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Posted: 13 years ago

I know tat many will be ready to fire me for this update. I know tat I said will be giving short update par when I finished writing it I saw tat it was a very lenghthy one and I could not make it short as I wanted to stress on it.

Ya you will all be thinking tat why did I write this. Just have patience dearies. This part will focus on one of my upcoming update. This is very much related to the upcoming parts. And than you will iknow why I wrote this part.

Oh don't come to any conclusions after reading this abhi picture baki hai dosto. Yes I know tat many might think tat Annie willb e the main culprit but I would just say tat don't jump to any conclusions as there is more to it.

LOVED THE UPDATE

YOU HAVE SHOWN ANNIE TO BE A SPOILT GIRL AND SHE WILL HOLD A GRUDGE AGAINST GEET

MAAN NEEDS TO LEARN TO CONTROL HIS TEMPER

WAITING TO KNOW THE TRUTH




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Posted: 13 years ago
seems like maan's anger gets the worst of him n coz of that he makes wrong decisions...

continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
dnt wry we wont fir u
we'll set u on fire

nyways nyc up
n prcp 😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
feel really sorry for geet. arjuns gang members must have created da misunderstandings especially sameera.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 5

PRESENT

It was about as week since geet placed the abortion papers in his file and Maan after reacjhing to ofice was so busy tat he did not see the file. Geet was getting restless due to it. Her morning sickness was getting worst and she was feeling weak. She could not think straight and once again went to the hospital to get the the papers. She tried many times for getting his signatures but never succeeded. Maan would always treat her badly for no reasons. Whenever he would see her he would remember of her betrayal. After few days she got the news of her father being hospitalised. She soon rushed to the hospital only to see Maan, her mother, Arjun and Annie were besides mohinder. When they heard the door open they were shocked to see Geet com ing inside.

Mohinder: don't you come inside.

Geet: par papa.

Mohinder: don't you dare call me papa. You have no right to call us your family. Rano just tell her to from here. Id ont want to see her face.

Rano: don't you get it geet. We don't want to see your face. Just get ou from here.

Geet: maa.. please I want to?.

Arjun: not a word geet. You have already done wat you wanted but not anymore nd how many times we have to tell you tat we don't want to keep any relarion with you. So just get out.

Annie placed her hand slowly on Arjuns shoulder and said" just go geet. Why do you want to create more problems for my family. Just because of you papa is in this condition. Just out from here and don't dare to come back.

Geet was crying as she felt so helpless to see her father on hospital bed and she could not even see him properly. She tried to get in but was stopped by Rano again.

Rano: don't you dare geet. Aur kitna badnam karna chahthi ho hume. Aaj tumari wajah se yeh yaha hospital mein hain. Tumne jo bhi kiya uski sazza hum paa rahe hai. Kya kami thi humare pyar mein ki tum ish tarah ki harkat ki. Kabhi nhai socha tha ki Mohinder Handa ki beti Handa Khandaan ke liye badnaami ke alava kuch nahi degi. Inhone theek hi kiya jo tumhe Handa's se alag akr diya.

Mohinder ( slowly): Maan bete hum aapke karzdaar rahenge. Agar tum na hote tho pata nahi humari kya izzat rehti. Agar tum chahthe tho puri duniya ko pata dete ki geet kaisi ladki hai apr tumne aisa kuch nahi kiya. Yaha tak apne ghrawalo ko bhi sach nahi bataya. Humne bachane ke liye tumne aisi ladki se shaadi ki jo tumare layak kabhi nahi thi. Hume maf kardo beta, humari wajah se tumari zindagi barbaad ho gayi. Hum apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahi kar payenge.

Maan: aise mat kehye papa. Aap humse bade hai aur humara farz tha ki hum aapki izzat rakhe. Agar hume apni zindagi bhi deni padi tho hum de denge. Aur jo geet ne kiya uski sazza aap aur pura parivaar kyu bhog de. Rahi mere gharwalo ki baat tho unhe kabhi bhi sachayi ka pata nahi chalega. Who ab hi geet ko sachayi ki murat mante hai aur main unhe dukh aur dard nahi dena chahtha. Mera ek parivaar ishki wajah se dard mein hain aur ab apne dusre parivaar ko dard nahi dena chahthe. Tho aap aisi baatein karna bandh kijiye papa. Aapne mujhe aapna beta kaha hai tho beta hone ka farz nibha raha hoon.

Rano: janthe hai Maan ki aap apne wade se kabhi nahi mukare. Par hum sharam ke karan mare jaa rahe hai ki humari beti ne tumari zindagi barbaad ki. Agar hume pata hota ki yeh aisi nikalthi to hum ushe ushi din mar dalthe jab yeh paida hui thi..

Geet: maa??

Arjun: theek keh rahi hai maa. Humne tho kabhi sapne mein bhi nahi socha ki tum aisi nikalogi. Garv tha hume ki tum humari behan ho apr ab sharam aati hai tume handa kehthe hui?.

Mohinder: Maan bete hum aapka karz zindagi bar nahi uttar payenge. Agar agla janam hota hai tho hum bhagwan se yehi dua mangthe hai ki aisi beti kisiko na de aur aap jaisa beta har ek ke naseeb mein ho.

Mohinder cold not talk more and shis breadth got stuck. He was breadthless and arjun instantly called the doctor. Doctor came and stabilized him and said.

Doctor: I had already made it clear tat you should keep him away from all tensions. Its not good for him. This is just a mild attack but I wont give any gaurantee henceforthe tat he may not suffer from a bigger stroke. So its better tat you all keep him away from such things. Doctor said this and went away.

Rano: suna tumne. Aur kya baaki hai karna. Kyu chali aati ho apna yeh mahnus chehra lekar. Jo dukh aur dard diya woh kafi nahi hai ki ab inki jaan ki peeche padi hai. Agar kabhi scah mann se hume apna maana tha tho chali jaa yaha se aur phir kabhi apna chehra na dekhna.

Geet stood there like a lifeless body litening to the harsh word from her mother. The mother who used to get sacred just by seeing her tired but now she could only see the hatred in her eyes. Seeing her standing Maan got angry and pulled her out of the roomand dragged her o the parking area.

Maan: wat the hell do you think geet. Why did you come here? Don't you understand tat they don't need you and your so called sympathy. They have disowned you. Kyu chali aati ho unhe aur dukh dene ke liye. Bahut kuch saha hai unhone tumari wajah se. jee the jee maar dala tumhe hum sab ko. Kyu apni yeh sakal uta ke chali aati ho. Shukrar maanao geet ki Khuranna's abhi tak kuch nahi janthe aur nahi kuch jaan payenge.

Geet: kyu chupa rahe ho aap. Bata do sabko ki main kitni bachalan hoon. Mere khud ke maa, papa aur bhai ne mujhe dur kar diya phir aap kyu rakh rahe hai. Bata dijiye aapke parivaar ko ki geet kitni besharam hai.

Maan: itni aaasan sazza nahi donga geet. You have played with my love and you will pay for it every second of your life. I want to see you die the way I m geet. You will regret for playing with Maan Singh Khuranna.

Geet: uski ka darr hai maan. Nahi darr thi main apni sazza se maan par ush ankahi sazza se darr thi hoon jo aap paa rahe hai.

Maan: apni yeh baatein apne paas rako geet. Its does not affect me anymore. Just go from here geet. And he pushed geet away.

Geet went away with heavy heart. She was not sacred for her or her life but sacred for her family and Maan. She knew tat once when they will come to know the truth they will not be able to handle it. They will suffer for than wat they are suffering now. She knew tat Maan will never ever forgive himself for wat he has done to her ans silently prayed to god tat wat may come but don't let the truth come out for she wont be able to see them shattered. She would prefer to die before everyone knows tat she was never wrong.

Days passed by and yet she was not succeeded in getting Maan's signature. She could not take any more risk as she did not want her child to suffer. She knew tat Maan would never accept tat the baby is his. She finally forged his signature and reached the hospital. She submitted the abortion papers at the counter and was told to wait for fot her appointment outside the doctors cabin.

Geet ( ST). she slowly kept her hand on her stomach?. Main janthi hoon ki tum yehi soch rah ho ki main kaisi maa hoo jo apne hi bache ko duniya se aane se pehli maar na chahthi hai. Par main kya karu tumari maa main itni himmat nahi hai ki woh ab ladh sake. Maan tumhe kabhi apna nahi kahega. Nahi maanega ki tum unka ansh ho. Aur main nahi chahthi ki tum meri wajah se wahi sab kusch sehan karu jo main kar rahi hoon. M sory beta but I have to take this decision. I cant let you suffer because of me. She slowly wiped her tears and was lost in her thoughts when she heard cry. She slowly turned to see one woman who was pregnant and had one more girl baby who may be of 2-3 years old. She heard the lady talking to her girl.

Lady: beta aisa nahi karte. Aap janthe hai na ki humare andar aapka b\chota baby bhai hai. Tho phir app aisa karke unhe takleef de rahe hai na..

Baby: nahi maa. Main kaisle do apnec chotu ko da? da.. rd.. dard.. sorrlly maa.. sorrlly chotu.

Lady: its ok beta. Hum janthe hai app bahut pyari hai.

Geet kept looking at the baby and then athe lady who was had her hand on her stomach. The lady felt awkward with geet's stare and she spoke.

Lady: 8 va mahina hai. Aap maa banewli ho.. kitne mahine ho gaye.

Geet :main.. maaa?? mahine..

Lady: shayad pehla baby hai na. darro mat aisa hi hota hai pehli baar. Jab main pejhli baar maa bane wali thi main bhi aapki tarah darr thi. Darr lagtha tha ki main ish chotisi nanhi jaan ko kaise sambhal paungi. Par aisa kuch nahi hua. Jab pehli baar doctor ne mujhe ush chotisi nanhi jaan ko mera haatho mein diya? mujhe aisa laga ki main duniya ki ahr khushi mere daman main hai. Sach maanye yeh khushi har khushi se jyada hai. Jab pehli baar baby kick kartha hai na aisa laghtha hai ki shayad bhgawan ne yeh khushi sirf hume di hai.

The lady quickly kept geet's hand on her tummy and said.. dekho mere baby ne mujhe phir se kich kiya hai. Mehsoos karu ishe. Aisa lagtha hai ki yeh samay aise hi rukh jaye.

Geet felt some unknown tears flow down her eyes. She felt at peace. She did not knew why she was feeling happy by feeling the baby kivking tat lady. She felt a small amile on her lips. She moved her hand whereevr she could feel the baby. The lady was just looking at geet and said.

Lady: dekha maine kaha tha na ki aap khush ho jayegi. Dekho aap tho mere bache ko mehsoos karke itna khush hai par jab aapne bache ki mehsoos karogi tho kitna khush hogi. Bache ke aane se sab acha hojatha hai. Yeh khushi sirf naseeb walo ko milthi hai. Par na jane kyu log apne bache ko duniya main aane se pehle hi maar dalthe hain aur phir pachthathe hai. Kya fayda hai inh sabka jab aap apne hi haatho se apni duniya aur ek choti si jaan ko maar dalthe hai. I really feel pity for them but happy tat I have given birth to a new life and sure tat you will also feel the same. With this the lady left as the snurse had callad her.

Geet ahd tears by listening to her words. She knew tat wat the lady said was right.geet slowly kept her hand on her tummy and felt some unknown happiness with it. This was the first time she was feeling she felt as if there was a life inside her. Tears rolled down her cheeks.

Geet (ST): yeh m ain kya karne chali thi. Kaisi bhool sakthi hoon ki yeh mere Maan ki nisaani hai. kya tume ish duniya se dur kar sakthi hoon. Kaise apne Maan ke pyar ko khatam kar sakthi hoon. Jaanthi hoon Maan abhi gusse mein hain aur tumhe nahi apnayenge par main Maan ko kaise apne ansh se dur kar sakthi hoon. Kaisi unhe itni badi sazaa de sakthi hoon. Kaisei apne pyar ko apne haatho se khatam kar sakthi hoon. Nahi hoga main apne Maan ko itni badi sazza nahi de sakthi. Nahi cheen sakthi tume unhse, apne pyar ki nisaani ko apne haathos e nahi maar sakthi. Maan abhi gusse mein hai par jab unhe sachayi ka pata chalega woh tumse bahut pyar karega beta phir tum aur tumare dad ek team mein hokar apni mumma ko pareshan karenga. Haina., phir tho tume apni mumma ki koi zarrurat nahi hogi.. main janthi hoon tumara dad tumse bahut pyar karenga.. beta tum bhagwan se mang lena ki tumare dad ko jaldi se sachayi ka pata chale. Main unhe tumare baaremein batana chahthi hoon. Manoge na meri baat?

Geet had silent tears feeling all this. Ya she knew tat maan would love the baby more than her but she was fearing for her fate.. will her gate allow the truth to come out. She did not have any idea as towho , why and how did they do tat. who was behind their relation. Who wanted to separate her from her family and maan. But she was happy, happy tat her thieir symbol of love was with her even though it was not from love but it was maan part and she would do anything for it.

Tats it. So I hope all are happy tat geet did not abort the baby. Arre how can she after all its her maan's baby. How she can kill her love for maan. Please pardon me with my mistakes?

Most of them wanted to know why geet cant leave maan and go to her parents so I hope now tat I cleared tat why she cant go. I was feeling to cry while writing this and I hope I would bring the same emotions to you all..

Sorry I had decided to give update as to wat had happened but could not.. so may be my next upadate will come with tat. but cant say.. if I feel I will add some thing else.. oh yes don't worry maan will know about the baby soon and you will get a confrontation between geet and maan about it.. but cant say how and wat it will be?

Ok.. one question to all there.. would you like to know everything wat happened now or in parts like I have decided something so tat I will reveal only the reasons now and the main culprit will be shown later. So please would like to know your suggestions..

This is because I have decided something which I feel you all will like.. so please do give your answers?

No precap here?? please give your love in the form of likes and comments will be waiting for your sweet sweet comments..

Edited by sdlife19 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏me first
wowww👏
Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
they r suffering from bif MU
and who is behind their relationship
i guess some of their college friends
revel the whole past in a single part dear
so that we could know what happened

continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
yayyy da babh is alive !!!!!! cant wait to kno more abt da past ! loved it !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesooome.
Loved d upd.
Plz do reveal d truth in a single part.
It would be grt.
Do upd.soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
So sad wala update but awesome update...Loved it
Pls make Maan aware of Geet's pregnanacy soon!

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