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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
PROLOGUE WAS GOOD😊
CONTINUE SOON DEAR😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: 4komal4

update it...waiting



hey dear will update after my exams😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
Nice prologue.
Pls start soon.
Waiting for Part 1.
Thanx for pm dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats on the new ff...

nice prologue n CS...

continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats for new ff...
Nice prologue and cs dear...
Thanks for d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank u sooo much for supporting me in this ff also...love u all guys...plz keep supporting me and shower ur love in the form of comments and like..iam in dire need of them guys..


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guys i know everyone dont have time to leave comment but atleast press like..it just take a second and also comment if u can spend another second for me...guys i know this is the very first part but iam saying this from my experience of other ff's...i really feel low if i dont get atleast enough likes...😭😕
so plz try to like it atleast..
iam sorry for this bashan now will update soon...

love..
mona
Edited by maneetlover1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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EK AJAB PREM KAHAANI




[banner designed by sakshi di..thank u di..love u]

part-1

A young girl and a guy is busy in arranging files,laptops,lcd screen etc in conference room'

"thank god!everything is ready" she takes a relaxing sigh when she ensured that every thing is ready as meeting is gonna start in few minutes'

"but naina where is our hero??"asked aadi who saw that clients are heading towards the room..

"he said that he'll be there in few minutes...wait I'll try to call him again" said naina who is also tensed now..

"ofo..pick up maan" says when she don't find any response'

"he might be driving" says aadi..

"oh yeah..i forgot that our mr.perfect wont pick up his mobile while driving"says while brushing her hair in tension'

Finally the clients arrived..naina and aadi received them and they all are waiting for presentation'.

"sir as you know we are here to discuss about ***** (guys I don't know much about soft wares😭) software'and 'naina tries to manage till maan's arrival..

Client:ha I know miss..

"naina sir"

Client:ha miss.naina'we know that we are here for what..but where is the actual person who invented this software??i mean where is mr.maan singh khurana..

"iam here"says maan who just entered the conference hall with a smile in his face'



"omg I cant believe this..mr.maan singh khurana,the genius is late for the first time"says sasha'actually taunts..😡

"no sasha..maan singh khurana never fails in anything especially in being punchual..let me remind u..it's 10 now..so iam here in time'I think you people are little early to come..."maan says sarcastically👏'at the same time smiling at one of the client'

"so shall we start??" asks maan'

"of course young man we are waiting.."

Then maan starts his presentation'all the while his eyes were filled with confidence which irked sasha who always feels jealous of maan'.maan also sometimes smirked at her'.clients were totally impressed with the way maan handled the presentation'they finalised the deal with their company'

"wow maan..i must say'u are the best'.congrats young man..ur invention is successful and profitable too" says maan's boss with a smile'

"thank you sir"says maan where as his eyes filled with pride'

"iam thinking to throw a party on ur success..what do u say?" his boss asks maan while smiling'

"as you wish sir"says maan while smiling back at him'

He then left the place'.

"congratz maan'but I think it's little clumsy.."sasha tries to taunt him again😡'

But maan is maan..he always had his own ways to tame others'

"sasha you know what'some people cant grasp everything briskly..you know every one cant be maan singh khurana'so it happens..they may not understand or feel clumsy'but don't worry maan singh khurana will never ignore weak minded people..i'll always help them'so'. can I..?" asks maan while giving her a smirk'.




Maan's answer seemed like a tight slap to sasha..she left the room glaring at maan'

Naina and aadi wishes him for which maan just nods with a smile'

"are yar maan tumne toh kamal hi kar diya'aur us sasha kai shakal toh dekne layak tha"says aadi while giggling..naina and aadi shares hi-5

Maan:if u have finished ur masti then shall we go back to work?? Asks maan seriously'

Naina and aadi stopped giggling at a time and nodded irritatingly'

"be quick..hamare paas poora din nahi hai..we have to complete the work today..."saying so maan left the room with attitude with which he entered the room'

Naina:ufff'maan and his professionalism'nods her head in disbelief..

Aadi:ha yar'he is very kind but behaves like a villian when he is in office..

Naina:u forgot aadi'maan singh khurana needs everything perfect(mocks maan)

Both giggles and left the room to save themselves from more taunts'

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Pinky entered geet's cabin just to find her engrossed in work'

Pinky:hey geet'seems you are busy..

Geet:no pinky I was but I almost completed my work'

Pinky:waise kya kar rahi ho tum??

Geet:aur kya..script..unfortunately iam the creative head of this stupid channel and employee of khadoos boss who don't know anything about peace and love'jab dekho crime thrillers'huh! Isliye is stupid channel ki trp's low hai..they would have reached peak if he listen to me..i mean love stories'socho jab har jagah pyar hoti toh..everywhere we find peace'..love..how beautiful this word is..low connects two hearts two people'hayeee says dramatically'



"but no'he only wants crime..geet we want thrillers..think something new'create new..(mocks her boss)..kya create karu'.ek thriller jis mein sirf bhoot hoti hai aur kuch nahi.."

Pinky giggles while munching her favourite chips'

Geet:chalo..final touch de dethi is script ko warna khadoos aajayega aur muj par chillayega..geet script ready kyun nahi'plz pinky meri help karo na..

Pinky and geet soon got busy with their work'.

"geeet"

That's it both geet and pinky widened their eyes in shock




"geet script ready kyun nahi hai..."asks her boss..

"sir ready hai na..bilkul ready hai"says geet while smirking at him'

"that's better..come to me with ur script now"says and leaves the room..

Geet follows him while cursing'


Here at maan's office trio completed their work and it's the time to leave the office..so they are out finally'maan is also out of his professional mood and back as cool dude ..

Naina and aadi are talking something standing near aadi's bike and giggling'

Maan:wass up guys??kya chal raha hai?

Aadi:wait wait..first tell me in which mode are u??mr.maan singh khurana or maan'.asks sarcastically'

Maan glares at him'

Aadi:sorry dude just kidding..ek baat batao maan'tum office mein jaathe hi villian kyun ban jaathe ho..

Maan:because I want to be professional when iam in the office'I don't want to mix personal and professional life'u know...

"maan singh khurana wants perfect"says aadi and naina in unison and hi-fied each other'

Maan just smiles at him'

Aadi:chalo dude..i have to go'

Maan:where??

Aadi:apni girl friend se milne..i have to invite her to the party'says and leaves the place..

Maan:oh god!this aadi is so stupid'I think he'll spend his whole salary in this silly things'

Naina :thank god I don't have any love chakkar..also I don't want to be..iam bindaas boss'I'll enjoy my life as I want'anyways bye'

Maan:ab tum kaha jaa rahi ho?

Naina:sanjay se milne'

maan looks at her confusingly'"sanjay???i think it's ajay na.."

naina:oh common maan'u don't know me??ajay ka expiry date katam ho chuka hai..so now it's sanjay'bye..he's waiting'

maan:ufff'.this guys are impossible..anyways chalo maan..get ready to receive taunts from mama for skipping your lunch'

here geet is also getting ready to leave the office'and saw pinky tensed'

"what's the matter pinky??u look tensed..is everything ok"asks geet with concern..

"yar geet..kya karu mein..is khadoos ne muje itna kaam diya..i have to meet aadi now but this work"says pinky while munching chips'

"oho itni si baat..dont worry..u give it to me..i'll complete ur work..u go and enjoy with ur love'"

"are u sure??"asks pinky..

"ha..iam..pinky ye kaam toh hota rehta hai..u leave this and enjoy"says geet smiling at her'

Pinky hugs her tight and leaves the place'geet also leaves to home'

Precap:

maaneet's first meeting..


So how was it guys??? I hope u like it'if not sorry😭😭

Plz press LIKE and do COMMENT

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Love..

-mona😳

part2:page17

Edited by maneetlover1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sweety lovely 😊
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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As always different concept darling.Maan has same pride n confidence His office environment is bit different..Omg poor Geet n Pinky hey r bearing such a bad boss.Geet as always love love stories.So I hop for best for her especially.Maan's staff Naina is new entry other then we r used to b.Shasha not in his side .Waiting for more dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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MAAN IS SOO PROFESSIONAL IN HIS APPROACH
AND GEET IS A DIE HARD FAN OF ROMANCE

WHEN WILL THEY MEET

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