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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting for updatethanx for note
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Posted: 13 years ago
i lov dis ff...
it iz really a touching ff...expressing each emotion wonderfully...for that i would lik 2 giv a credit to its writer shoba...
as u already told in very begining of the ff dat " HATE IS DISGUISED FORM OF LOV "...wch iz perfectly fit in case of maan as after feeling betrayed it iz his emotions wch he expressed by punishing geet...now as a reader i m thinking abt d reaction of d geet...as after getting torchered on each night...it iz really difficult for any girl 2 trust once again on d person...even in some cases girls become terrified from d simple touch of a person who truely loves them...i m waitin 2 see d reaction of maan after d truth iz out...i dont want maan 2 leave geet in his guilt...hopin 2 read something interesting...
wel i m nt very gud in expressing myself...bt i lov dis ff so jst decided 2 give my point of view on this...
eagerly waiting 4 nxt upd...:)



Edited by shalinisaran89 - 13 years ago
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waiting for the next update..
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Waiting for an update :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for the Info. dear...
Plz clear this mist ASAP... Im going restless...
Plz update soon...
Waiting...😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsum part...
loved it

evry1 hate geet...feel bad 4 her
n wat happend 2 baby??hope baby ws fine

wating 4 truth to cumout
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 8

(the english translation is given in blue)

flashback continues...

Geet lost her patience and said' haan hoon main ek giri hui ladki. Nahi pasand mujhe aisi zindagi jaha muhje koi khushi nahi milthi. Hamesha se yeh nahi karna woh nahi karna taq jhuki hoon main. Apni zindagi apne mutabik jeena chahthi hoon. Samjhe aap aur aap hote kaun ho mujh par chilane ke liye.

(geet lost her patience with the continous accusations and said: yes m a low character girl. I don't like this life where I don't get my share of happiness. I m fed up of listening to everyone for syaing don't do this, don't do tat. I want to live my life on my terms. Do u understand and anyways you are no one to shout at me.)

Maan was hell angry on her words and once again he slapped her hard and holds her hair making her flinch in pain.

Maan: main kaun ho. Agar tum bhool juki ho tho main yaad diltha hoon Ms. Geet Handa ki main tumara pati hoon. Agar bhool juki ho tho main yaad diltha hoon ki tum ne apni yeh so called rangeen zindagi chupane ke liye mera istamaal kiya. Agar tum bhool juki ho tho main yaad diltha hoon ki tum ne mere dil ke jazzbaato se khela hai. Aur tum keh rahi ho ki main kaun hoon.

( whom m i. if you have forgotten than I will remind you tat m your husband. If you have forgotten than I will remind you tat to hide your so called life you used me. If you have forgotten than I will remind you tat you have played with my heart and feelings. And you say whom m i).

Geet was looking at him with teary eyes and maan was all the more holding her hair more tight giving her more physical pain. Geet could not believe tat maan would believe all this and he would actually harm her physically.

Maan: don't you dare look at me with those filthy eyes of yours. I will not melt again in them ad I have already done once. So keep your eyes down a you are standing in front of Maan Singh Khuranna the best ever business tycoon. Do you understand.

Geet: Janthi hoon ki main apne Maan ke samne nahi balki business tycoon Maan Singh Khuranna ke samne khadi hoon. Woh Maan Singh Khuranna jise mujhpar aankh bandh karke vishwas tha par inh kuch saboto ne unka Vishwas hila diya. Shayad meri galthi thi ki maine aap jaise insan mein vishwas karke apna maana aur pyar kiya.

( I know tat I m not standing in front of my Maan but business tycoon Maan Singh Khuranna. Tat Maan Singh Khuranna who believed in me with his closed eyes but these few so called proofs shattered his trust on me. But it was my mistake tat I trusted you and loved you).

Maan: vishwas ki baat hi mat karna geet. Tum kya jaano vishwas kya hota hai pyar kya hota. Tum tho sirf apna body pleasures dhoondti ho apne har ek shikar mein. Jab dil bhar aata hai unhe khichad ki tarah apni zindagi se bahar nikal deti ho. Agar galati se preganat bani tho apne bache ko abort karthi ho taki who tumari zindagi ka khata na bane. Haan na geet maine sach kaha. Yeh tho sirf teen abortons ke report hai par main vishwas se keh saktha hoon ki tumne kai aur aise abortion kiye hoge. Kya hai na aise ladki ka kya bharosa ki tum kitno ke saath sambandh banaye aur kitne saare abortions kiye. Yeh saare documents tho tumari aadhi zindagi ka sach hoga. So tell me geet wat else you did on my behind.

( Trust don't you even speak about it geet. Wat you know wat is trust and love. You only know one thing tat is your body pleasures and satisfaction. When you are satisfied with one you throw them out of your life like a shit. And if by mistake you get pregnant then u would abort it so tat the child will not come in your way. Did I say the truth geet. This reports are only fo three abortions but m sure tat there may be more. Actually a girl like you who keeps relations with many cant be trusted so there will be many cases of your aboe\rtions. This documenst only prove your half life. Tell me geet wat else you have done on my behind).

Geet: bas.. bas kijiye Maan. Bahut hua. Main chup chap hoon iska yeh matlab nahi ki aap jo kahe main sun lungi. Kya kiya hai maine. Yeh jhoothe sabuto se aap mujhe par ilzaam pe ilzaam laga rahe hai. Manthi hoon ki inh sab main main hoon aur mera naam hai par aap tho meri aankhe pandhene ka dava karthe hai na tho kya aap ko yahi sab dekhayi deta hai meri aankho me. Kya sach nahi padh sakthe hai aap.

( stop it maan just stop. Its enough. It does not mean tat m quite and I will ,isten to your accusations. Wat have I done. with thi s o called proofs you blame me. The photos show its me but don't you believe me as you always claimed to read my eyes like a open book. And wat do you see in my yes. Cant you see the truth.)

Maan: Sach kya hain yeh sabut bata rahe hai geet. Aur tumari inhi ankho ne mujhe har baar dhokha diya hai. Dhoka diya hai tumari inh ankhone. Haan main dava kartha tha ki main tumari anhke padh saktha tha par kaha pata tha mujhe ki tumari aankhe jhoot bol rahi hai. Tumari ankhe hi kyu tum khud hi ek jhoot ho. Apne aap ko bachane ke liye har baar mera ismaal kiya. Har kadam pe mujhe dhoka dekar apni rangeen zindagi jithi rahi. Ghinn aati hai mujhe apne aap par ki maine tum jaisi ladki se pyar liya , apni zindagi mein shamil kiya.

( The truth is all shown in this proofs geet. And your eyes always betrayed me. Ya I used to claim tat I can read your eyes but where I knew tat they always spoke lies. Why only your eyes you itself is a big lie geet. To save yourself you used me. Every step in your life you used me and betrayed me for your so called life. I feel ashame of myself for falling for a girl like you).

Geet had tears by listening to these harsh words from the man whom she loves more than herself. She could not believe tat maan would say such things to her. She said.

Geet: agar itni hi nafrat karthe ho mujhse tho shaadi kyu ki. Kyu ki meri jaisi ladki ke saath shaadi jo har din aur raat ek naye insan ke saath bitathi hai. Kyu ki mujhse shaadi jab aap janthe ho ki main pavitra nahi hoon. Kyu ki ek characterless ladki ke saath shaadi jisne pata nahi kitne mardo ke saath sambandh rakha aur najaane kitne abortions karaya. Kyu ki shaadi.

(if you hate me so much then why did you marry me. Why did you marry a girl like me who spends her day and night with a new man. Why did you marry a girl like me when you know tat she is not pure. Why did you marry a characterless girl like me who have relations with som many mens and god knows how many abortions she has done.)

Maan: shaadi yeh tho sirf shuruvat hai geet. Abhi tho bahut kuch dekhna baki hai tume. Kosthi rahogi tum ush pal ko jab tumne apni aankhe mujhpar dali. Apne aap par gussa karogi us pal ke liye jab tumne apni inhi andhose mujhe phasaya tha. Apni har ek galati ki sazza paoungi tum. Ab tak sirf Maan ka pyar dekha hai tumne ab Maan Singh Khuranna ki nafrat dekhogi. Bahut shauq hai na tume apni zindagi mein naya insan lane ka ab dekhta hoon ki tum ish ghar mein rehkar kitne aashiq banati ho. Tumara har ek pal maut se bhi jyada bhayanak kar unga. Maan Singh Khuranna ke dil se khelne ki aisi sazza dungi ki agle saath janam bhi nahi bhool paoungi. Apni maut ki bheek maango ki tum par woh bhi naseeb nahi hogi tume. Apne aap par gussa karongi ki kis mahnos gadi mein tumne mujhe apni zindagi mein layi par apne aap ko ish narak se mukt nahi kar paoungi.

(marriage this is only the start geet.and there is much more to see. You will blame your self for the time you laid your eyes on me. You will anger youself for making me fall for you with your beauty. You will pay for your every sin.you ahve only seen Maan's love but now you will face the wrath of MSK. You love to bring new mens in youtr life na but now i will se e how you do it by staying in this house. You every second will be like a death for you. You will ot forget this even in your next seven births. You will beg for your death but death will be ar away from you. You will live a living hell geet)

Geet: tho der kis baat ki hai Maan. Itni nafrat karte ho tho maar kyu nahi daal dete mujhe aap. Ek baar mein hi aapke badla pura ho jayenga. Aur aap jyad atkleef bhi nahi hogi.

( so why the wait maan just kill me. Why dont you kill me for once and all so tat you are free from all this.)

Maan: itni aasani se nahi geet. Tumari itni badi gunaah ki sazza itni aasan tho nahi karunga. Har pal tadpogi tum aur main tume aisi sazza dunga ki tumne sapne mein bhi nahi socha hoga.

(not so easily geet. You will pay slowly for your sins. You will pay for every second )

Geet: mazor hain Maan. Main bhi dekhna pasand karungi ki mera pyar sacha hai ya aapki yeh nafrat. Mere babaji janthe hain maan ki main sirf aapse pyar karthi hoon par shayad mere pyar mein hi khami thi ki aap mujh par vishwas nahi kar paye aur inh jhoote sabuto pe vishwas kiya. Nafrat hai mujhe apne aap par ki maine aap jaise khudgarz insan se pyar kiya.

( fine maan. I will also see tat my love wins or your hatred. My god knows maan tat i only loved you and no one else. But i think my love was not enough tat you did not trust me and believd this proofs. I hate myself for loving a person like yoy maan)

Maan could not take her words and pulled her close to himself by holding her hair and slammed his lips on his with full pressure. He bit her lips so harshly tat she flinched in pain as the blood oozed out of her lips but Maan was nowhere to listen. Geet tries pushing him away but maan holds her hair more tight and grabs her bu\y her waist. Geet was feeling suffocated and disgusted as she never thought tat Maan wtat ould force her like this. Even though they have kissed many times but it was love and this was mere anger. After a lonbg time Maan pushed her away smirking and tats when geet slapped him hard on his face.

Geet: how dare you. Aapki himmat kaise hui mujhe chune ki.

And she raised her hand once again to hit him but Maan caught it and twisted it behind her.

Maan: kyu yahi tho hai tumari zindagi. Isliye tho tum aye din apna partner badalti ho. Tho ab problem kaisi. Tumhe tho khush hone chahye ki Maan Singh Khuranna ne tum jaisi giri hui ladki ko kiss kiya. Ya tume mazaa nahi aaya. Agar ais ahi tho main phirse kar saktha hoon.

(why geet this is only your life na. Tats why you change your partners than why problem now. You should be happy tat MSK kissed a girl like you.ya did not you feel the happiness which your other partners give you. If its like tat than i dont mind kissing you again.

He turned her round facing him and kissed her again with force but this time geet was capable of pushing him away but this angered Maan more and he slapped her making her fall on the ground.

Maan: don't you dare geet. Tumari himmat kaisi hui mujhpar haath uttane ki. Tum shayad bhool rahi ho ki main tumara pati hoon. Oh main tho bhool gaya ki tume pati naam ka aarth bhi nahi pata tho tumare liye tumara aur ek boyfriend par yeh boyfriend sabse alag hai. Aur yeh yaad rakhna ki main tumare saath kuch bhi kar saktha hoon aur tum kuch nahi kar sakthi ho

(dont you dare geet. How dare you raise your hand on me. .i think you forgot tat m your husband. Oh i forgot att how will your know wat husband is. You only ahd boyfreinds. And dont forget tat i can do anything to you and you cant even stop me.)

Geet: janthi hoon maan ki tum mere pati ho aur kuch bhi kar sakthe ho. Aur maarne ke alva kar bi kya sakthe ho.

( i know maan tat you are my husband and you can do anything )

Maan was gettinh more and more irritatted with her talks which was adding to his anger and rose the demon inside him. He pulled her on top making her stand on her feet and threw her dupatta away. This made geet aware of her dress which has a deep cut infront giving a clear view of her clevage. She instantly put her haand covering her and tried to turn away when maan pulled her and removed her hands.

Maan: sharam aa rahi hai geet. Par tume kyu sharam aa rahi hai. Yeh tum pehli baar tho nahi kar raho ho na. Tho ab kyu chupa rahi ho. Main pehla insan tho nahi jo tume aisa dekh raha hoon. Tume thos iski aadat hai na.

( feeling shy geet but why. This is not the first time tat you are doing this.i m not the first man to see you like this)

Geet: bas kijiye maan. Aap ab apni hadh par kar rahe hai.

(stop it maan you are crossing your limits now)

Maan: meri hadh abi tak tumne dekhi kaha hai geet. Yeh tho bas shuruvaat hai.

( you have not seen my limits yet geet. This is only the start.

He went near her and pulled her more close holding her waist and pulled her into a rough kiss while his other hand untied her strings of the blouse making it loose. Geet got alert and tried her best to push him all away and finally succeeded in it. She hold her blouse while with other hand she pushed him away far and grabbed her duppata wrapping it around her body.

Geet: stop it maan you are lossing the little respect you have. You wil regret this maan.

Maan: regret dont you know geet tat after your betrayal is there anything left tat i wil regret it.

He moved closer to her and this time geet forced herself to save her dignity and slapped him on his face. Maan's anger now rose to the highest peak making him go wild and he pulled her duppata off her body and ripped her blouse into pieces making her stand in her bra on her upper body. Maan smirked looking at her and moved closer. Maan pushed her on the bed and lied on her while he pinned her hands above her head and tore off the bra. He kissed her leaving his rough teeth marks while geet struggling for getting out.

Geet: maan aap yeh galat kar rahe hai. Chod dijiye hume maan. Please.

She pushed him and this time maan was no where to listen to her and slapped her making her cry more and in one shot pulled her lehenga down along with her panty. Geet was all bare in front of him and tried moving away from him.

Geet: maan please dont do this maan. Please maan. I beg you. I swear maan i have not done anything i love only you and you maan.

Maan: why the hell are you getting sacred geet. This is not the first time tat you wil bedoing this. Or is it tat you think i will not satisfy ypou body desires. Even if its my first time dont worry geet i will be the best for you among all you bed mates.

Maan had removed all his clothes by now while geet was holding the duvet close to her and movingehind. Maan saw her and pulled er down holding her legs and removed the duvet.

Maan: this is only the start geet. You will pay for everything ypou hav done.

He pulled her and hovered over her kissing and bitting all over her body. Geet wringled in pain and cried out but maan was nowhere. Thedevil inside maan was all awake due to her betrayal and he wanted her to punish her. He left her upper body and settled himself on her womanhood while geet said.

Geet: maan please dont do this. Maan i will take all your punishment maan but please dont. Maan please i will go away from you.

Maan had alraedy entered her with a hard stroke making her cry load and maan was all way thrusting her with his manhood giving her pain. She tried to move but he holds her tight with his legs and hands.

Maan: dont you dare geet.. you will apy more if you..

Geet: maan dard ho raha hai please hod dijiye mujhe.

Maan: dard yeh tho tumara pehli baar nahi hai jo tumhe dard hoga. You should enjoy this and be happy that maan singh khuranna is having s*** with a flith like you.

Maan movedd inside her hard and strong making geet gasp in pain. All the while maan moved inside geet's tears were continuously flowing down her cheeks. She could not feel anything except the pain which maan was giving her physically. Maan did not leave her and continued mong in her.after sometime geet left struggling as she knew att she lost everything she had with her. Her love had made her impure by forcing himself on her or rather say rape her. After a long time maan finally left her and pushed her down on the floor.

Maan: this is your place geet. You dont deserve to sleep next to me on my bed. A flith like you deserve top be under my foot and hence forth this is your place.

Geet slowly gor up whimpping with pain which was both physical and mental. She could not stand on her feet due to the soreness and she moved slowwing for her dress when maan said.

Maan: dont you dress up geet. I hav enot yet finished. M just tired but i will require you later soon.

Geet: are you not satisfied with wat you ahve done maan. You have did the biggest sin of your life maan.

Maan: oh stop it geet. Dont lecture me and he pulled her again and forced him on her again. The whole night he forced her on her making et almost half dead. She lost all her ability to fight and cried silently for the fate.

Precap: flaskback continues

Sorry guys i know i have been late in updating but i was too busy with my work. I hope you will like this update as i was bit hurry and please pardon me with my mistakes.

So please i want more of likes and comments for this update. And as far as the truth to be revealed i will reveal it within my next few updates as after the flashback i will focus on the present. The next update will also focus on flashback and then i will give present updates.

So guys i would also thank you for all your love which you gave and will be waiting for more. Please even the silent readers do like it and comment... i will also appreciate if your criticism as it will help me to improve my story. If any question regarding the update please be free to ask and i will try my best to answer it.

Love you alll and thanks

Edited by sdlife19 - 13 years ago
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still i m unable to understand how a man cant understand that its the girl's first time or not its not at all justified that in anger u could hsve missed such a thing even a rapist would know that is it the girl's first yime or not
then how could he didnt understand
sorry dear but this thing is not digestible to me

but coing to the update it was awesome
cant wait to know who is the culprit

Edited by abinash079 - 13 years ago
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Its very painful...maaan will never be able to forgive him...plz bring the truth soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
feel sorry for geet. great going.

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