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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 2 :
Woooww Finallly they won yuppiee
kyu nahi jeet tey Geet Handa jo team me thi (Just like me loll)
and yeah the ice cream description was so yummiee
hey where she went so suddenly
hmmm 8 march, i guess woman's day ke function me as a chief guest lolll
Okhh please ab toh hero ki entry kar do
Thanks for Pm and update next part soon please
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 18mypride

nice part ,sudden what happend to geet...?


wo to nxt part main pata chalega na 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

Loved the part..

trios friendship were just awesum...
where did geet go?
maan kahan hain yaar?


hehe i too luv the trio
n maan ka entry n geet kaha gayi sab nxt part main 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: swetha10

Awesome update..

awww geet is so naughty.. poor dev...
hmm where did she go???
waiting for maan's entry..
continue soon


geet kaha gayi n maan ka entry both in dis part
n poor nahi chupa rustam dev
hehehe u'll find it in a few more parts😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Angelic_analyst

Prologue and Character Sketch
Woowww Divzzzyyy
Gosh i was literally praying if you will give us such a rocking story after every exam than...
chal jaaney dey I know student ka dard heheheh
hey that poem in Prologue was just Fab
I loved the character skecth so this is the story from teenage woowww
after muskan and Aiman you are going to rock haa
yup i know you will rock
okhhh so update next part soon
and yeah thanks for the PM


aowww luv u luv u luv u sooo vry much
hehe..dnt know will rok or not will try fully😃
n yup teenage story 😳

oyee dnt compare wid dose diggaj of FF😕
bow down to dem😃

n thnxxx missy fr lyking
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Posted: 13 years ago

thnxxx a lottt 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Angelic_analyst

Part 2 :
Woooww Finallly they won yuppiee
kyu nahi jeet tey Geet Handa jo team me thi (Just like me loll)
and yeah the ice cream description was so yummiee
hey where she went so suddenly
hmmm 8 march, i guess woman's day ke function me as a chief guest lolll
Okhh please ab toh hero ki entry kar do
Thanks for Pm and update next part soon please


hehehe i was also LOLing at both parts 😉
may b chief guest hi ho
apni geet hai jo suprr rocking 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago


Heart of Heart

Part 3


I need to go there

Bie'..and saying so he zoomed pass on her bicycle

Leaving extremely shocked dev n sam behind

Where.??? Dev asked

I don't know'sam shrugged her shoulders saying she don't know

And then with a pooping eyes asked what's the day today

8th march'kyu ?? Dev asked

I know where she is gone'leave her she'll be fine

Atleast drop me now...sam dragged a confused dev

zzzooommm...
A sleek smart red bike zoom pass the drooling girls




ufff...girl sighed

brakes...and here it stops right in front of a portico of Delhi club...

Smart, dashing, handsome hunk...dressed casually in black tight fit vests and baggy trackies with a black biker's jacket on

jumping off the bike smartly with a thrilling way...

Main to gayi...girl acted catching her lost breath

he removed his helmet smartly, sprinkling off the sweat from his ruffled hairs, shaking his head casually

placed the helmet on the bike head...passing the keys to gatekeeper

park at my place...he asked the gatekeeper politely

setting his wet hairs back smartly
he entered the premises to meet an angry and impatient couch

so here's my boy finally...what took you so long, match is just a few minutes away go get ready
how you always manage it at time

you know it sir...he smiled foolishly at the coach grabbing his kit from the coach
I am Maan S Khurana and time...you know it..saying so he left running to the boy's changing room

he will never change...
coach shook his head in disbelieve...maan do it soon just 15 mins for finale bell to call...please make it fast boy...couch shouted back at maan's disappearing figure of maan

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maan...
maannn...

MK'

MK'.
mmaaannn...maan...


Hall filled up with girls cheering hooting for maan

maan...
maannn...


And Here he comes to the stadium in boxers, tight vest, enhancing his building packs, sweating body...girls drooling, fantasizing, holding breaths

and here maan giving a damn to anyone of them...

yaar yeh ladka kisi ladki ko importance kyun nahi deta...
a girl complained
deta hai na bass apni friends ko...another answered
wahi problem hai...uski friend bann na itna mushkil hai girl friend to bhul hi jao tum..
Third sighed
attitude...first one smirks

naahhh...killing attitude...a voice with full of confidence and style completed

yaa right...the other girl fanned off the showing hands in air feeling offended

i know that babes..geet Handa's always right..
she winked walking pass the three droolers

who is she yaar...humesha MK ke matches main hoti hai but she is not from his group..who is she..
.the girl murmured to the first
I don't know yaar...she shrugged off her shoulders

maan...
MK...
Mk...
maan...


Cheers on full volume...hooting, whistling, cheering, bashings all at top of their lungs and here maan enters the ring with full confidence wearing gloves n face mask

babaji mehar karna...geet prayed

ting...
bell goes and match begins

the competitor trying punch him but are maan was smart enough to dodge it cleverly
1st punch dodged
2nd defended again
3rd somehow managed to poke his nose...knocking him down

maan...
she whispered holding her breath

A sudden unknown thrill passed his veins an excitement as if he heard something close to his heart
as if his heart was calling out for him
but failed to recognize what it is

please maan get up...please
Babaji maher...

she wished with closed eyes praying

Maan...she whispered again

and this time he got up...with full strength again
full vigor, power and confidence

ready to fight again but this time offensive...taking all the power in his hand...

and this time he punched and just one punch was enough to knock the opponent to floor with a bleeding nose
he fainted with just one stroke

and she caught her long lost breath smiling widely as if she found some treasure of world...

You did it...You did it again...she jumped excitedly up and down in her cute antic childish ways
I love you...I love you...I love you...I love you soo very much...
giving flying kisses she wished him smiling with her full heart

again from far...

love you...she said again in heart finally looking back taking his glimpse for the last time before moving out with all love possible in her eyes...congratulations
and finally disappeared like always

yes she never failed to come in any of the important event of maan...yaa she loves him...loves him more then anything...more than her ownself...more than anyone
but never showed it...scared of refusal never voiced it
In this whole world who knew this thing was just Sam...she knew it but everytime even she failed to recognize her best friends true love for him

and here are Mr. Dhak Dhak never knew the existence of this angel on earth. For him she never existed

yaa he feels something different everytime around him whenever she is around but he always fails to recognize what this change is
lost in his own world in his own thoughts...he always fails to understand his own surroundings
he didn't even knew a girl named geet is madly in love with him...for him his life was always with his family
including arman, rudra and kripa his childhood friends
he was happy in his ownself without realizing what his mere existence do to someone

she left again without any word...any sign...in thin air
wishing and praying for him from far...she was happy with just a glimpse of his love

maan was again declared the winner of Delhi club's boxing association

celebrations on air with the club members and friends

but again he left the party half eager to go reach back home...celebrate his day with the persons he love the most...his family

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dadi...dadi maa...

daaadddiii''''
Kaha ho aap..

Kyaa hua aa rahe hum beta ek min...dadi came down the steps...

I won it...I won it...I won it...
See I won it...he showed the trophy and certificated to dadi...twirling round dadi maa kissing her cheeks

your son again did it...bingo...he said with full happiness

wo to hona hi tha beta...aap hai to humaare pote
dadimaa patted his cheeks playfully

and Mr and Mrs. Khurana ka laayak bete...Maan Singh Khurana
haarne ka sawaal hi nahi

he replied proudly sitting calmly on the sofa putting his feet on table
relaxed...

wo to hai hi humara sabse pyaara pota'dadi maa kissed his cheeks

or humara kya ??? loud annoyed voice banged the hall

lo aa gaye aapke do monsters sambhalo ab inhe


Precap: so ready for party...maan and geet dono ka party hai yaar


Prev:Part 2 Next:Part 4

My other SS A Life For You 😳



😭😭sorrryyy fr late updte actly was having a severe allergy

still now all red yellow pink face

abhi to maine holi kheli b nahi fir yeh haal socho khel leti to kyaa hota😭😭

so atleast Mr. Hero ne entry dene ka soch lia

shukar baba ji ka😉

i hope i made it clear he dsnt know abt a girl called geet

is on this earth as well

she again came for his big day prayed n wished but again from far

not makin it obvious to him

AND WHO ALL WANT PMz PLEASE SEND ME BUDDY REQUEST

I'LL NOT BE ABLE TO PM OTHERWISE


❤️Luv Divzi

Edited by dazzlingdivz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
me first...
its too gud..
first u showed geets competition..
her entry was amazing..
now maans entry as a boxer..
wow both winners in same party...
maneet 2 meet..
will geet express her love like some crazy girls..
waiting..👏
Edited by valli22 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome dr!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
read all parts in one go...
hope maan realizes geets presence n importance!!!!!!!!!!!!!
n geet makes him realize...soon...
update fast...
ll be waiting...
plzzz pm me...

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