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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#631

Originally posted by: ruchs
Twisty Deewangi Part 34 awaits you...😉

Will read it after two hours need to leave after 10 minutes promise will read it before I go to bed

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#632

Originally posted by: kooliio
Awesome FF!
Loved all the parts!
Was feeling really bad for geet!
But I'm glad they are together now!
Aww maaneet is so cute..love him!
And I love his friends LOL
Can't wait to see what else the kids are up to...
And Emma is such bitch...hope the kids will give her hell of a time!
Maan should do something about her mother too!
Can't wait for the next update!
Please continue soon!

aww thank you so much😳

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Ruchi

@ruchs

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Posted: 13 years ago

#633

Originally posted by: mel420

Will read it after two hours need to leave after 10 minutes promise will read it before I go to bed

Okies… Me will see wait for it… will check it tomorrow then...😳

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#634

Hey guys Me just update cause I finally got a comment from Ruchs so if I update late you now who's fault it is😛. This update is dedicated to my devilish muse Ananya 😆

Part 37
Emma went to her room and started scheming. She called up Evelien and told her What happened.

E:What has Maan lost it. I s he mad to act like this towards you. How can you fall for such man.
Emma:Mom it is not his fault is't all the doing of that witch
E:Do you mean geet
Emma:Who else mom. There is no tradition in maan's family I am telling his entire family including that Pammie is teamed up against us.
E:What the hell are you talking about we closed the geet chapter 12 years ago then why are you taking that witch's name.
Emma:Mom she is her in the house. She is the so called going to mark me and maan for the tradition. That dumb girl was wearing a veil but I reconized her.
E:Hmmm so you think maan took her with him and she told him the truth and he believed her how is that possible aur plan was water proof.
Emma; Ehhh I think so but we have to do something I can't lose Maan I did so much do to gain Maan I even sold my own soul to Ronald Errr
E:Ronald honey don't worry geet will get a shock of her life. I've got a briliant plan you just concentre in impressing that Maan of yours
Emma:But mom what's your plan
E:Dear I will call you in a bit and will tell you more then. Alright sweety.
Emma; Sure mom please do something fats before that cheep girl snatches my husband from me
E:Don't worry dear don't stress to much you will get wimples and we don't want that do we
Emma; Of course not talk to you latter mom

After having dinner Ananya was going to the bathroom with her puppy😉 to get a toothbrush when she heard the entire convo.She ran towards Maneet,Francessa,Sally, Maan and geet.

A:Guys. Emma knows everything and she planning something with Ronaldo
Maan:Ananya calm down what do you mean she knows everything
A:Ehh I can't tell everything now she will know that we know okay I am going to text you all something read it carefully and read it in you repective room or else she will get suspecious.
Maan:Alright madame.
G:I have to say your scary but intelligengt
A:Thank you aunty
M:Hey she learned everything from me okay I am agent M

Ananya gave him a devilish look. Maneet got scared😆

M:I mean I learned everything from you
Maan; Why are you so scared of her son come on your a KHURANA
M:Dad seriously your asking that after her pirahanas act.
Maan; You have a point my son

Everyone left to his room. Ananya tected everything that she heard. Maneet texted evryone back.

M:I think mom and Emma should have a face off
Maan:No no me and your mom will handle it from here. Thx for the info ananya

Maneet and his friends where in one room.

M:Your right dad will handle everything okay guys listen this is the plan.

Everyone nodded.

S:Oh maneet your so intelligent

Maneet put his collar up.

M:Well thank you

sally giggled

F:OH please guys don't start let's focus on are plan. Maneet did ajenn call you back
M:Nope not yet
A:Ehh you now Emma is such a Kutti kamini kahinki!!Sheesh such a cheap girl!! Ehh and her mom is also sooo cheap.How did they even got birth as human beings on earth!! They should have been pigs.
she doesnt even deserve the devil to marry her!! Sabrina should boil her in her potion!! he he!!

Maneet, sally and Francessa couldn't stop laughing hearing her curses. But what Ananya did next didn't only shock them but also cracked them up.She grabbed the piranha that had bitten Emma and started brushing his theets.

M:Anu what are you doing
A:HEY DON'T CALL ME THAT OR ELSE
M:Okay sorry ananya what are you doing.
A:Good boy.I so wanted to keep them under Emma's butt lol!Even Piranhas dont deserve such a rotten crappy food! And my poor Puppy bit in her dirty finger. She I am cleaning her mouth DUH.

They where rolling on the bed from laughter. While Ananya just gave him a look saying weirdo's and she seriously continued cleaning her puppy's teeth.Geet heard them laughter and came to look what was happing when she saw Ananya brushing her pirahana's teeth She looked all pale like she saw a ghost.All she could mummer was scary girl.Ananya heard her and looked up.

A:Oh thank you Aunty your so sweet, you keep praising me my ego will get huge.Your so sweet may you get all happiness of the world.

Geet looked shocked at her reaction.

G:Are you being sarcastic

Geet asked confused. Maneet giggled.

M:No mom this is a compliment for Ananya
G:I see need to go guys.

Emma went ready to go to bed. She took a shower came out and searched her maku- up. She sleeps with make-up put on. He entire skin is damiged that you could use her in a horror movie 😆 She searched her make- up but couldn't find it. She got all hyper and angry. She knew for a fact that the childeren where behind this. She walked towards the kids room. When she enterd the kids started screaming. BHOOT BHOOT Maan UNCLE bechao. Emma didn't want maan do see her like this so without saying something se ran to her room. Maan walked towards the kids roiom. He got scared hearing them scream like that. But when he came inside his fear dissepeared when he saw them laugh their heads off like they had lost it completly. And the scary part was that even Ananya's puppies where laughing.

Maan:Guys what happenend
M: Oh nothing dad we where just playing
Maan; Alright guys keep it down

All four nodded in union looking all innocent. maan knew there was something fishy and how can't it not be with Ananya around. Geet was right he thought she is indeed a scary girl. But perfect to help me punish Emma. But he let it be. he knew the would tell him latter.So he left. Francessa had a weird radar. That started peeping.

F:Okay guys this is going to be fun.

Emma entered her room. No Maan couldn't see her like that let him be with that witch she thought, better then seeing me like this. And if he is here he will torture me anyway whit his stupid demands. She texted Evelien to send her in the morning new make- up.She closed the light and she lay down on the bed. She started hearing very loud Avril music. Emma screamed out loud. Maan walked over to see what the hell had happenend. When he came inside and saw emma sitting all shocked up on her bed.

M:Awww what the hell you look like a monster.
E:Aww Maan please don't look at me
M:Ehh I don't want to either

And maan closed his eyes. Emma felt tears making there way out of her eyes. She felt ugly and not wanted.

M:Why the hell where you screaming
E:I heard loud music really loud
M:Are you mad there is no sound

What Emma didn't now is that francessa put something in her bed which made sure that the music noise wouldn't get out. And everytime Emma would lay on the bed the music would start if she would sit the music would end. maan left shaking his head. Emma layed down again after three times and being scolded by maan she finally got it that something was wrong with the bed and she could not do anything about it. So she took her pillow and lay on the floor. But again the music went on. Then she tried sleeping on the bed without the pillow but again Music. So at the end she slept on the naked floor. The kids laughed like crazy they watched everything on the radar.

M&S&A:Too good Music_Girl
F:Thank you

Francessa made a bow. They high fived each other and went off to bed.Maan walked into geet's room and saw her crying. He got all worried up.He sat next to her and side hugged her.

M:Misty what happened. baby why are you crying.

Geet hugged Maan and and said between her sobs.

G:Maan pari is in coma
M:bas baby we will go and meet her immediately and I will heir the best doctors bas don't cry you know na I can see tears in her eyes
G:And he just find out he had a baby sister
M:Who Baby just tell me the name of the hospital and will go directly
G:Stop babying me I am not a bady and we can't go and meet her
M:Acha I will call you Misty better
G:Hmm
M:now tell me why can't we go and meet her
G:Maan how can we meet her she doens't exsist
M:Matlab

Geet showed him the book twisty deewanigi. maan smacked his head.

G:Maan don't hit yourseld Pari will be okay I am sure
M:Of course you where crying over that book
G:Hmm
M:geet that book has driven you deewana
G:Wo to hai that's the magic of the book maan
M:Acha enough deewanigi for today

Maan grabbed to book an tried the put it away when geet tried to grab it back.

G:maan please give me the book back maan just confessed that he loves geet I want to see her reaction Maan pretty please gave it back
M:Hmm even I want to see her reaction
G:Sachi

Geet said all happy

M:Muchi. I love you geet. Hai love when you blush.

he carresed her cheek. geet hit his hand.

G:Choro let me read maan

She made such a sweet face that he couldn't deny. He gave her the book. Geet grabbed the book to read all happy. Maan layed down cursing Ruchs. He was strangling her in his mind. Geet was so happy and she kissed maan on his cheeck. he took the curses back and apoligesed in his mind to ruchs and thanked her hey he got a kiss from his wife. He slept in Geet's lap while geet readed in peace

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Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago

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Ruchi

@ruchs

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#635

Yayyy ME FIRST….😆

Haww you want people to kill me if they don't get an update😲… Me went to hollalooloo… Me not here….😉

OMG Emma knows????😲

Ewww she sold her soul to Ronald… Yuck… Shameless girl…

Her mom also knows and Evelien is not even ashamed about it…. GROSS...

Maneet scared of Ananya even though he is a Khurana….😆

OH god… Cleaning puppies teeth since they bit that yucky Emma…🤣

Ananya finds being SCARY a compliment…😆

Make-up fiasco was awesome… She even applied it during sleeping!!!🤣

Loved Francessa's song torture idea… After all she is the Music_girl…😉

Poor Geet cried… And Maan got so concerned…😳

Awww he even wanted to get the best doctors and visit Pari in hospital….😆

Poor him… Pari doesn't even exist in reality…😆

Hawww Maan was cursing me…😲

He even strangled me in his mind….😭

Mel… Just wait and watch… Your life is in acute danger…..😡

Phew… Finally he thanked me for the kiss he got and even took back all the curses…😳

Hmmm Mel you are spared this time….😉

Amazing update dear… Me was literally rolling over the bed laughing….😳

P.S.- Since me commented, where is the next update???😉

Edited by ruchs - 13 years ago

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Tyro

@Tyro

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#636

F n A r too much...😆

poor emma...this is only the start...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

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Saru

@smallville

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#637

Awesome !!!
Loved it !!!
Update soon

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#638

Originally posted by: ruchs
Yayyy ME FIRST'.😆 🥳

Haww you want people to kill me if they don't get an update😲' Me went to hollalooloo' Me not here'.😉 😆 chalo you commented now I have to update as soon as possible you don't need to escape nobody would harm you hey we still want a update from twisty deewanigi😆

OMG Emma knows????😲

Ewww she sold her soul to Ronald' Yuck' Shameless girl'

Her mom also knows and Evelien is not even ashamed about it'. GROSS...

Maneet scared of Ananya even though he is a Khurana'.😆

OH god' Cleaning puppies teeth since they bit that yucky Emma'🤣

Ananya finds being SCARY a compliment'😆

Make-up fiasco was awesome' She even applied it during sleeping!!!🤣

Loved Francessa's song torture idea' After all she is the Music_girl'😉

Poor Geet cried' And Maan got so concerned'😳

Awww he even wanted to get the best doctors and visit Pari in hospital'.😆

Poor him' Pari doesn't even exist in reality'😆

Hawww Maan was cursing me'😲

He even strangled me in his mind'.😭

Mel' Just wait and watch' Your life is in acute danger'..😡 😆 Hey what did I do I love you you now that na it was maan not me me innocent

Phew' Finally he thanked me for the kiss he got and even took back all the curses'😳

Hmmm Mel you are spared this time'.😉 Hey how can you punish me for Maan's deeds not far still happy that I am off the hook

Amazing update dear' Me was literally rolling over the bed laughing'.😳 😃😆

P.S.- Since me commented, where is the next update???😉 Hmm tomorrow just because you update cause I wrote such along update that I was thinking to dissepear for a couple of days