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Posted: 13 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: sweetgirls1

that was amazing... cant wait for more updates ...
plzz update soon...
thanx for pm..
maaneet r married n maan is a Casanova...??? i didnt get that.. plzz tel me that is he a Casanova because geet had left him or he is bad bad husband...
well awesome.. plzz update soon... me waiting,,,
do pm me...
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Hira


he is a casanova,...
hmm typ of arranged marriage
he loves her..but it says na we dnt recognise it
same is his case
he is typ of cheating his wife

the rest you will find out as stry unfolds
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: maaniqra

nice concept

continue soon


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Posted: 13 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: kamiya

lovely 😛

continue soon dear


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Posted: 13 years ago
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sure 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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A Life For You ..!!..

Part 1


Dr'. Dr''. Nurse'..someone help me

Reception'.. my wife' my wife'she is in labor'.she fainted'she is not talking to me

Where shall admit her..where is the OT''where'.

Where's Dr'..Demit'..where the hell is your staff'..

My wife is in danger demit..where is everyone

How can you all be such irresponsible

Am asking for a Dr here and you all giving me lame excuses' telling me where to go and where to fill forms and'. An impatient and frustrated husband banged the reception table

WHERE THE HELL IS DOCTOR'.an injured lion roared this time at his full volume possible

I AM ASKING YOU SOMETHING''??????

Calm down,' calm down Mr. Khurana they were just doing their job they didn't knew who you are so

I DON'T KNOW ANYTHING''MY WIFE, MY CHILD ARE MUCH MORE IMPORTANT THEN ANY DAMN THING IN THIS WORLD FOR ME RIGHT NOW'..

Calm down sir we are here now'calm down'.Dr tryn calm him down but seems all in vain

His angry red furious eyes said it all'.he instantly zipped his hand away from his shoulder

And checked the lifeless body lying in his hand

Dr checked her pulses and heartbeats

Ward boy bring stretchers and take her in operation theater right now'.she needs to be operated right now she is sinking'.

What do you mean by sinking'??? He asked as if he had seen some ghost'his head swinging in full wives

What'what do you mean' he stuttered

He clutched her body close to his'protecting her'keeping her safe in her embrace

Sir please we need to take her to operation theatre..ward boy asked stretching his arms to take her from his arms

He moved to his direction'the anger ,the rage, the fire in his eyes was enough to shiver the poor ward boy

Ward boy stepped back without any word

He kept his soul on the stretcher

And cersed her face with the back of his bleeding knuckles lovingly

Tumhe kuch nahi hoga geet'main hu na'kuch nahi hone doonga tumhe

Jab tak tumhara maan hai'tumhe kuch nahi hoga'.his eyes filled up with pain promise and remorse

Dr kept his hand on his shoulder'we can't say anything now sir,,'she is very weak we have already told you about the complication in her delivery

We can't say anything right now

We can even loose'

that was it'

he loosened his grip from geet and gripped the shivering doctors color

dare'.dare you say anything abot my geet'.MAAN'S GEET

samjhe no one'.no one has the right to say anything bad for her

no one can touch her..even god have to seek my permission

get it'.

Maan will turn the world upside down if anything

A scratch appears on my geet'.i'll not leave anything

Get it'.

His grip tightened suffocating doctor now'

Please sir it's suffocating me'please'.doctor begged the angry man in front of him

He jurked him and pointed finger towards him

Do whatever'.whatever it takes but I want my geet safe and sound in my hands'

Get it if anything happens to her'you will regret your existence'.beg death but I'll make sure you suffer in a live-in hell

Sir we are trying whatever we can'please understand us as well

I said if'.if anything'.any damn thing you'll regret

Mark it

Docs left without any delay or word they knew what power Maan Singh Khurana holds'what he is capable of'what kind of person he is

What can he do

He knew thw ruthless merciless Maan Singh Khurana who know no Sorry just revenge

And his words are more then what a mere word is

He mean what he say

They left withput any words'.

********************

A silent, emotionless, numb, frozen dead living person was sitting in the bench at a dark corner of hospital...outside OT waiting and waiting and waiting for doctors to tell him whats going inside...what...?????

THE MAAN SINGH KHURANA the rich spoilt Casanova...The whole soul owner of KHURANA INDUSTRIES who rules the world was sitting empty handed, breathless body and a soulless structure

HE rules everyone...he was the uncrowned king of this world...but today he had nothing...he was feeling empty inside

he remembered there first meeting...there marriage..it was an arrange marriage...they didn't even got time to know each other, everything was too fast they couldn't think what's going on

the first time he saw her in her house, when the came for her hand...dadi maa was super exited as she was her choice and a perfect badu for khurana khandanthey din't got time for each other...to know each otherit was all fixed by family and elderllythey just followed

to different people, different thinking, different attitudes, different ways of life...they were different in every espect...She was an angel...pure, naive, innocent, serene, apitone of beauty nothin less than a fairy dessended from heavenwhereas he was a hot most desirable hunk of town...a player, girls die for his one glimpse whereas he changes girls like he changes clothesa new day a new girl...a bigg spoilt brat


Precap: more on maan

Prev: Intro Next: Part 2

ohkiz now sorry for giving the shock on first post itslf😳

but again not my mistake

story plot

will wait for you jute and chuppals

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Posted: 13 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

Nice concept..

pls add me..


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: swetha10

nice concept...

looking forward to it..
continue soon


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Posted: 13 years ago
#38

thnxx n sure 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: honeygrape

nice concept...add me😊


thnxx n sure😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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agar geet ko kuch hua toh😡

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