MAAN AUR GEET-DO JADUGAR UPDATED PT 17 PG 22

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rani1391

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

awsem update i just love this ff after jeevan sangini

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Deepa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

part 14
nice part...
so entertaining...
cont soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Bechare Behl and Behl, CV Raman ne tumhara FF pad liya hota to behosh ho Jaate...they don't even know that they wrote books on magic...

so Nakul took Maan to wizard market to buy things needed for Gurukul...

waiting for Maan-Geet meeting...

thanx for pm...

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maaneet0887

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Bechare Behl and Behl, CV Raman ne tumhara FF pad liya hota to behosh ho Jaate...they don't even know that they wrote books on magic...

BAHUT DIN HO GAYE THE TUMHAARI TAANG KHEECHNE KA PROGRAMME KYUN SHURU NAHI HUVA YEH SOCH RAHI THI LEKIN TUMNE MERI KHWAISH POORI KARDI😆

Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago

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tia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

wow mele maaneet kki fsht mulakaat hogi
bt jb milege toh kya hoga..
awsmmm updt
lvd it..

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sapna sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

thanks for the pm

awesome update loved it

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renjini263

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Awesome part dear!!

Loved it plzz cont soon

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maaneet0887

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

PART 15

Maan & Nakul went towards the underground passageway where the entrance for the Chandini Chowk magic branch.But firstly he stopped himself to have some breakfast.

'This is it,'said Nakul,coming to a halt, 'the Chudail restaurant.It's a famous place.'

It was a tiny,grubby-looking pub.If Nakul hadn't pointed it out,Maan wouldn't have noticed it was there.The people hurrying by didn't glance at it.Their eyes slid from the big book shop on one side to the record shop on the other as if they couldn't see the Chudail restaurant at all.In fact,Maan had the most peculiar feeling that only he & Nakul could see it.Before he could mention this,Nakul had steered him inside.

For a famous place,it was very dark & shabby.A few old women were sitting in a corner,drinking tiny glasses of sherry.One of the men was smoking a long pipe.A little man in a top hat was walking to the old barman,who was quite bald & looked like a gummy walnut.The low buzz of chatter stopped when they walked in.Everyone seemed to know Nakul;they waved & amiled at him, & the barman reached for a glass,saying, 'The usual,Nakul?'

'Can't Tom,I'm on gurukul's business,'said Nakul,clapping his great hand on Maan's shoulder & making Maan's knees buckle.

'Good lord,'said the barman,peering at Maan,'is this - can this be -?'
The Chudail restaurant had suddenly gone completely still & silent.

'Bless my soul,'whispered the old barman.'Maan Khurana ... what an honour.'

He hurried out from behind the bar,rushed towards Maan an seized his hand,tears in his eyes.

'Welcome back,Mr.Khurana,welcome back.'
Maan didn't know what to say.Everyone was looking at him.The old woman with the pipe was puffing on it without realising it had gone out.Nakul was beaming.
Then there was a great scraping of chairs and,next moment,Maan found himself shaking hands with everyone in the Chudail restaurant.
Maan couldn't believe it that he's known by this world for 10yrs but he don't know any of them.Maan felt restless seeing the people who was recognising him.He even met his Gurukul's one of the staff who teaches Defence against the dark arts subject.His name was Madhav Solanki.Maan felt uncomfortable seeing the people talking to him & Nakul felt this & said dragging him forward towards the backyard of the pub,"Told yeh,didn't I ?Told yeh u was famous.Even Professor Solanki was tremblin' ter meet yeh - mind u,he's usually tremblin'.'
'Is he always that nervous?'
'Oh yeah.Poor bloke.Brilliant mind.He was fine while he was studyin' outta books but then he took a yr off ter get some first - hand experience ... they say he met vampires in the black forest and there was a nasty bit o' trouble with a hag - never been the same since.Scared of the students,scared of his own subject - now,where's me umbrella?'
Vampires?Hags?Maan's head was swimming.Nakul,meanwhile,was counting bricks in the wall above the dustbin.
'Three up...two across...'he muttered.'Right,stand back,Maan.'
He tapped the wall 3 times with the point of his umbrella.The brick he had touched quivered - it wriggled - in the middle, a small hole appeared - it grew wider & wider - a second later they were facing an archway large enough even for Nakul,an archway onto a cobbed street which twisted & turned out of sight.
'Welcome,'said Nakul,'to Chandini Chowk magice branch.'
He grinned at Maan's amzement.They stepped thru the archway.Maan looked quickly over his shoulder & saw archway shrink instantly back into solid wall.
The sun shone brightly on a stack of cauldrons outside nearest shop.

CAULDRONS - ALL SIZES - COPPER,BRASS,PEWTER,SILVER - SELF STIRRING - COLLAPSIBLE SAID A SIGN HANGING OVER THEM.
'Yeah,u'll be needin' one.'said Nakul,'but we gotta get ur money first.'
Maan wished he had abt eight more eyes.He turned his head in every direction as they walked up the street,trying to look everything at once:the shops,the things outside them,the people doing the shopping.A plump woman outside an apothecary was shaking her head,saying 'Dragon liver,One hundred & seventy rupees an ounce,they're mad...'

A low soft hooting came from a dark shop with a sign saying Gaur Owl Emporium - Tawny,Screech,Barn,Brown & Snowy.Several boys of abt Maan's age had their noses pressed against window with broomsticks in it.'Look',maan heard one of them say,'the new neem two thousand - fastest ever -'There were shops selling robes,shops selling telescopes and strange silver instruments Maan had never seen before,windows stacked with barrels of bat spleens & eels eyes,tottering piles of spell books,quills & rolls of parchment,potion bottles,globes of the moon...

When he was seeing these around him excitedly then he bumped to someone the soft creature who fell on the floor.Maan saw the creature which turned to be a girl who was struggling to carry piles of books.Her hairs had covered her face who was collecting the books which was scattered on the floor.That girl held the piles of books which closed the enough amount of her face & two bright big brown hazel eyes were visible to him.

Before Maan say sorry to him that girl said,"Stupid,idiot,gadha...dekhe nahin chal sakthe the kya...!😡Maan who was mesmerised with those bright twinkling hazels didn't respond to her question while that girl was full on mode to give gaalis par gaalis to Maan.Maan couldn't understand why she was cursing under breath while he still was mesmerised with those twinkling bright hazels.He thought of drowning in those eyes which had the world's innocence.

First time he was dumbstruck seeing those eyes,Nakul observed this & muffled his laughter & was abt to argue but someone called the girl,"Geet...kitte hai tu...???"That girl said immediately walking towards the sound,"Aayi mamma...!"And she went from there like a storm.Maan who was still mesmerised with her magical eyes & voice saw the retreating back of hers with mouth hanging open.Nakul cleared the throat immediately to make Maan come to the present world.

Maan saw around him & composed himself immediately but thought abt the girl in his mind...kaun thi woh ladki...I thought of drowning myself in those eyes...why what is this feeling...!And he composed himself shrugging off his thoughts & saw around him once again.

Nakul said seeing Maan's expression,"Uska naam hai Geet...!!!"Maan saw him innocently while Nakul continued,"Wahi jo tumhe dhakka diya tha...!"Maan said without thiking,"Maine usse dhakka diya tha woh nahin...!"And closed his mouth with shock while Nakul laughed heartily but Maan's mind said,"Geet...uska naame hai Geet...nice name...!!!"Nakul was still resisting his laughter while Maan glared at him & asked,"Yeh Gringotts kitne door hai...!"Nakul said immediately,"Bas abhi aagaya...woh dekho...!!!"

They had reached a snowy-white building which towered over the other little shops.Standing beside its burnished bronze door wearing a uniform of scarlet & gold,was -
'Yeah,that's a goblin,'said Nakul quietly as they walked up the white stone steps towards him.The goblin was abt a head shorter than Maan.He had swarthy,clever face,a pointed beard amnd Maan noticed very long fingers and feet.He bowed as they walked inside.Now they were facing a second pair of doors,silver this time,with words engraved upon them:

Enter,stranger,but take heed
Of what awaits the sin of greed,
For those who take,but do not earn,
Must pay most dearly in their turn,
So if u seek beneath our floors
A treasure that was never urs,
Thief,u have been warned,beware
Of finding more than treasure there.

[Ajnabee ander jao lekin apne aankhon ko us par nahin daalna jis par tumhaara kio haq nahin...aur haan jo lof chor hai hum bataade ki jahan tumne chori ki hai woh kabhi tumhaara nahin ho saktha kyunki woh waapas yahan aa hi jaayega]

'like i said,yeh'd be mad ter try an' rob it,'said Nakul.

Precap-Maan going to buy a wand...😊

Note-Now guys I want long comments pls tell me that shall i continue this ff becoz some of them read it & won't comment.Am saying for them pls give me comments so that I can improve my writing & guys am serious pls give me ur opinion...if u don't want this ff then am ready to close this...I want ur opinions clearly & directly.😊

Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago