiet a second

" so …………….. her past doesn't bother u ? " armaan asked unsure
" do u really expect me to react when don't even care about it " maan said
" ridz was right u r really a good guy " armaan said
" u thought I wasn't ? " maan asked with a smile
" not really but ……………. U know I …………." Armaan was trying to get apt word
" I know we didn't have a good start of events but I believe still we can be frds " maan said
" we ought to be " armaan said extending his hand…………………… maan shake his hand


They both turned to the door when they heard a whistle sound …………………it was geet

" thank god u both are frds now …………….. or else I would have had a hard time " said geet
" when did u come? " armaan asked
" when u both were signing the frdship pact " geet said giggling

Armaan walked after few mins when he heard niki crying ……………….. geet hugged maan sideways once armaan went

" I m glad u r frd with him " geet said
" he is a nice guy " maan said

" thank u geet " maan said
" thank u ? ………. But why ? " geet asked
" when u came into my life u brought along not only a lot of happiness but also my son and frds like ridz and armaan " maan said
" awww………… don't get senti dear baby " geet said pulling his cheeks
" don't call me that geetu it sounds weird and plzzz stop pulling my cheeks ………………… u make me feel as if I m not MSK but some 3rd grade boy " said maan making a face
"let me imagine " geet said tapping her cheek as if thinking
" u would look great in baby boy uniform " said geet
" oh really !!" said maan
" yeah " geetsaid
" I ll show u how childish I can get " maan said while chasing geet throughout the study ……………

Armaan who was seeing this from far felt relieved seeing them happy…………

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I HAVE TYPED NEXT PART ... WILL UPDATE ONCE I M SATISFIED WITH LIKES AND COMMENTS ...NEXT PART IS ANOTHER REVELATION ... AND NEW ENTRY ...



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Posted: 13 years ago


awww😳


update yaar

do conti soon 😳





Edited by aziza_ahmed - 13 years ago
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great part dear
loved it
plz continue soon

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