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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kamiya

awesome n lovely update

wow that was just fantastic how you describe about geet's feeling
I loved it.
my poor geet😭

update soon dear


thnxu...
n geet she made me cry as well 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: swetha10

Awesome update..

awww poor geet..
continue soon


thnxu n geet 🤢
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

poor geet...


continue soon..

thnx for PM...


thnxu n yap updatin in a while 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Heart Of Heart
Part 15

They gave their best but nothing works

Whole day the poor soul was lost watching her life'enrapturing her soul with his essence

Filling her senses with his site

Just living and gathering her to live the entire next one month

And finally when nothing seems to work

They finally made their way back to home in a hope she'll feel better away


As soon as she enters house she just ran into her room oblivious to her surrounding her beings
she enters the room bang shutting it off and thumped on the ground next to her bed
and kept her head on the bed with arms squired round the bed

sobbing...not allowing any tear to fall...just silent cries...
Her closed eyes were making it difficult with each passing minute for her to dream her imaginary dream land
she just couldn't fathom
what...why...who...just simply when she fell love with him

she remembers the first time she saw him

a year back

it was her first day of 8th std

super excited about her new class


when pinky came running and panting

and asked her to come with her
geet...geet idhar aa tereko kuch dikhana hai...pinky dragged her towards the open classroom window
and made her look outside silently...
Wo dekh new bee...aowww he is soo hott na

tereko to har dusra ladka hot lagta hai...kuch new bta...geet still wasn't convinced to look around

ek baar dekh agar iske pyaar main naa padh gai to mera name bhi pinky nahi

yaa right...and here she moved her gaze just to get lost somewhere just to drift to dreamy fairytale...
prince charming...she muttered under her breath

dekha maine kaha tha tu bhi fida ho jaayegi see am already latuu...aoww he is my new crush you know...pinky said all chirpily

while geet was not in her conscious...she looked at him as if he was some forbidden god that was not allowed to watch by anyone

the first time she saw him...
Playing football with sid and adi...dribbling, climbing. Dodging

she followed his each and every move cautiously just drowned into him as if it was the most imp and most enjoyable work to do

kitna smart hai na...pinky suggested...

Geet just smile lost lost lost

dekhna yeh mera new bf banega...

and that was it...the poor little new love bird came back to reality and widened her eyes...kya...oye rukk tune usko ache se dekha bhi hai kya...
Dekh kitna ajib hai

tu kitni sundar har,,,tereko to koi bhi iss se bhi acha ladka mill jaayega

yeh to...isko chod...koi new boy dhund..

who suits you as well

he is not you type you know

jo bhi hai yaar mereko to yeh bahut hot laga...and wo meri taraf dekh bhi le kaafi...forget about being bf...pinky nibbled her chips drooling over maan

hmm...that was all she could utter

but from that day everyone came to know that geet doesn't find this nee bee as hot, she just thinks him as a normal guy

she smile in tears remembering the times he have bashed him in front of others just to keep him fully for hers

just her maan...

My maan...she whispers and a smile crept on her face and a lone tear at last made its was crawling down silently...
She wiped her tears but in vain a new tear made its way down...and then another but the smile remembering HER MAAN was still there
how could that get vanish even if she knew it was hurting
hurting deeply...with no regrets no emotions but how can that hurt get vanish in a thin air all of a sudden when she knew she will be separated...or she is...from her maan
not for a day or two

but for whole month
how will she survive this loneliness
how will she be able to get his glimpse for breathing

she smile at her destiny...knowing...she loves him but she also knew that her love will never be reciprocated the same way
will never be loved back
never

unknown to the world'unknown to anyone'unknown to herself she sat there silently sobbing

she don't even know when she dozed off in her slumber

remembering her maan'lost in her dreams

the place she find solace

dreams where she can be with her maan

sam came in late and the scene frightened her to core

geet sleeping half on floor half on bed..lost somewhere in her own dreamland

and she just came running near her gudia

gudia'gudia kyaa hua'

why you sleeping here

uutth na zaraa'

geet opened her droopy eyes just to witness sam in front of her she weekly smiled back to her and gestured that she is fine

but whom she wanted to fool

sam know her more than herself

not knowing what else to do she just hugged her tightly

am fine Sammy'sachi see am all well..geet consoled hugging her back

chal am feeling sleepy and this floor is damn tiring

mera back tut gaya'.geet pouted making smile a little at her idiot

both got up silently and made their way back to bed to again drift in their dreamland

Sam hugged her tight protecting her from the world outside

while Geet again lost in her Maan's dreams

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Morning sun brightened, birds singing, and the Handa house back to their chirpy mode

babaji yeh dekho fir se shuru ho gayi yeh toofaan mail...maa cribbed to babaji


kal kuch bol nahi rahi thi tab bhi tujhe prob tha...ab bole tab bhi...Papaji answered back from his newspaper while maa just pouted cutely

Mummaaa''make it soon please'am getting late

Mere class ka first day and you are making me run late'geet screamed on top of her voice


Precap: What is Geet upto now 😉


Prev:Part 14 Next:Part 16


sooo tell me hwz it

AND WHO ALL WANT PMz PLEASE SEND ME BUDDY REQUEST

I'LL NOT BE ABLE TO PM OTHERWISE


❤️ Luv Divzi

Edited by dazzlingdivz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
AW POOR GEET
SHE DOESNT KNOW HOW SHE WILL SURVIVE FOR A MONTH WITHOUT A GLIMPSE OF HIM
AND HE DOESNT EVEN KNOW HER

SHE DIDNT LET ANY OTHER GIRL COME NEAR HIM, AS HE WAS ALL HERS

HAS SHE FORGOTTEN THAT THE HOLIDAYS HAVE STARTED
Edited by punam2712 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
aww...day by day i m falling for geet..
Hw can she love him unconditionally..
when will maan recognize her mishty?
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Posted: 13 years ago
poor gal missing maan
is she going for summer class...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update yar
poor geet
lovely precap
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update

atleast make them to meet in holidays yaar ... it is too much emotional for geet

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