Deceived 2 Link to thread 3 p.1 - Page 50

Originally posted by: music_girl

u edited it nevermind

yes Ms. fast I did btw where is mine b-day present

Originally posted by: mel420

yes Ms. fast I did btw where is mine b-day present

yeah post it in the thread pls here it is:

Originally posted by: music_girl

yeah post it in the thread pls here it is:

I wrote this part especially for Mel as it's her birthday today'

Note; Changed title to 'Unfaithful' from 'Girl Next Door'

Part 2

Maan woke up, bruised on the arm, pants half ripped and a massive head ache. He felt that his head was going to exploded in a minute. It took him some hour to regain his full conscious. It was painful. He was feeling all sore, and smelt salty stale sea water. He felt a soft skin under his, bruised and half covered with white sand. Eyes closed she seemed unconscious. It was her partner on the plane. She looked exhausted or maybe...dead!

He tried to wake her up'

"Hmmm" she tittered and grabbed his arm sleeping on it. Maan tried not to wake her up but his arm started to ache. "Hey missy, wake up" he said. "Hmm" she replied and fell back to sleep.

"Missy" Maan said shaking her but she seemed to be in great sleep. Finally he sprinkled some sea water which smelt horrible.

"Aiiie" she shrieked waking up and looked around bewildered. "Has she lost her memory?" he thought. "Where am I?" she asked ruffling her hair. "Was in plane for California but got crashed" Maan replied. "Oh yeah" she replied softly clutching her head. "Who are you?" she asked trying to open her eyes. "Your ear-detector" he smirked. She giggled and said "so it's you, Mr. Ear Detector, you're not so bad after all" she said. "Humph" he said and pushed her backward and started to walk away.

"Aiiieee" she squeaked again. "Don't be so rude, you hurt me" she said examining her leg. Her pants were half ripped and there was a hole in her shirt. She frowned trying to cover that part. A coat felt heavily on her, she could not bear the weight as she was already weak and fell backwards on the back. "Ow" she grumbled and took the coat and looked at the rude stranger. His back was facing her and he was staring at the debris of the plane. He frowned while Geet wore his coat around her and coughed "thank you".

Geet walked slowly towards him and muttered "anyone else alive". Maan jumped in shock and complained "you did not need to scare me, rabbit". "Oh-eh, I'm not named Rabbit" Geet snapped. "And I'm not named Mr. Ear-Detectors" Maan snapped back. "So what's your name?" Geet asked. "What does have to do with you?" Maan replied sarcastically. "See, that's why I named you Mr. Ear-Detectors" Geet replied but added "don't call me Rabbit, I'm Geet" she introduced. Maan looked perplexed with this sudden introduction and cracked "I like Rabbit and it even suits you, you're nose is just like one" he smirked. "What! My nose is not like a rabbit's" Geet cried.

Maan didn't seem to have heard it. There were some dead bodies floating on the sea. Geet got scared and grabbed Maan's arm. Maan was about to complain when he saw her frightened and white face.

"Scary" Geet mumbled. "Are we the only one alive or we went directly to heaven" she thought aloud. "No we are not" Maan said and pointed towards some ten people walking to them "they're with us".

"You are the only two alive along with us" a man said and explained "the plane consisted only of sixty people and the other ten died by drowning, and thirty eight are extremely injured with broken bones"

Geet looked even scared and clung onto Maan. "I'm Steve, Steve Roberts, pilot" he said extending his hand for introduction. "Maan, Maan Singh Khurana" Maan replied shaking his hand. "Wow" there was a few gasps in the crowd and Geet immediately let go his arm.

"You'you're the MSK?" Geet asked totally baffled "Ear-Detectors?"

"Yep, Missy Rabbit" Maan smirked seeing her red-faced.

"You think we can reach back to India?" a woman asked pale and injured on the arm. "Yes" Pilot Roberts retorted "because I think this island is inhabited"

Geet ignored the others and looked at Maan, "I'm hungry" she told him. "What can I do?" Maan snapped back, Geet looked hurt and turned to the Pilot. "Sorry, madam, we can't eat anything, these fruits might be poisonous'"

Suddenly Geet shouted "can we know why the plane got crashed ' some people died and others have broken bones, if they are not rescued the might even die soon!" Maan looked shocked. The Pilot stood calmed and said "Madam, it was a hurricane in the sea with a sudden seaquake" he mumbled.

Two pair of eyes stared at the crowd. Geet looked towards the new people. They surely looked like inhabitants of this lonely island.

"Hi" Geet said approaching them. The crowd looked at her stunned, speechless and mouth-opened. Maan went white "this mad girl will reach into trouble making us fall in too" he thought. "Who are they'?" he continued to wonder and dropped'

"Cannibal?"

Precap: Sweet Home'Unknown man wants Geet! [Run'Run']

I am speechless it's briliant can't wait for what happens next. Miss rabbit😆 her nose is like a rabbit😆aww maan cared for her he gave her his jacket because her clothes were torn he is rudely nice😆 thank you thank you sooo much but why didn't you post the update on your thread I don't mind sharing my present😆 I am not that greedy well I like to believe that love ya frankie you made my b-day special

actually am watching maaneet videos...so everything fades...

Loved it.
N a very HAPPY BIRTHDAY

Originally posted by: music_girl

actually am watching maaneet videos...so everything fades...

😆acha enjoy watching Maneet

Happy Birthday dear...

part 33
lovely part...
cont soon dear...

Originally posted by: spvd

Happy Birthday dear...

part 33
lovely part...
cont soon dear...

thank you and will be update today

Hey guys 9n9i9s9h9u9 (don't now your real name) told me That I needed to give a b-day party. So here's my party. The dress code is comments. Oh 9n9i9s9h9u9 has arranged the cake and food. So here are the drinks and cake (thank9n9i9s9h9u9) ;

So everyone grab a cup cake and drink and let's party. Oh and here is the food I arranged and no I didn't let Emma cook 9n9i9s9h9u9 wouldn't let me:

Part 34
Evelien had orderd all Maan's favorite dishes. She had asked Mrs. Khurana about maan 's likes and dislikes and Mrs. Khurana couldn't escape this time.

After doing some arrangement Maan walked into Geet's cabin. Geet didn't notice she was to engrossed in her work. Maan came and sat next to her. Geet still didn't notice. Maan kissed geet on her cheek. Geet got a sweet shock. She looked next to her to see maan reading a magazine.

G:Maan what was that
M:What was what
G:Don't act all inocent like you don't now what I am talking about
M:I don't geet
G:Forget it btw what are you doing here
M:Reading this magazine it'really intersiting.
G:Really
M:Hmm
G:MAAN
M:Shh geet don t disturb
G:Oh so I am disturbing you whatever

Geet got irritaited and she started working again. Maan kissed her again on the cheek.

G:MAAN
M:geet please let me read

Geet grabbed the magazine out of his hand and threw it in the dustbin.

M:geet what have you done
G:MAAN stop your natak I am warning you

Maan pulled geet close

M:Or else what Mrs. Khurana

Geet hit maan on his chest playfully.

G:Maan you such a cheat (credit for calling Maan a cheat goes to Ananya)

Maan let Geet go

M:me a cheat I never cheated you Mrs.Khurana
G:Oh you trick me into marrige. you give me that on my cheek

Maan giggeld

M:You call it a kiss geet
G:whatever then you say Geet I am reading don't disturb me.

Geet mimicked maan. Maan again pulled geet to him.

M:kya karoo Mrs. Khurana I have gone crazy in your love.You are that amazing that I do stupid things to get you
G:I am already yours maan

Geet hugged Maan

M:I can't live without you Mrs. Khurana
G:neither can I Mr. Khurana

Maneet:Hey guys forgotten me already.

Maan and Geet broke apart. maneet walked in with a bunch of friends. Geet and Maan felt embarrassed. Geet over to maneet and hugged him.

G:Of course we didn't forget our bundle of joy. I missed you maneet.
M:yes sun how can we forget you. Your the world to us.

Maan caresed Maneet's hair.

M:Don't get all senti I was just joking

Maneet and his friends started to laugh.Maan gave Maneet a daring look and decided to tease him but before he pull maneet's leg. He heard a shriek from Geet.And saw he pulling something out of sally's hand.

G: Oh twisty deewanigi hai how sweet did you get this book for me.

Sally looked at Geet with bigg shocking eyes. She didn't had it in her to say no, because she wanted to impress het further mother in law😆. Maan and maneet noticed. While Maneet smacked his head (not in real but in his brain). Maan just smiled seeing her halat.

S:Eh yes aunty
G:Hai you so sweet bas I have decided ap to yehi meri ghar ki bahu bhani ki.

Maan and maneet's friends laughed out loud. While sally blused. maneet was in a shock status but even then he maneged to give Maan a angry look but maan ignored it and decided to put tease Maan a bit more.

M:Your absolutly right geet hamari Maneet ki patni yehi bane gi.

maneet found it embarrising and decided to change the topic quik.

Maneet:Mom dad let my introduce you guys to my friends.

Geet looked in horror to Maneet's friends they where all girl's.

G:Maneet hai beta yeh kya hai OMG why do you have all girl friends. Hey babaij mutjij yeh kaise din digaikha. If he is now like this what will happen latter. maan aap hi kuch kare
M:What is this Maneet
Maneet:Mom dad pleas. I've got a lot of male friends there my only female friends. The reason there with me is because there perfect to handle this Emma.It's already a torture being friends with them just image when your there enemy😆.

hey Francessa yelled and Ananya gaving him a oh you just wait look. While Sally was just smiling.

M:Oh was just joking You guys are wonderfull please don't do something scary Ananya.

Maneet found Ananya a bit scary he knew what she was capable of.

A:Hmmm fine your forgivving waise bhi I need to put mine energy in Emma so your off the hook
M:Okay

Maneet took a breath of relief.

F:Why are smiling Sally
S:Because he is not talking about me na.
F:Yes he is, he is talking about all of us
S:No dummy he said friend but I am his grilfriend.

Geet pulled Sally's cheeks

G:She is cute and intelligent na.

Sally blushed while maan laughed.Maneet gave up to do anything this was a hopeless case.He had accepted he would marry Sally and if it was up to his mom and sally he would marry her today. Francessa and Ananya smacked there head.Yeh Sally bhi na.

M:Anyway mom this is Francessa.

Maan and Geet looked at Francessa. She was wearing a torn jean with loud music in her ears. You could her Avril music clearly outside her headphone.

G:Hi sweety
F:Hi aunty every kits
G:Huh
M:Mom she is asking how you are
G:I am fine sweety and how are you beta
F:Everything is cool aunty
M:Mom and this is Ananya

Ananya was a girl with hair till her shoulders. She had a weird mischievous glint. She had a lot of bags with her. But what catched Maan's attention was the bag in her hand which was moving.

M:Ananya why is you bag moving, whats in it

Ananya tried to look as innocnet as possible but the mischiev was cleary to seen in her eyes.

A: Oh it's nothing uncle.
M:Really then why is you bag moving and why are there holes in you bag
A:Because it needs to breath
M:What needs to breath
A:My puppy
M:Oh why don't you get him out.
A:No wo I will get him out when we reach your place or else he will get all grumpy. he likes to be in my bag. he is always in my bag when I go to school. But when you get him out he can and put him in again he can get really angry he doesn't like that
M:Well you don't have to put him in the bag again
A:He doesn't like cars he will get really sad so I have to. Sorry uncle
M:It's okay

maan wasn't fully convinced but he let it be.Geet started laughing out loud. Maan turned to geet and saw her reading twisty deewanigi.

M:What happend geet.
G:Maan this is to good. Wah kya haal kiya hai Geet neh creature kah too good and this vicky he is just brilant. You no Maan that creature is so dumb she even didn't now the primary colors😆 Mera tho stomach ache kara hai from all this laughing
M:Geet???
G:Yes Maan the girl's name is geet and her husband's name is Maan.
M:Intersting.
S:You now aunty yeh to kuch bhi nahi hai the book will get even much better when you read further it's full with twists.
G:Acha I can't wait to read more thank you beta what a lovelly gift.

Sally smiled.

M:Acha geet Read the rest latter we need to go. Guys you go sit in the car Me and Geet are coming.

Suprise link to twisty deewanigi:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2896583/mg-ff-twisty-deewangi-2-link-to-thread-3

Precap:Bechari Emma😆 why is geet crying??😭 Was Ananya telling the truth???😕

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