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Loved all d songs dear!!!!!!...
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I m trying to update but why my mind is not working I don know ?
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hey jass pls update na kitne time se updating ka status hai aur ab tak update nahi kiya pls update
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Originally posted by: Jass.KN

I m trying to update but why my mind is not working I don know ?

focus on maaneet ... not on likes or not on comments of others...
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hey jass pls update na kitne time se updating ka status hai aur ab tak update nahi kiya pls update



My mind is not working really Evey day I think I ll giv one update for all but at least I do nothing
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Originally posted by: maansee

focus on maaneet ... not on likes or not on comments of others...



Even I hva stopped to expect
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Jass.KN



Even I hva stopped to expect


so ab kya chinta hai... chal chak de phattey ... ho ja shru... jhaaa ja india forum per ... apne writing skill se... start your work ... and leave rest on babaji...


vo sab ko dekhtay hai...

come back with a beautiful update now... looking forward... for romantic jass😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maansee


so ab kya chinta hai... chal chak de phattey ... ho ja shru... jhaaa ja india forum per ... apne writing skill se... start your work ... and leave rest on babaji...


vo sab ko dekhtay hai...

come back with a beautiful update now... looking forward... for romantic jass😉


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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 68


outside coffee shop

Maan: Wait Geet Addi is coming. (he grabbed her hand)

Geet: Maan whats need to go there ?

She was confused why Maan was doing so when she is not interested to go there

Maan: Is it necessary that every thing should hav reason I wanna see Nanaji's haveli ..nothing else.(he shrugged shoulders)

After 20 minutes Addi came in a jeep.

Addi : He is Hari Ram n he ll take.. where u want to go.Main chalta hu apke sath .(Add grinned without reason )

Maan: Addi we ll go so no need to accompany us

Geet: But Maan u don know where to go (she interfered )

Maan: Geet where is ur common sense.If both of them come with us...even then u hav to tell how to reach(put hands on waist)

Geet: Ya that is rite.But Maan whats wrong if we take him with us.

Maan: Hari Ram ji thanx very much u can go. Jeep hotel ki he hai.We ll b back after our visit.(he smiled)

Hari Ram: Ji Sir.

Addi: Sir I think I should also go with u ...U r alone so u need some one with u .(voluntarily he put himself in front)

Maan: Haye rabba why u showered me with such fools.(he mumbles )

Geet: U said some thing Maan

Maan: No I said nothing ..Addi do what I asked. Nakul need u more than me.Jayo (he yelled)

Addi: Jata hu (much annoyed Addi said in same way ) pehle bulla letay hai fir bhaga detay hai...waise bhi we came first here n he is doing gunda gardi with us (he murmurs)

Maan: Huhhh (sighs) Lets go

He held Geet from hand n made her sit in jeep.Geet directed him where to go they rushed to haveli


Geet: Maan u know some times u seems suspicious to me (without looking at Maan Geet said)


Maan: Oh really ..ur company is responsible for it.As u r ? (he smirks )


Geet: U r taunting me (she pinched him on cheek)


Maan: I can't dare.But let me drive don do this


Geet: Thats better .Even I don wanna talk to a husband who makes fun of his wife (she folded arms putting her back straight)


Chirps of smile came to Maan's lips.He gav sideways look to Geet.Which she also noticed n burst in laughter


Maan: Geet if u can't b angry why u pretend.


Geet: Ur face is enough to make me laugh at.(she glared him )


Maan: Geet dekho panga mat lo mujhe se.


Geet: Main baad main dekhugi..first u look straight there is turn ahead n take left from there (she pinched on his cheek)


Maan: Geeettt (he screamed) Ghar Chalo fir tumko bhi dekh lunga (he wanna shout but there was busy place around so he controlled himself)


They reached Haveli around 6:30.Ya it was getting dark but not that much due to coming summer days become much longer.She was hesitating to go there Her feet were not allowing her.


Geet: Maan how we enter.Who ll let us go inside


Maan: Don worry Geet.Brij is in jail n I hav written permission from authorities.(he circled his arm around her waist)


Geet: When u did this (surprised)


Maan: I hav asked Addi for it.Our lawyer arranged every thing .He asked me that there ll b any one outside haveli to hand over keys to us.Don worry I m here (he kissed Geet on forehead )

Geet: Ya u r here (she hided her face in his chest)


Maan he never did any thing without reason.His utmost reason behind every thing was to make Geet n his family happy.But here if Geet didn't want to b here.Why he was doing so ?

Lawyer's assistant handed over keys to Maan n left. Maan looked at his watch.He was bit tensed but could not expressed in front of Geet


Maan: Geet lets go inside


Geet: Maan u r upto some thing But don wanna tell me


Maan: What Geet ? (he raised his brows )


Geet: No need to tell u what I said.But I m not gonna ask u as I know U r always rite (she cupped his face)


Maan: Bhrosa hai na mujh per


Geet: Babaji se jayada


Maan: So lets go inside


Once a place which was symbol of aristocracy.That was telling story how that got ruined .How where colors of life were there only dark colors of that bad epic were there.Geet started to cry bitterly.


Geet: Maan I don no why u take me here.But plz le chaliye yahan se


Maan: I ll take u for ever.Darkness of ur life gonna end Geet (he cupped her face)


Geet: What Maan ?


Maan: Wait ?


Maan convinced Geet to stay there for some time without asking any thing.More then three hours hav been passed wandering around.When Maan got a call.


Maan: Okey I m ready (he said in low tone on phone )


Geet: Who was there Maan?


Maan: Geet b ready Addi was there.Brij aa raha hai

Geet looked at Maan open eyed .What he said.He was waiting for Brij.


Geet: Brij aa raha hai ?


Maan: Ya he is coming to teach us lesson (He hugged Geet tightly )


So I think this update is for to make u remind what is there gonna happen.So wait n watch.I gonna update in on regular basis.


Hop u lik plz comment n hit tab


Lov


Jass


new readers plz add me if u want pm


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Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago


what is Maan upto...

why he have to come there and bring Geet with him also...

Geet got emotional seeing ruins of her paternal grandfather 's house...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...

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