BECHAIN DILL a maaneet ff update on pg 51

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puja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: kamiya
totallyawesome update dear
want to know who is ms. hand
is she geet orsomeone-else & what happened in the past
continue soon
waiting

thanks,and who is ms handa ok that i also dont know let the story unfold we all we come to know

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puja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: maneetlover1
Gud gng pooja..who's that miss handa and y maan is so curious to knw her?waitng to knw mre

thanks,and maan is not crusies to know about ms hand its hole world and as she is owner of hc so maan had only aksed adi that who she is and about wht maan is crusious to know u all wil came to know it soon

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puja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

updating

anyone tere????

thanx for the lovey dovey comments😊

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music

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

no way to stop writing

now coming to that

Geet got a HC

while maan has a KC

interesting

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puja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

hi guys thanks alot for liking the update😃

a big thanks to mayapari😳

chapter 3

BECHAIN DILL

In flight from delhi to london the maan sing

khurana was sitting in his usual style thinking deeply

maan to himself

maan-

pata nahi aaj aisa kyu lag raha hai ki mai USSE milu ga...

par wo yaha kaise ho sakti hai????

pata nahi use mai yad hu bhi ya nahi...

nahi maan tujhe is bechain dill ko kabo main rakha na hoga

isme koi emotion ki jagha nahi hai

and again the face of MAAN is covered into the face of the gr8 MSK

who does not have any emotions...

as the flight landed in london airport and the maan sing khurana steped

out only to be welcomed by a sweet and a pleasurable air

it felt as if the air was also welcoming him

adi-

sir the media is wating for u

and they moved towards the exit of the airport to be surronded by

media,bodygaurds tried to save maan form media

media person-

mr. khurana what do u think "wil this time also the project

wil be given to kc"

another media person-

mr. khurana what is ur option for handa construction

till the time maan would have reacted and would ve been stopped by the media

he was stopped by a melodious laughter!!!!!

he turned to look at her but couldnt...

it seemed as if she was laughin on a joke wch her frnd would ve said

once inside the car...

he again turned to look at her...

but the car was already on its way to hotel

maan was now also was looking back and thinking about some thing

may be about the voice he heard

but he came out of his thought as the car stopped in front of the most

famous hotel of london and the staff of the

hotel opens the gate to welcome the maan sing khurana in the hotel

adi-

sir the meeting is after 1 hr till then u can freshen up

maan just nods and went toward his suit which was ready for him

as maan entered, he straight away went to the washroom and took out his

coat,shirt and vest and stood under the shower

As the water was flowing from his handsome face to the broad chest

only to be touched by his well built abs

it was like the water was blessed that it could touch his perfect greek god body

maan pushed his hair with his hand in frustration

it was like the water was also not helping him to calm his

BECHAIN DILL

he came out of the shower the white towel was hanging through his

perfect neck line toching his well tone chest (me thinking... haat dhak dhak...dreamy)

maan-ya kya hua hai mujhe

kyu aj yeh dil itna bechain ho raha hai,

nahi yeh sab mera waham hai

wo yaha nahi ho sakti aur agar hogi bhi to ab

mujhe koi farak nahi parta

i just need to work and my every illusion wil be vanished

and i wil go back to india

ya i wil return to india day after tmrw

and maan calls adi

maan-

adi we r going to india day after tmrw

adi -

sir we ve meetings lined up!!!!!!!

maan -

i dont want to listen any thing arrange the meeting back to back

but we r going to india day after tmrw

did u understand

adi-

ye..s.s..s s..s..sir

adi to himself

adi-

pata nahi maan sir ko achanak kya hua par ita na pata hai ki jarur

kuch honewala hai kuch joPHIR SE sab kuch badal dega

precap-dont know but the tofan is coming soon

author note -i hope this much long update wil satisfy u all

if u like then do press like button and pls comment it realy encourages

me to write more

ps:

i ve replied to all ur comments!!!

thanx for the lovely support...

loads of luv

puja😳

next part - pg 20

Edited by anvashakhurana - 13 years ago

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Reshu

@mayapari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

loved it 😊

awesome!!!!!

maan in shower...

woah...

m dreaming!!!!!!!

who is she!!!!

m getting more curious...

update soon😊

ll be waiting😃

Edited by mayapari - 13 years ago

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_Maaneet_

@_Maaneet_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

nice ff

loving the flow of the story

want to read more

continue soon

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Nivedithachand

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Loved it puja !!! aaahhh... am not able to handle the mystery building up in the story !!!! Lovely !!!

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sapna sharma

@kamiya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

awesome update dear

waiting for geet's entry

continue soon

waiting

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Mounika sharma

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Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#70

U again made me mre curious dear..akhir o hai koun jo maan ki dil ko bechen kar rahi hai..cnt soon

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